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Oh Killian....you never cease to amaze me...his penchant for placing himself in unsavoury situations is becoming taxing! That last scene is bad...Both Noah and Killian are to blame for whatever happens next!....I always wonder how Kane ,who is younger , always manages to come off as more social savvy and mature than Killian.
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Oh Dr...am hoping for the same too....that man is so nasty he needs to be pegged back a bit ....Unfortunately I don't think it's the case....Jake seems too immersed in the charm of Haven to think of something like that ..
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When you put it like that....I am going to go crazy waiting for the update notification😂
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They should have known better..
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Chapter 1: When darkness whispers!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: When darkness whispers!
I love me fantasy....it had been a while since you had served us a fantasy dish...Am so looking forward to it....The pacing and dialogue and so far are good...Looking toward to getting more.. Thank you! -
Brig.Gen Gallagher just climbed up the shit list..the funny thing is he is scared of Andrew Carter in the brief interaction we get up there..
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He was already showing Small nether region energy.. he was after all just recruited .😂
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What a mess!...Haven discovers that he is not as that big a deal as he thought of himself.
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It's on days like this, that I wish it was possible to release two chapters at a time....That was one hell of a chapter!..The Order means business ...and the CSIS seem Ill equiped to handle them.....I almost wish Enrico was around😂😂😂
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We do have a knack of self-sabotage..don't we?
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I know it seems so...but here in Uganda it happens...cliques are frowned up seriously😂..
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If I remember well Tommy is straight. And personally I feel it would be disgenious doing so. It would be like pandering to readers' whim.
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With social cohesion I meant that schools ensure that students mix irrespective of status and background..Let me give an example ..in most high school stories, we have jocks, cheerleaders, geeks, nerds e.t.c and they all keep to their groups,right?That is strictly forbidden here...when you are in school you are supposed to mix and interact with other students . Sure there are some who are popular but you don't find them forming clusters here..
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[Memory, Junior Year, November] – Queer Tension
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year, November] – Queer Tension
Eh..my!. Lots of angst in this chapter....and truth bombs....Quinn you are something else...Look forward to seeing you in the future.. Indirectly this is a Brad centric chapter in my opinion...We are given a glimpse of 'raw' Brad in that scuffle scene with Quinn...That is not a friend protecting another...that is a man being 'territorial'.... My favourite part is when Quinn asks him if Brad is Lyn's taste and his reply...it's revelatory even though it's delivered with the usual Brad jocular style.. I missed having Alexander making a physical appearance in this chapter..- 19 comments
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What Do You Call a Big Reveal?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What Do You Call a Big Reveal?
Oh ..you know we always going to give feedback...without even asking😂 -
What Do You Call a Big Reveal?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What Do You Call a Big Reveal?
That much is clear...I was responding to the part where @Laura S. Fox said some folks might not like that our Alexander has some negatives😂 -
What Do You Call a Big Reveal?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What Do You Call a Big Reveal?
Well..even saints have some micro flaws😂😂 -
It worked tremendously...so the DG is the overall boss of the CSIS?
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My country for all its flaws succeeded in getting two things right... social hierarchy/cliques and bullying are strictly forbidden. Social cohesion is the thing. When I read stories on here with high school setting and hear all those cliques and the damage they inflict on the students.I cannot help but feel sorry. That being said..Joel is our main protagonist but God is he prickly...I feel bad that he is not reconsidering taking up baseball.. On the other hand, am glad to see some bit of character growth in Colt . Thank you!
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After this chapter, I could not decide who is more scary of Andrew Carter and the DG..
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Share of those cuppas Sir😂
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Sometimes I wonder how on earth Killian has not had a fist in his face!..That lad can be prickly and pushy.. Then there is the irritating habit of withholding vital information from people who should be receiving that information in the first place. In the past books that has placed in precarious situations and one would hope he had learned by now.. That being said... this chapter raised more questions than answers indeed .At least I can agree with Killian on that Thank you!
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Huitième partie : La Relève
Seraph28 commented on W_L's story chapter in Huitième partie : La Relève
You are something else..!.I lack words to describe my state of mind after reading this chapter! The love story between these two men is just so beautiful and hard to describe in words.. One broken yet finds the strength to stand up.The other young yet old for his age.. this couple just does things to me😂 Thank you! -
When I was reading this chapter ,I remembered the mantra of House Martell from Game of Thrones..Unbowed, Unbent ,Unbroken ... I like to believe that mantra aptly describes the Carter household in this chapter.. It was such a beautiful solemn chapter..
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They do complement each other....I mean Tommy,Jacob and Weston ..
