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Chapter 26 Maybe I’ll Join You
Summerabbacat commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 26 Maybe I’ll Join You
My brain had to form multiple new neural pathways @drsawzall in an attempt to keep up with the fast pace of the story, and the conclusion resulted in the catastrophic destruction of several synapses which had slowly been burning out with my changing views on who did what to whom, how, why and when. Like Bohemian Rhapsody, a mish-mash of styles, tenuously held together with the end result being a masterpiece. Well done @JLynch. -
Sharing music & making plans
Summerabbacat commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Sharing music & making plans
She has that in common with "my" cat Missy, 12 years of age going on 3 and an outrageous "flirt". The only human she has ever met whom she did not like is my 9 year old niece, and for good reason. -
Vanessa, the cougar. LOL. The policeman nominated universally as the most trustworthy for Joshua to talk to is a wise choice. With Jordan and Cameron at his side and Vanessa providing moral support too, Joshua's task of revealing all will hopefully be a little easier. I hope there is enough evidence to enable the arrest of Joshua's Uncle and Aunt very quickly; gathering sufficient evidence to prosecute the police who protected them may take a little longer. I hope there is an investigation into Daniel's alleged murder, and if he is found dead, additional charges are brought against those who did it. As for his sister, it appears she cannot be charged with anything, but if Joshua does not want to see her, I hope she is legally prevented from seeing him if she desires to do so. Birkenhead Point takes me back. I have not been there for years @Paladin An enjoyable well-written chapter.
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Ryan needs to explain to Lynn and quickly that a marriage between her and Matthew is NEVER going to eventuate, and with Matthew's permission, which hopefully he will give, explain the reason why. And speaking of marriage, is it really necessary for Ryan and Mary to marry?
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Michael Gibson stated what I have observed on several occasions: "In my opinion, and of a few others in the industry, Devlin-Major is a beacon of hope. Your fresh ideas, the way you do business and how you genuinely care about your guests and, in my humble opinion, your staff, is to be applauded." His comment about Andrew and Ryan's treatment of Devlin-Major group staff in particular is one they should be applauded for. I assume the rescue was far more difficult than what Ryan indicated, but as stated by Andrew they would not have contemplated it if there was any real danger to Belle Catherine and her passengers. I was most amused when Andrew swore. I don't recall him doing this, at least not for a long time (he likely did when Ryan was kidnapped and tortured). I was pleased to note even he can be a bit grumpy in the early morning, particularly when woken by a mobile call. A dramatic chapter, very believably written @Andre Delport. Well done as usual.
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Sharing music & making plans
Summerabbacat commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Sharing music & making plans
It appears Graham's resolve to never "sell out" for economic gain is weakening a little as he faces the reality of no longer being gainfully employed at UAE. Simon may have some very useful connections, therefore maintaining a friendship with him is a sensible thing to do, and it is already delivering some opportunities for remuneration. Graham's friendship with Matt made a little ground with the possibility of Graham riding pillion behind Matt on a motorcycle he is contemplating buying. Perhaps the thought of Graham pressed firmly behind him may provoke Matt to contemplate such a purchase with a little more zeal. I look forward to the dinner with Graham and Bas to which Matt has been invited. Perhaps Bas will play matchmaker, or at least confirm to Graham if he believes Matt has an interest in him which is more than friendship. I have one burning question to ask @Robert Hugill. Is Moggie going to make an appearance at some point in time? She deserves her day in the sun, and I am sure she is far more attractive than the dreaded Venetia Murray. -
Chapter 25 He’s Gay! He’s Gay! He’s Gay!
Summerabbacat commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 25 He’s Gay! He’s Gay! He’s Gay!
Vern had the last laugh on everyone, the codicil granting him sole ownership of Ledecker Island post-dating the will which was the catalyst for murder and all manner of other illegal activities. I hope he does not waste too much on helping Ethel. Kara and Kat continue their Sapphic synchronisation. We already know Kara is bisexual, perhaps her Scandinavian snatch has proven a powerful aphrodisiac for the cock-craving Kat. CO and Thayer finally get it on, much to the disappointment of Cutie. I think she is barking up the wrong tree with Romey too. Perhaps she needs to cast her net further afield than Bay Lakes. Vern was perhaps sharper than he appeared to be. -
Thanksgiving at the Mason's and a Surprise
Summerabbacat commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Thanksgiving at the Mason's and a Surprise
A difficult juggling act; being honest with two boys who are starting to learn a little about sex, probably in the schoolyard. Does one lie or refuse to answer, or tell the truth, perhaps an abridged thereof. Shaun Jr and David are fortunate to have a father who likely remembers his own curiosities at their age and is not afraid to discuss what an age-appropriate response should resemble. The pending arrival of Aunt Carmela is likely to have a positive impact upon Domenico, particularly if she is not accompanied by Uncle Bob. If he does not attend might it be a sign that all is not well in their relationship. If so, has Uncle Bob been "stepping out" on Aunt Carmela? It will not surprise me if this is the case. Another enjoyable chapter @Lee Wilson, with Jake and Domenico potentially taking on a role as "mentors" for the former's cousins. Just what they tell Shaun Jr and David remains to be seen, and will they demonstrate anything for the boys. -
Chapter 24 Game, Set, Match
Summerabbacat commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 24 Game, Set, Match
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If you don't like the snow @Gary L you have my sympathy. Personally I hate it. We are into our 15th day of autumn in Sydney. Yesterday it was sunny and 30°C and today a mix of sunny and overcast and 35°C. It is 9.13pm and I am till in shorts and an Aussiebum nylon singlet.
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Passing forward the kindness. If I remember correctly that is a basic Christian principle too. Some may so that is not what has occurred, but putting aside the sex between Alec, Rick and Andy, it is essentially what has occurred. Alec and Rick have offered Andy shelter and food and asked for nothing in return. They have suggested he apply for a job at their place of employment and will no doubt put in a good word for him. Given both have become respected and valued employees in a short period of time themselves, I am certain their good word will be persuasive. A delightful story @chris191070.
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What a contrast. Hypocritical Harlan with his 2" cock, his enjoyment of man sex and his preaching about the evils of homosexuals, calling for them to be driven from society. Compare him to Alec's dad, a man with a basic education, widowed at a young age, single-handedly raising his son until he is killed in a workplace accident, a man who now apparently watches over his son and his son's new boyfriend from beyond the grave. I ask you, who is the better man? Alec and Rick seem to have landed on their feet again after a brief encounter with the underwhelming and overbearing Harlan. Marty and Tyler appear caring, even leaving the sex aside, the type of friends you want in your corner. Certainly, they are far more Christian in their treatment of their fellow man than Hellfire Harlan.
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Chapter 24 Game, Set, Match
Summerabbacat commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 24 Game, Set, Match
Who owns the island? Thurston and Lovey Howell? JR Ewing? Alexis Morel Carrington Colby Dexter Rowan? Elvis? A Kartrashian? Ten Ethyl? It seems Ethel will not be having the last laugh on Ten Ethyl after all. He may in fact have the last laugh on her. Ty(rone) and C(lifford) will make a handsome couple if that is @JLynch's intent. I am still thinking Stuart and Elliott are not one and the same. -
Chapter 23 Tomorrow (Today)
Summerabbacat commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 23 Tomorrow (Today)
Ozzie's allure has faded fast for me; he is nothing but a spoilt, pampered, entitled millennial princess. His looks will fade, his butt will sag and his butthole will end up the size of his ego. I think Elliott and Stuart might be twins. Unless the policeman who tested Elliott and Ozzie for gunpowder residue was completely incompetent, which is highly possible, then Elliott did not kill Cornish. The apparition of Mavis, enough to give a man a soft-on. What a wizened old biddy. I have just noticed the end is nigh with only three more chapters until the conclusion. A lot must happen in a very short timeframe @JLynch, but I guess the story has been on high-speed since it began. -
Chapter 22 That’s The Way She Goes
Summerabbacat commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 22 That’s The Way She Goes
Does Elliott have a doppleganger or maybe a twin? I was certain it was he who murdered Cornish, but if so, how did he have no gunpowder residue on his fingers/person? This is not the first time he has seemingly vanished into thin air either. Whilst I had some sympathy for Cornish's cause, he really only cared about himself and the effect the "Lakers" were having on him. I foolishly, it would seem, thought he may have been driven because of the damage to the environment or the pristine nature of the "old town", but clearly he did not give a fuck about the environment. He threw his unfinished bottle of beer into the lake and was going to blow up a boat in the lake with kerosene. My sympathy for him evaporated as quickly as it took him to die from what I thought was a bullet from the gun of Elliott Winehouse. Can he sing @JLynch? -
Chapter 21 I Think That’s About All I Can Take
Summerabbacat commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 21 I Think That’s About All I Can Take
Elliott is everywhere. Visiting Ethel with his "funny" smell (maybe a mixture of Freddie, cum and chocolate syrup) and "threatening" her in a subtle manner. I don't know who he is working for yet though. Vern's "simpleton" persona may just be an act, or he may be innocently providing information to Eckancar, information they are perhaps using for less than savoury purposes. Ozzie's "charm" is wearing thin for Brock at least. He is in "good" company, Cutie's "charm" is also wearing thin for Thayer. -
Chapter 20 Do Me A Favor
Summerabbacat commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 20 Do Me A Favor
The plot thickens, "players" coming and going, changing allegiances, trying new forms of blackmail, but in the end, all wanting a piece of the pie (in this case arse and/or Ledecker Island). The attitude of many, if it has a pulse fuck it, regardless of gender or social standing. The air must be heavy with pheromones, maybe it's all the moisture in the air from the lakes, it holds the scent longer. Forget Eau de toilette or eau de parfum, this town is heavily scented, saturated even with eau de chatte (pussy), eau de pénis and the most aphrodisiacal of all, eau de homme trou du cul (man butthole). Manbutt-scent, fire-red pussy fur, butt-plugged teen/men and a sapphic monsoon, the town has it all. A smorgasbord of culinary carnality. -
That damned pandemic has only "encouraged" people like James to become even more insular, introspective and detached, and this is not a criticism of him as I am very much like him, although I at least have the benefit of feline companionship and "therapy". Jonas continues the playful banter and flirting, and on this occasion, James even responded a little more proactively with some flirting, albeit very briefly, of his own. He is still unsure of Jonas' real motive(s) though. Jonas is the one who is going to have to "lay it on the line" as to what he wants from James as James is still battle-scarred from his divorce. A playful chapter @ChromedOutCortex, with James relaxing a little more, at times, in Jonas' company. It occurred to me in this chapter perhaps Jonas is not as confident as he presents; he may be waiting for a definite sign from James before suggesting something more than a friendship between the two. Whatever develops between the two, I am enjoying the leisurely pace at which they are progressing.
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“One more thing. That little blackmail scheme you got going with Fred? That’s done. And now.” Deck smirked. “Are you telling me Freddie has something to do with all of this horseshit?” “No he doesn’t. You keep him outta this.” “This don’t work out. I’ll fry him first, then you!” It's Elliott for sure. Elliott has got a "thing" for Freddie and promised him he would take care of Deck. Is the "thing" he has for Freddie a soft spot (unlikely), a hard spot, or a wet, cavernous, clacker. Kara and Kat, practising their best scissor sister moves. Will Kara be as enamoured with Kat's fire-red bush as many a male of the species has been? Kara, the greatest thing from Norway since Frida, but can she sing like Frida? Very unlikely Fritz likes pegging; being butt-fucked by a strap-on designed to delight Devin Franco, Michael Boston and Ozzie. Perhaps he can persuade both Kara and Kat to spit-roast him, that is after each has quenched their Sapphic thirst.
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Just ask the Village People @drsawzall. The boys need to join the navy. "If you like adventure Don't you wait to enter the recruiting office fast Don't you hesitate, there is no need to wait They're signing up new se(a)men fast" I don't for one moment believe Deck was upset at Louie Lee's passing @weinerdog. Deck was upset as he believes it may thwart his chances of ever owing Ledecker Island outright. Elliott has resigned his job at Morey's. Where has he gone I wonder. Is he working for the Mafia; the Highs and Lows; Clarkton Berg; Dinwiddie Partners; the Young Republicans; Sean Cody, Raging Stallion or Falcon Studios; or the FBI. Ethel is a cagey one too. Who is she in cahoots with? Hopefully not Moms For Liberty.
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Chapter 17 A Slight Complication
Summerabbacat commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 17 A Slight Complication
Financial strife and ill-fortune are raining down on Linnie Lee and Deck like shit over Washington D.C. Ledecker Island, once proudly "owned" by their father, Arthur, has become a pawn in a game between warring interests, from the Ledecker offspring, to a "questionable" new religious movement, to the Mafia, to a corrupt real estate development company (is the word corrupt even necessary in front of such a business) to a murderous, malicious law firm. The guy standing next to a car near Cornish's dock, tall and lanky. We have seen him before, he is not well known in town. I think it is Elliott. He scared the bejesus out of Cornish. One match and Cornish would have been toast. Burn baby burn, Disco Inferno. He would have gone down like a burning Ring Of Fire, Great Balls Of Fire indeed. I won't be surprised if Thayer gets it on with Romey before he ever gets it on with CO. -
Probing into Domenico's Psyche
Summerabbacat commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Probing into Domenico's Psyche
No, no, no, it was conducted "behind the scenes" @Lee Wilson. Rest assured @Al Norris, Domenico was properly evaluated when he first arrived, before Nurse "Clueless" asked him had his mother been contacted. -
Sleazy Solomon and gluttonous Gladys make a good pair, their "brazen wantonness" (well that is what they would have called their sexual trysts if others had engaged in such behaviour and broadcast it for the world to see) has cost them plenty. With Mary out of the picture, I dare say their sexual frenzy will continue unabated. In these circumstances the 'world' on the net will end up being Solomon and Gladys' proctologist and gynaecologist respectively.
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Brenda's introspection impressed me greatly. She was honest with herself to realise she may not have treated Neil as he deserved to be treated had she realised he was gay sooner because she had not lost the bitterness she bore Brian. She deserves a chance at being happy now too, so go, get out there with Daniel Collins and get it on. Follow Annie's advice, and if you look even one quarter as hot as Annie does in this video, you're on a sure thing, even if only for the night. Great chapter @Ronyx. The deterioration of Lucas' mental health matching his desperation for food and a sense of self-worth. His home life has not been conducive to being a happy, well-adjusted, caring teenager. I have a bad feeling he has not fallen as far as he is going to fall yet.
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A visit to the Hugillverse is a welcome joy at any time, but in these very dark times which we live in at present, the respite it offers cannot be underestimated. Toby's all-day birthday celebration was a smashing success, with all five teens seemingly greatly entertained by a visit to the Bronze Age. Gordon once again demonstrated what a chill 'stepdad' he will be; he keeps both Brian and Toby calm whenever they start to become anxious or flighty. I daresay Drew and Evie set a good example for him as a child and during his teen years. Some have mocked them for their "arty" ways and "bohemian" lifestyle, but they managed to nurture and raise a kind, caring, compassionate and emotionally generous man, one who invariably brings joy to those he interacts with. The way he demonstrates care and affection for Toby never ceases to amaze me. What a striking contrast to Jasper. No lanes to confuse me this time @Robert Hugill. A thought I have had on a number of occasions, particularly when reading these "cross over" stories of yours, is, do you ever find yourself momentarily thinking "which story am I in at the moment" and have a character in the wrong story? It happened to me a couple of times with Those Left Behind and Ralph: Breaking Free, moreso with the secondary characters like Morrie and Gordy (I got the two of them mixed up a few times).
