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Act III - Anything Goes
Seraph28 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Anything Goes
Timmy sacrificing himself would be too much ..he has never lived and just when he starts to live, taking away that seems unfair...but then again life in fiction has never been fair . -
Impudent brat indeed!๐
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Chapter 13: The Price of cheating.
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Price of cheating.
I agree...I was Team Jace...I thought Jace would realize he had messed up and tried to make amends ..but the last two chapters have seen him become a selfish man...He does love Noah..but he also wants to have Matteo..and then we get to this chapter ..It was the gaslighting Chris and Jace tried to pull on Noah...that was it for me...I was like Jace doesn't deserve Noah.... I wondered why you had not engaged much here ..now I finally understand -
Act III - Anything Goes
Seraph28 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Anything Goes
That's really good news ..now I can sleep knowing will be getting consistent notification alerts๐ -
Act III - Anything Goes
Seraph28 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Anything Goes
Does that mean we going to get consistent chapter updates?...Say at least an update or two every week?๐ -
This story reminds me of what I went through back in 2007 when was in boarding school..I had a similar Lyn-Brad dynamic ...only difference I got touch and play some ๐คญ and the Alexander was a Barbra instead...they ended up together...for a while anyway๐๐
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Chapter 13: The Price of cheating.
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Price of cheating.
I would be devastated as well....I don't think would forgive either. -
You know sometimes I feel like you are Alexander ..the way you don't rate Bradley's intelligence at all ๐๐
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That is why will always maintain that adulthood is a scam....like you have to be able to read and understand people...while children are just carefree..there is openness..no nuance
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So you think it was a test of sorts?like Brad was testing how far Lyn could go in that scene?
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Chapter 13: The Price of cheating.
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Price of cheating.
Good to have you back in these streets @Cane23....You have been greatly missed... I know...it would indeed be heartbreaking....but then again one can hope... You think Jace is redeemable?...That there is a way back to Noah or it's done for good...he has crossed the Rubicon -
Act III - Anything Goes
Seraph28 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Anything Goes
Come on!...Not another bloody cliff hanger when it's just getting interesting๐๐ -
Chapter 13: The Price of cheating.
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Price of cheating.
There is one thing you have mastered matey...the Art of the cliff hanger๐..Your stories have three spices.. 1...Relationships...all the different types..Loving, toxic, abusive ,family,friendship 2...Drama...you are the embodiment of drama...boy do you live for.it๐๐ 3...The Forewords and the cliff hangers....each time I read a story of yours it reminds me of Desperate Housewives..if you ever watched it...there was that Narrator at the beginning and the end of each episode...Mary Alice Young..well at least her spirit.. your cliff hangers and forewords have that vibe...that's why I keep coming back for more...am addicted! -
Well...you do indeed have a writing pattern in all your stories ..at least the ones I have read so far๐
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Thank goodness you cleared that...now we can indeed speculate theories....am sure some are in Camp#Quickie in the bathroom....others,like me, cannot for the world theorise so will remain at your mercy๐
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Oh you clocked him too? ๐...See how your reputation precedes you Sir..
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Now you see why I call @Cane23 ...Maestro?๐...he adds dimension that one would not have perceived whilst reading on their own
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I do not remember if it was you or @VBlew who hinted at Bradley having some sort of addiction(s) in the previous chapter...This chapter subtly hints he could be a heavy drinker Of course, Brad knew the answer. He wanted Lyn to keep his concern in mind..... Of course he is aware...Here it comes off as manipulative and also seeking validation .
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Do you have any idea how 'messed up' I get each time you 'tease' us with future events of this story?๐๐..Like the one above... It makes me wish would make time run fast such that the Saturdays speed up..like in a moment๐๐
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That dialogue up there pretty much finally gives us a little glimpse into Bradley's psyche . Insecurity and need for validation never been so outlined before!
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That was a good psychoanalysis of Nick ..I thought the same when was reading the scenes at the beginning of the chapter...For him to react like that, to think like that is an indication of deep seated issues that are not privy too..
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I don't know what I enjoy more ...the chapter updates or the Toni clips๐
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That Noah had the temerity to come to Nick and tell him they need to talk was an indication of his arrogance .I almost feel sorry for him...he might be a shitty lying boyfriend but no teen deserves to be treated as a pariah, however warranted it may be!
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Oh my!..that is bonkers!..really looking forward to.it
