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Chapter 4: The game continues
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: The game continues
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Chapter 4: The game continues
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: The game continues
I didn't ..I even revelled in his discomfort and hurt when was reading that scene ๐ -
If that's a a sneak peek.....then am all in .๐๐...am even going to nominate you for the best sneak peek๐๐
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Chapter 4: The game continues
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: The game continues
@vanalas has a penchant for writing characters like Harry..you know the obsessed gold digger ones๐๐ -
That is the most beautiful non-erotic love scene I have ever had the fortune of reading Mr.Lydon..That whole shower scene I mean.
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I like to believe the beauty lies in mystery when it comes to that part ..you and I know Kenny washed him..thoroughly . The not telling bit makes it more profound.Makes us appreciate the act of Kenny washing Steve all the more.
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Chapter 4: The game continues
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: The game continues
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She definitely not getting any mother of the year awards from you...that is certain....I do agree with you @LeeSA..Blanche is a narcissistic and selfish..if it is even possible to have that combo...Am sure she knows what she is doing is not good but she drags her son into her delusion..Am sure she has been doing that since Lyn was young .
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Imagine my surprise getting a notification for this when had seen the complete tag yesterday... Thank you!
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Warm body-ish?๐
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That right there is immense trauma... That Blanche is indeed a historical queen in 13th Century... I like to believe @Laura S. Foxwas going for Blanche DuBois from street car named Desire. She is her perfect mirror image in that she is insecure, sensitive ,her love life is a mess(giving her a bad reputation) and she is utterly deluded.
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Well ....you gave us a wonderful 'decade' of longing ,love and everything in between in-universe๐...I would be very remiss of me to not get enthusiastic..Mama would have my hide for it...if she found out ..that is ๐๐
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Chapter 4: The game continues
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: The game continues
I knew Harry pulled a disappearing act on Zayn when he got disinherited....that was expected... I swear to God imma sue if you dare make Zayn as irresolute as Jace..I will enter the story ....slap Zayn, drag him around like a ragdoll just so he can get some sense in that pretty head ..and then not to be outdone sue you for emotional imbalance๐๐๐- 25 comments
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You are not alone..it took me watching the movie to finally understand too
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Was thinking of whips too ๐ ๐
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I was taken back reading that closing scene...I could not help but for a moment feel for Jake๐....Like he thinks he is sleek but has no idea that Clay is something else...now can't wait for Chapter 3 to drop..eh
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What breed of cats though?..house cats like above.....or the big felines ..am talking tigers going at it ๐
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That intimate scene between Cash and Blake ...was not just coitus to me. That was...carthasis!... It was breaking down to mend so that the pieces are melded to fit well. It's reading that part that I finally understood what @Cane23 meant before when he said that @CasualWanderer82' s intimate moments are a plot device of its own๐๐๐....Guess I gotta pay my fees
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When was younger and green, I used to believe that whole first cut is the deepest thing is just a concept...this chapter and my experience has however shown there is a high degree of truth in that concept. When this book started ,I thought Daisy Bell was the MVP ...with this chapter am amending that ...It's tie for me. Cash Dalton and Daisy Bell are just something else. Cash is just something else....he loved Jackson when he did know what love was .Loved him when Jackson fell in love with Blake and left Willow Creek .Loves him 5 years later .. That is just so inspiring and beautiful I am almost breathless!....Like Cash practically lives Sonnet 116 by William Shakespeare and 1 corinthians 13:4-8... It takes someone so secure in himself and his love to do what Cash Dalton does...I.mean the Sunday night calls between Blake and Jackson ..It's that kind of selflessness that makes him so extraordinary to me. Thank you Casual for gifting us with these beautiful characters....I for one leave this tale enlightened and beautifully undone๐๐
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Oh my...that commute has to be the best indeed...no queues for the automobile or delays๐๐
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Somehow that picture doesn't stick...you being Emo I mean....Now Goth is something that sticks plenty though๐๐๐
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Damn...Brian that was a low blow๐๐... Mr .Lydon this was such a superb chapter ...you captured the clash of experience(Blake) and Youth(Steve) so beautifully....one is impulsive,showy and loud while the other is strategic,calm,subtle and quiet. That was not a chess game ..that was philosophy embodied๐๐ At this rate everyone is going to call out Steve for being an idiotic genius๐๐
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Welcome to the clique mate๐๐
