Seraph28
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That's why she is aptly named Blanche like her movie counterpart....self-delusion is a default setting. Reading this chapter somewhat makes it clear why Lyn became the way he is...Putting stock into outward appearance..His mother instilled that in him.
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Imagine my surprise getting a notification for this when had seen the complete tag yesterday... Thank you!
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Warm body-ish?😂
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That right there is immense trauma... That Blanche is indeed a historical queen in 13th Century... I like to believe @Laura S. Foxwas going for Blanche DuBois from street car named Desire. She is her perfect mirror image in that she is insecure, sensitive ,her love life is a mess(giving her a bad reputation) and she is utterly deluded.
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Well ....you gave us a wonderful 'decade' of longing ,love and everything in between in-universe😂...I would be very remiss of me to not get enthusiastic..Mama would have my hide for it...if she found out ..that is 😂😂
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Chapter 4: The game continues
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: The game continues
I knew Harry pulled a disappearing act on Zayn when he got disinherited....that was expected... I swear to God imma sue if you dare make Zayn as irresolute as Jace..I will enter the story ....slap Zayn, drag him around like a ragdoll just so he can get some sense in that pretty head ..and then not to be outdone sue you for emotional imbalance😂😂😂- 25 comments
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You are not alone..it took me watching the movie to finally understand too
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Was thinking of whips too 😂 😂
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I was taken back reading that closing scene...I could not help but for a moment feel for Jake😂....Like he thinks he is sleek but has no idea that Clay is something else...now can't wait for Chapter 3 to drop..eh
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What breed of cats though?..house cats like above.....or the big felines ..am talking tigers going at it 😂
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That intimate scene between Cash and Blake ...was not just coitus to me. That was...carthasis!... It was breaking down to mend so that the pieces are melded to fit well. It's reading that part that I finally understood what @Cane23 meant before when he said that @CasualWanderer82' s intimate moments are a plot device of its own😂😂😂....Guess I gotta pay my fees
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When was younger and green, I used to believe that whole first cut is the deepest thing is just a concept...this chapter and my experience has however shown there is a high degree of truth in that concept. When this book started ,I thought Daisy Bell was the MVP ...with this chapter am amending that ...It's tie for me. Cash Dalton and Daisy Bell are just something else. Cash is just something else....he loved Jackson when he did know what love was .Loved him when Jackson fell in love with Blake and left Willow Creek .Loves him 5 years later .. That is just so inspiring and beautiful I am almost breathless!....Like Cash practically lives Sonnet 116 by William Shakespeare and 1 corinthians 13:4-8... It takes someone so secure in himself and his love to do what Cash Dalton does...I.mean the Sunday night calls between Blake and Jackson ..It's that kind of selflessness that makes him so extraordinary to me. Thank you Casual for gifting us with these beautiful characters....I for one leave this tale enlightened and beautifully undone😂😂
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Oh my...that commute has to be the best indeed...no queues for the automobile or delays😂😂
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Somehow that picture doesn't stick...you being Emo I mean....Now Goth is something that sticks plenty though😂😂😂
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Damn...Brian that was a low blow😂😂... Mr .Lydon this was such a superb chapter ...you captured the clash of experience(Blake) and Youth(Steve) so beautifully....one is impulsive,showy and loud while the other is strategic,calm,subtle and quiet. That was not a chess game ..that was philosophy embodied😂😂 At this rate everyone is going to call out Steve for being an idiotic genius😂😂
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Welcome to the clique mate😂😂
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Okay...what ever happened in this chapter is a doozy...damn!. The manipulation of events is just so scary.It makes one feel a chill knowing how this is happening even in real.life in some places. That being said..I like that Will is seeing through the smoke.. there is no free break after all...
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Definitely the latter...and it doesn't help you used this twat😂😂
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Woke up when the notification ping went off...lol...it was 5:35a.m here...That's when I knew .Either your coffee maker had malfunctioned or you had run out of coffee seeds to brew😂😂😂... Either way am satisfied with the offering
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Me too...and for some reason this chapter made Clay seems as bad as Haven..
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From the looks of that last scene...it seems Jake has no idea that he is in a game...Why else would Haven send such a message to Clay?
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God!...this is chaos waiting to explode. I thought I knew Jake but this chapter just disabused me of that notion.. It is like some sort of twisted game being played and from the looks of this chapter...Jake has no idea that he is a participant!
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I so definitely like that.... Now got me a question ..is there ever going to be a person to bring a Lydia a little closer to earth ?..she seems a little OP...would want her to get a lesson in humility too....😂😂
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Monday madness & Kjell is annoyed again
Seraph28 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Monday madness & Kjell is annoyed again
You are 'wicked' even entertaining the thought of having Venetia and Kjell @Summerabbacat😂😂...The mere thought of it brought on a sudden migraine for me😂- 13 comments
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Me tinks that boyo has rotten luck too...at the rate it's going the entire North Pole might thaw before he gets some physical loving going on😂😂😂
