CincyKris
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If Keith was looking for closure by going "home", he was as unsuccessful as with his ex girlfriend. But, learning that it is possible to move on from unhappiness without traditional closure is a valuable lesson. He is currently living his best life, his old life will mean less and less as time moves on.
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Adam is completely discombobulated! Good! He needs a little discombobulation to shake things up. Kai will be good for him, just as much as Adam will be good for Kai. As for getting Megan (and the doc) to adhere to some rules, good luck!
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I'm going to play devil's advocate (or Andy's defense lawyer, wait is that redundant?), I'm not sure how prepared Andy could be with regards to papers, plans, etc. Let's remember that this is an adult that Andy rescued, as was stated by @Flip-Flop, he is not a pet. Matt should absolutely be involved in getting himself back on the grid. All Andy and Robert had to go on was Matt's first name and a grainy picture of a thin, dirty man. I should think that good food, comfortable clothes and shelter, and respect are the main requirements. Matt should have a say in everything else. He is free to make his own decisions, I would think that is as important as food, shelter, and clothing.
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I'm going to go back and read a few chapters of IHTT! I wonder if Kenji was just as vulnerable as River when he showed up at his door?
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This was an upbeat, happy chapter. We received a positive look at the important women in their lives, but it was still full of Vaughan's typical acerbic and funny critiques. I'm looking forward to the first meeting of Mother and Gran.
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I think @Summerabbacat must still be sleeping, this one is right up his alley!
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I'm reading some of your older stories on my lazy day off. This was delightful! I'm reading your current story, Sold into Freedom, and I couldn't help but laugh at the ad. Other than the bisexual and remuneration parts, Mr. Black could've written it!
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Susan seems to have a lot of figurative ghosts in her head, does she have some literal ghosts in Grandma's house, as well? I hope Makayla is ok with whiling away Covid time in a creepy old house, I don't think total isolation is a great idea for Susan.
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Full disclosure, I recently read this on Nifty. Very enjoyable, no spoilers from me. I like reading the comments here on GA.
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Wow, I think poor Nikki might need therapy living with those two! Or become a stand-up comedian, lots of material.
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It seems that both men are feeling the need to delve into their troubled pasts in order to leave them behind for good. Hopefully this will allow them to move fully into the present, and look forward to the future.
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This was a wonderful and hopeful ending to this part of the story.
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Careful, those authors are called AI's and they are here! Although hopefully not on GA!
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I agree this was a test, one which Jem passed. I have faith that Geron will let love win! Also I could use some of those pills.
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I really liked this contemplative chapter. You made Doreen a complete person, more than just a mom and wife. Andy is showing (yet again) what an empathetic person he really is. Ahmet is trying to escape his life with his Master. Unfortunately that is also his life with Matt. I wonder if Ahmet started out as property also. Matt is literally just living in the moment, his horrific past and unknown future are less important than the lentils in his new backpack.
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I feel more dread from a human ship than a Bzup-kind ship! Hopefully the arrival will be helpful, not destructive. After all, we assumed the worst with Mikulsa and he turned out ok.
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Phil finally has more than just hope (he didn't even have that in the first chapter), he's actually planning for the future.
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I wonder why Bzup's people developed the riders and planned to manipulate the orx in the first place. After so long coexisting secretly, why did they go on the offensive and risk their discovery. Are they running out of room? Why didn't they go to an unoccupied area and manipulate the indigenous wildlife on that continent? Was the orx a trial run?
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We don't know whether this was the moment that Kenji started to truly care for River as more than a scene partner, but this is first time he's showing it to River. It's a huge step forwards for both of them. They are giving each other a look behind the curtain. Rare for River, I bet it's just as rare for Kenji.
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That's around 59° for Americans. Sounds wonderful to me! I love how quickly Ollie is creating his new family. He draws people to him naturally. I bet his father was like this also.
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That was a very satisfying ending!
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It seems that the evolutionary defensive response when humans feel threatened might be shared with Bzup's people. There is a little "Lord of the Flies" in all of us. Our current social media fueled atmosphere is highlighting this unfortunate trait. I'm happy that this contentious behavior seems to be absent, and cooler heads are prevailing. I'm excited and anxious about meeting Bzup's people.
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I'm beginning to wonder if we are going off on a tangent regarding the unusual siffle behavior, or will it actually be relevant? I'll throw this out there, Nita earlier stated that Ana Barasesh was more concerned about terrestrial wildlife. She might already know about the reported behavior, even if nothing was previously investigated. Or it's a red herring!
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I'm happy for Greg and Len. I'm also encouraged by Heyward's proposal, even if I'm still wary of his intentions. I think that rather than thanking Donald Mitchell for their present circumstances, they should thank themselves. Mitchell may have instigated Greg's changes, but Greg and Len put in all the effort.
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That was just about perfect! I appreciate the Meeting before the break.
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