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In this chapter, I almost wanted to have Trace be beatified as the Saint of Patience😂😂...That man is patient and showing a rarely seen brand of restraint. I think I would not be that patient...eh
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In our defence ..at least on the last part authors have different days on which they update and since stories have different tones/themes, it becomes easier to manage😂
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Oh Alexander...you are such a knight in the nude😂...as if I did not like our sexy aristocrat enough.. That being said....the last part of this chapter was a marvel.. so much going on there ...do not even know where to start...One thought just come to my mind!.....cracks are beginning to widen in Lyn's well built emotional walls and am all excited 😂
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Are most of the teachers in this school low-key homophobes.?..The new teacher is going to be a trouble maker for the gang..... Thank you for the update!
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Very much so ..now going to pray to the Literary Diety to grant us a boon ..that you will consistently update😂
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Good to have you back!... Hopefully you are sticking around this time😂
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Act III - No-one Mourns The Wicked
Seraph28 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - No-one Mourns The Wicked
Regardless..he is free from Valerius. In my mind he got his HEA the moment he resurrected...😂 -
Act III - No-one Mourns The Wicked
Seraph28 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - No-one Mourns The Wicked
Oh my !...I wanted a a slow fiery ending for Mother and Valerius...am glad my wish was fulfilled.. There was no way Valerius could be left to live...he was pesky vermin that would keep causing trouble .. Thank you!...Now am going to imagine our Renato out there in the world fighting for the helpless and just being the noble bad ass that he is 😂😂 -
Reading this chapter felt like saying goodbye to an old friend ... Am glad we have a new one starting . Thank you!
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OMG!...The Higgins household is a sanctuary of sorts..I like to believe I would thrive there....immensely 😂
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Act III - Hammer To Fall
Seraph28 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Hammer To Fall
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Act III - Hammer To Fall
Seraph28 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Hammer To Fall
This was a beautiful chapter!.Ray is even wiser than his age.Wise enough to understand that absolute power corrupts....eventually. Him choosing to share power was just so beautiful to read. One thing I missed about this chapter is our dark and smoldering Renato...He has been part of the action almost from the beginning...I like to imagine that he and Ray are family and would want them stay in the valley . Thank you! -
You got it covered ..then...I better not find out you have gone Cell Block Tango on the poor need though😂
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I believe this is the first time since Series 1 that you have used a cliff hanger!.now am going to go crazy waiting for next Thursday to get the resolution of that 😂.. Teenage angst is a real piece of work ..I would not go into Zdain and Josel's mindscapes at this point even if I were to be paid a fortune😂.. the struggle Josel is having when it comes to his feelings towards Zdain must be hard on the usually hot headed and impulsive teen. The fear of hoping that Josel might reciprocate his feelings must be mind crippling for Zdain ...Basically this chapter has everything going on like you mention at the end ...I almost forgot that this is an adventure fraught with danger and not a drama😂. I have some questions @Lupus. Thank you!
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Sometimes cheesy is good...
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Damn..someone is pretty unforgiving at the moment😂
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I know the role part was resolved long ago...but each time it pops around ..I cannot help having a fit of laughter. Hugo must have gone red as a tomato answering that question . The ' I bend' bit was just epic😂...Though I had imagined that our Alec is biased towards the 'on your back' stance😂😂 That being said it must have felt cathartic for Hugo to let that dam finally break.. I like to imagine 30 years passing yet you are physically the same can be daunting and torturous to one's soul Thank you!
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Whoa...something shiny and expensive ...that's a lot of options available😂😂😂....Am sure your person will get their act together
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Max and Arthur....so beautiful together..
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I do not even know the dynamics of baseball ..I do however struggle to get the point of the title too .I am hopefully by the end of the story we shall understand what it means
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If that shop burns down...how will I order for the reading table?😂😂
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Well...someone is definitely having a wild wild imagination😂
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God!...that was a painful death for Amalie. Being starved to death has to be one of the worst ways to go!
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It has been a pleasure seeing Billy grow up on the page. Am now curious is Billy based on someone you know?..I thought Henry was the best character in the series outside the big 5 (Hugo,Alec,Kate,Thomas and Sinjin)..but Billy is just so...good!. I had a feeling he was going to be fun reading when we encountered him in the previous chapter with Dottie..but this is just so epic! Thank you!
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[Memory, October, Sophomore Year] – Visceral Reaction
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, October, Sophomore Year] – Visceral Reaction
There is that annoying phrase...' the heart wants what it wants'...in this case Alexander wants Lyn...wit ,cluelessness and occasional stupidity😂- 29 comments
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