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"Happy Birthday, Nora"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Happy Birthday, Nora"
No way!๐๐...that right there is the biggest irony of ever....Malik's name in your mother tongue meaning little when himself is big in all ways..eh๐ -
Oh God....my heart broke for Tad. Basically he is a hustler only he gets his payment in form of a roof over his head!. It is stories like these that make me feel fortunate that even if my country is hell hole for queer folks, you will never find underage folks doing sex work..Sex work is outlawed to begin with... I don't know if am alone....but this chapter has just suddenly put Razi in a shady group for me..
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Thank God to hear there is possibility of him..I was worried ..he is in a very precarious position in that damn compound at the moment..
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A Punishment Fit for the Depraved
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Punishment Fit for the Depraved
Oh it was supposed to be a punishment of sorts...Lyn botched that....but not before letting that leather belt dance on Alexander's butt...just once๐๐.. On a more meta level...I think the punishment is sort of abstract...I think ,Like @LeeSA mentioned is alluding the years long hidden feelings Alexander has harboured for Lyn and even though they have reached an intimacy level still cannot bring to light...I like to believe that is the punishment...more like an emotional wringing of sorts -
It is good to see our Ukrainian Dmytro is still with us...He had gone and ghosted us for a while there ....That young man has certainly been through a wringer....eh
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Hopefully the coffee order was not bungled..๐๐
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"Happy Birthday, Nora"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Happy Birthday, Nora"
When I read that part about the dimensions ...I was shocked @Cane23...I was like that bloke has got a bright future below his waist๐๐...and then it got to me to thinking . How on earth do folks even handle that?..left me in awe of some folks' 'take up' talents๐ -
"Happy Birthday, Nora"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Happy Birthday, Nora"
Gerra outta here Sir๐๐๐ -
"Happy Birthday, Nora"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Happy Birthday, Nora"
You are not alone @FanLit..๐๐..Many times after reading his works am left feeling ' mentally and emotionally adrift'...Good thing I have a buddy of mine who I call Decipher,in my head of course, who helps me not get lost in the mire๐๐ -
Doc...you are a meanie๐๐...you drive a hard bargain ..let me have this win already๐
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"Happy Birthday, Nora"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Happy Birthday, Nora"
Thank you!..Had never read a Bi-themed story before...so basically this is my 'cherry popping' moment when it comes to that๐ -
"Happy Birthday, Nora"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Happy Birthday, Nora"
That's the beauty of it all .Our Esteemed author's works challenge us to look at things from a grey perspective ...there is almost never a black and white ..our job is to embrace the characters and their distinctive truths๐๐.. -
Haven't forgotten that Doc...but he had a devil on his shoulder in Jean
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For some reason, I seem to be the only one who doesn't think that PM is that dastardly..Sure he is a victim of circumstances he cannot control ..but I don't think he is as bad as others seem to judge him ..I could be wrong though
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That the thing about infidelity....it's an addiction that is hard to beat....if ever.
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Oh Jake...that is a terrible situation you find yourself in mate...that is one hell of an inextricable dilemma ...I almost feel sad for him.
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Please don't tempt @Krista๐๐๐...lest you wait for a decade to finish the story...Remember how long The Best Year took.
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"Happy Birthday, Nora"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Happy Birthday, Nora"
Oh dearie....test away already ๐ -
"Happy Birthday, Nora"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Happy Birthday, Nora"
That is like getting a child in a candy shop for @Cane23๐๐ -
"Happy Birthday, Nora"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Happy Birthday, Nora"
OMG!..that was rough on me. You ever had that feeling of de javu..like you know an explosion is imminent and you prepare yourself for it. But when it does go off, you are utterly unprepared?..That's what am going through..Like I suspected the last half of the chapter was going to happen but 'witnessing' it happen was something else. I felt umbrage on Nora's behalf for being blamed for Daniel's repression by Malik...That was unfair but knowing @CasualWanderer82 it must have a foundation somewhere which am sure we shall discover as we move along the journey. Malik was something else...there is being confident and then there is arrogance...his interaction with Daisy was jarring to say the least ....that was disrespectful even though it was steeped in truth ...that's just me though That being said ...this @CasualWanderer82 version of Anatomy of a Marriage promises to be an emotional wringer...and I for one am raring to go on this wonderful journey!!!! -
Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
The Toni Braxton was the topping on what was already a beautiful cake of comment๐๐ -
This chapter made me appreciate the fact that have never had the misfortune of having a panic attack.. You have captured the darkness that comes with panic attacks and that is something had never known about prior to this chapter. That being said...the Thompsons are something else,eh..I do not even know what word to use...Nick called them evil but I feel like they are worse ..if that is possible. If such people really exist , then God help us. I like that the Jonah situation was resolved quickly and and is a satisfactory manner.. Thank you!
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Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
I cackled like a hyena actually.....I always like it when the bitches are served mighty shade like Leonardo served to Veronica๐
