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Good morning ... that added part was something else Sir....C'est magnifique!
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Chapter 9: The dinner to remember!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 9: The dinner to remember!
Nigerians don't excel at that ...😂 It's the eye roll and jeering that they ace @vanalas -
Chapter 9: The dinner to remember!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 9: The dinner to remember!
That's what I couldn't understand either...hence my comment about him...I hoped he would do the right thing ..stand up for himself...but no..Veronica has so much power over him- 35 comments
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Chapter 9: The dinner to remember!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 9: The dinner to remember!
Oh Veronica....you have really fucked up this time...People like Veronica never know when to stop and this time she just might have bitten off more than she can chew... Judging by the look in Leonardo's face...that was That being said ....Zayn is a wuss!...don't even get me started on Adrian...I had so much hope for you mate!.. Good to know you have not lost your touch @vanalas..that last bit of drama was typical you😂😂- 35 comments
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By why on earth Sir?😂😂..You know there is no such in this universe😂😂
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God!...you always are innovative in that context Sir😂
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Good morning.... Is it taken with cream...or that is a travesty?😂
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That Chapter 1 ending is the dashing of my hope that Sarah McDermot was not a mole...hmm...National Intelligence sucks!..I really wanted her to be clean...guess a boy doesn't always get what they want... This infiltration is even more insidious and thorough than what we saw in Carter's breach ...I almost feel scared for the CSIS and our protagonists..
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Here we go, Scheming in the dark...hopefully wild car chases...and a considerable amount of ass kicking! Bring it on Mr.Lydon!
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I have just woken up and this Prologue has elicited a 'murderous rage' in me...McLeod and Abernathy..I cannot wait for their downfall....Just asking ...why on earth would they get to have Scottish surnames/heritage😂...Scots are not that scheming and mercurial..or are they?😂
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In it for the long haul
Seraph28 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in In it for the long haul
No comment to add....just ..whoa... That was superb!..the Interactions between Matt/Graham and Dawn/Vince....the latter gives us an opportunity to see different facets of Vince...these two brothers have come a long way . -
You couldn't have stated it any better on that last bit Sir....I have experienced that many times
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Septième partie : Le Sorbet
Seraph28 commented on W_L's story chapter in Septième partie : Le Sorbet
With each update of this menu you outdo yourself😂...This week's update was everything and more...Drama..food...and romance..it's so good.. Thank you!.... Blessed upcoming new month to you! -
Many Happy returns to you Mr.Aterovis😂.... Thank you for the update!
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After the doozy that was last week's chapter ..it's good to see our protagonist at least talking and not bottling things up.... I like to believe that talk with Trace was productive...at least Joel got to let loose ..though If I were him would be careful with his liberal use of the curse words😂.Do not think Lady Celia would take that lightly.. I hold hope out that Joel will eventually come around to the idea of playing baseball...Davin was right ..you cannot just give up on something you love passionately just because the new place you are in does not fit right like the old one. Thank you @Krista
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Sometimes ,at least in fiction, the best option is always taking the plunge...In this case Trace is right. Coming out on his own terms means the pressure to conform is dealt with once and for all..and the secret of his being gay ceases being a millstone hanging around Joel's neck
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This was an epic blast. Thank you Sir!. Now I have questions which I know will be answered later ...I know it's hopeless and am alone...but am I the only one who holds a slight hope that Sarah is not really the mole😂
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This story subverts the chosen one trope really well ..In any other story...Josel/Zdain would have some sort of Deus ex machina to help them...say powers or something...In this story however ...our main protagonists are just two simple lads with angst as their main power😂...... Now I understand finally why Zal found Bartos interesting...indeed
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Chapter 8: The day after!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: The day after!
Well a lot of people ....that is a form of rape...he was undressed without his consent after being drugged. -
Oh PM...you colossally messed up mate....am guessing he is wishing he had not made that decision now😂😂....what is that thing .. hindsight is 20/20...that craven PM is having that moment 😂
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I like to believe you are not the only one who has entertained that theory of a fling going on between Luke and Brad.😂
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Eh...some folks really have colourful lives😂😂
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OMG!...this was a train wreck. I literally was frozen as though was in the same room when that attack happened...We humans are complex...we each come with our unique individual challenges..be it mental,physical or both... This among the best chapters in this story for me....it's that profound!
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Good to know you are finally hear you are considering a day off...You have to remember you are only human at the end of the day ..not a robot/AI...take a breather ...we want you in top form😂....Physically and mentally rested..that is
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Chapter 8: The day after!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: The day after!
Come so Sir....practice makes perfect......it's a chaotic romantic comedy sure...but it's fun..Sometimes fun is all we need ..
