Modified Cub
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I feel for Nick and glad he sought help. As if the teen years aren't hard enough to navigate, he's had significant emotional trauma that he's not dealt with - which again as an angsty teen is weird since your emotional development is happening and you don't realize certain feelings are having an impact on your overall health.
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Glad that Simon arranged the cafe meeting to clear the air. I too thought that Eli was referring to Rowan as the "he" who died. Interesting to see if that's who it was or if that's too obvious?
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Nick has an amazing group of friends!!! That assembly felt uncomfortable for me and I'm just an innocent reader. Love this story!
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Elijah's a great guy - Simon's lucky to have him in his corner. Powerful chapter!
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First of all, you could never let me down. I enjoy your talent too much. I agree the nuanced interactions helped guide it along. Regardless of how the pace may seem, you're doing a great job of letting the story breathe.
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I love this story more with each new chapter! I think Noah is just horny and has had experience and wants to have that bond with Nick but at the same time he's too controlling and everyone sees through his facade. Nick needs to talk to Mr. G in confidence about the abuse Jack endures although he probably knows about some or all of it, or to his mother. Looking forward to what happens next!
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Fantastic chapter! I feel like something significant is going to happen at the falls and I can't wait to see what it is!
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Great chapter! I cried during the coming out scene - probably because I've been struggling with accepting my sexuality for way too long and am deciding when to come out to my family. But anyway, thoroughly enjoying the story!
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Great chapter! My heart aches for Joel. Love Trace & Celia - whatever the future holds for Joel, I could see them being a source of guidance and support for him. Interesting to see how the dynamic with Gavin/Davin/Colt fleshes out and where Joel decides to attend school.
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Love it! Sky's internal monologues are the best! The similes and metaphors are superb! Falling in love with this story more and more with each chapter!
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My Closet Had Better Lighting Than My Future
Modified Cub commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in My Closet Had Better Lighting Than My Future
This story is fresh and just... precious!!! Love Skylar's witty sarcasm, Lex's boldness, and the mom reminds me of Sheldon's mother! Stories like this would make fantastic TV series! -
I'm totally invested in Joel's story and can't wait for more! I adore your stories @Krista!!!
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Outstanding story! Loved all of it! Great job!!!
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Between Shadows and Light
Modified Cub commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Between Shadows and Light
Fantastic chapter! Each one is better than the previous! Loving it! -
Awe, nice chapter! Good to see Keith thawing out more and the proposal scene with Jim & Jon was real and honest and so sweet!
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"Hands In The Dark"
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Hands In The Dark"
This story is so... everything. I can't even properly express how much I love it! Daisy is a gem and I love all the southern dialect and the descriptions are chef's kiss. Thanks for another great chapter! -
You hooked me - definitely interesting to read the adventures of 3 instead of a singular focus. Sounds promising!
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Great start - looking forward to its development and Nick's experiences.
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Good for Cal!!!
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"The Midnight Rider"
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Midnight Rider"
Goodness, what a hot scene that was with the confrontation between Blake & Jackson! You have a true gift of writing that's so descriptive I feel like I'm in the environment you described. Absolutely loving this story! Bravo!- 26 comments
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Chapter 1: Learning the Routine
Modified Cub commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 1: Learning the Routine
Love the start! Looking forward to Eli's story and the gymnastics angle is a refreshing take on a sports romance. -
He Put on a Movie, and That Night Changed Everything.
Modified Cub commented on StoriesByMattVane's story chapter in He Put on a Movie, and That Night Changed Everything.
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I love this story and I hope Jonah gets through this period of angst with a bright future. This is the only Karen I've ever liked 😄
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A beautiful, sweet story. Thank you for sharing!
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What a beautiful chapter! I have so many thoughts but to be honest it would be hard to express properly so I'll just say thank you and that it was a powerfully expressed series of impactful events!
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