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Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
Our River would be singing with the angels... -
Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
I have never put him in that category...I called him a Dark horse... Anybody who puts Veronica in her place is a hero for me😂 -
Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
Spanking is not enough @Cane23...he needs to be seriously flogged.. like how dare he ask River to give him a moment ...only to let himself engage in another kiss ..that was beyond disrespect...if it's even possible -
Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
Welcome to the club @Okiegrad....I was seething ....and Zayn had the temerity to ask River to give him a min...only to go ahead and engage in a kiss ...that was just so ...cruel and disrespectful -
Cinquième partie : Le Poisson
Seraph28 commented on W_L's story chapter in Cinquième partie : Le Poisson
That's what I hinted at it...and remember he took 3 pills ..contrary to dosage...and added wine...that's extra stimulation ....I ,like you,worry it might become a problem -
Am telling you!😂
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Oh..thank you!
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It is not judgemental...it's actually true .That is why I asked that question before ..about the gay clubbing and hook up culture..@EK Stokes did give me a link to read about it
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Cinquième partie : Le Poisson
Seraph28 commented on W_L's story chapter in Cinquième partie : Le Poisson
Oh dear ..this has potential of ending in tears...one is broken, one is floundering..Hopefully they find middle ground -
I have run out of words...it's just so beautiful ... By the way Mr.Hugill if you do not mind me asking.. do the events of this story happen within the space of time in the title?..I ask because where I come from, we don't have summer so don't know how long that takes Thank you!
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Christina seems like she is going to be a hoot😂..I like her already ..
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Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Feelings on the edge. But whose?
MVP: Leonardo I liked how Leonardo burnt Veronica in this chapter...that was a gourmet serving of insults😂😂... Well...I hoped that Zayn would not be another copy of Jace...but guess that is not to be!...What a spineless twat!...what a wuss! Like really?...even Liana and Damian called him out on his bullshit...and he just goes and does the same thing ... I feel like commiting character murder right now😂..Harry and Zayn better not cross my path.- 29 comments
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Like West is a bitter drug for him and yet he cannot help wanting more draughts of that drug.😂
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Looks like Ròkus got a lot to think about.
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That was aggressive foreplay indeed ..I pity Will,Andrew et al who have to witness that on almost regular basis😂
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Thank you..let me check it out
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In this story Mr.Lydon attempts to answer what happens when an unstoppable force of chaos meets an immovable object of order. We are introduced to Steve, a young prodigy, who thrives on chaos and Kenny ,a jock, who is the epitome of order. What follows is beautiful chaos as two opposites try to find middle ground. The pacing , the humour in this piece and the multifaceted characters are captivating . This is a highly recommended piece of work for those who like a laugh!
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I hate it when reality happens😂😂
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How is he a disappointment to you @drpaladin?...Not to seem defensive but some folks just are not cut out for the life that Brian, the Hickey siblings and now Kenny thrive in . As for their romance ,I feel that it takes a while since we are not privy of how much time passes from when they first started seeing each other .
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That was ....freaking marvelous!..the Kenny/Steve assembling...Finally Steve can shut up ...even though it's momentarily 😂😂 On behalf of Kyle and people like us...safe is not boring...😂😂...we just like our stillness because it grounds us . Thank you for this tale Mr.Lydon!
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Like an Arthurian legend....minus the sword pulling of course...or is it the same😂😂😂
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Good to see our resident dwarf bad girl back ...missed her scheming😂..It also now connects her to Josel/Zdain.. Mirror of Dreams is better....it's more profound! Thank you!
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Now what has gone and got our resident bad boy all flustered?😂
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I am 3/4 of Peter....and the rest is Jared
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I knew it!..I figured you are a cross between Jared and Andrew too... Will is just so....'mystical'😂....Do you know the first time I read Breach I got a complex from reading Will .even though he doesn't feature prominently 😂
