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A great visit from Gordy. Perhaps he can meet Graham Gordy and Graham. It has a ring to it.
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And the use of "partake" when they actually mean "participate".
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Childish questions, and some answers
Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Childish questions, and some answers
A pacey chapter for sure. Damian is going to need a kindly ear and wise advice to deal with the hurt he is bound to feel over Jackie's behaviour and intentions. Graham remains an intriguing character. 🤔 -
A picture is worth a thousand words
Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in A picture is worth a thousand words
Jackie is the evil ice queen no doubt. As others have said, it is ironic that discovering his sexuality saved Ludo's ass. All too often, it is what blows up lives. -
The cop and his bulge again. I want sight of that 😆 A great day. Take as many as you can because the storm will come.
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Interesting times indeed. I do hope they're able to exonerate Ludo and Arthur. This is exciting.
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May you live in interesting times
Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in May you live in interesting times
I hope Jackie is ensured. -
The plot thickens and what Jackie's been up to could be anybody's guess at this point. The copper's bulge needs to be investigated.
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Son many good ideas. Let's see what Jackie's up to.
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Excellent description!
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Another amazing chapter. Damian certainly speaks his mind without a care in the world. I do hope he can maintain discretion once the whole things goes tits up.
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This was bound to happen. Despite Jackie's bad behaviour, it's not wise to have a child complicit to an affair. Still, I really like Ludo and Arthur.
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The trouble with real life
Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The trouble with real life
A fabulous chapter and I'm more hooked than ever. -
The trouble with real life
Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The trouble with real life
Hey @CincyKris, that makes perfect sense. The financial industry in London isnt called the "London Laundromat" for nothing. -
The trouble with real life
Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The trouble with real life
@Robert Hugill I'm laughing my arse off. That is exactly how I envisaged her and was going to say so in the comments. You've described her perfectly. I love Lesley already. -
This is enthralling. Once again, as @Robert Hugill has always done so well, intrigue in the midst of everyday, mundane life. Jackie is up to no good for sure, but Ludo needs to tidy things up a bit too, and he will need a steel backbone when the tidal wave hits.
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That hadn't crossed mind but the secrecy if it certainly points that way @drsawzall.
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I am loving this story and the protagonists are great. Ludo needs to stop the naked horseplay though. If divorce is on the horizon and this came to light, Damian would not be allowed to stay with his dad. Crossing the Lines really is exploring several lines and beautifully written as always.
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It certainly is an unequal marriage. Im sure Jackie is having a fling with German and doesn't want to settle into suburban domesticity. Ludo seems quite accepting of her selfish behaviour, perhaps compensating for his latent homosexuality which he senses but has not yet explored?
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That is exactly what I'm thinking. That is arrest material these days. So silly.
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Exile on Mustique! 😃
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Crossing the Line is a thought-provoking story of two normal men living two normal lives. When their lives cross and they become partners, it is in the mundane everyday activities that we take delight, as we see our potential selves mirrored in the story. A fantastically engaging tale.
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An Exhibition and an epilogue
Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in An Exhibition and an epilogue
What a though-provoking story of 2 normal blokes finding one another and making a life together. It is in the mundane that we so often find comfort and joy. I loved this. 😍 -
Heyward had a good run but it seems to be over , however, I'm fairly sure he will live a life if glorious freedom on a beach in a tax haven somewhere and will more than likely make a comeback at some stage.
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A very pleasing outcome for Vaughan and a bit of fun for mother and Dan. Let's see how deeply troubled Heyward's financial situation is.
