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The chemistry between the guys is off the charts and to be honest @KKirk I'm not sure how easy it would be to pen such a sizzling scene without needing to breathe because wow! Indeed, the director's cut or even a XXX version could eliminate debt worldwide!
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Nice chapter giving us insights into remote location filming and it sounds like Sky has plenty of eye candy. It will be interesting to see if our leading men can keep their libidos in check outside of filming.
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This chapter was romantic and has Sky anticipating the intimate moments ahead - those during filming and the quiet, serene nights like this one. I found it hilarious how Brant requested that David not let the sex scenes be filmed too far apart. Otherwise, they'll be grumpy. Duh, man. You had a taste of Sky's ass and now it's all you can think about! Really easygoing chapter!
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Nice scenic and arousing drive to the mountains for our guys! It was great to hear some of Brant's background and his activities from childhood along with a breakdown of his family. I sense lots of sexiness ahead!
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Chapter 11 - Ouroboros
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Ouroboros
Damn, I felt all kinds of emotions during this chapter! Good for James for finally having enough self-respect to stand up to Sam and for not letting him continue to demean him. It will be interesting to see what Sam's excuses will be for not being at the hospital and for not answering his phone, let alone for being fired and lying about it all this time. Seems like James will be forced to be there for his mom in many ways going forward. I, for one, hope she finally realizes the hurt and emotional damage the family inflicted on the oldest son. Great chapter! -
Sounds like Brant is falling hard! Already wanting Sky on his arm for the premiere?! Lots of probing questions to be answered for sure! The more I read this story, the more I really want to see this movie!
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Yes, yes, a hundred times YES!!! Beautiful balcony scene!
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The chemistry, sexual and non, definitely is evident between Brant and Sky and with all that making out and faux-fucking, who wouldn't be turned on? David did offer some sage advice though and I hope our guys heed those wise words. I'm up for more "wet" scenes and action to come!
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Chapter 10 - Hospital
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Hospital
I still have faith that James will reach his boiling point and go the f*** off on his ungrateful parents and asshole brother! Evan continues to show up for J in all the right ways, and I feel like they're in a good place and heading towards a full partnership situation.- 16 comments
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Outstanding! Way to initiate the action, Sky! Rach better not have heard - he's gonna be jealous!
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Chapter 9 - Home Life
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Home Life
Come on J! Just once - unload all the hurt, anger, and cruelty back at all 3 of them! And make sure Evan is right there beside you, holding your hand! -
Talk about awkward! It had to be a sight for Brodie to see his son like that even though he knew it would be happening! Definitely a sexy chapter although the part where Sky was educating the straight guys about penetrative shower sex was comical.
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Chapter 8 - In The Cold
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 8 - In The Cold
James has got to put his foot down at some point and stop being the family punching bag! Evan's really stepped up and has grown on me - he's a keeper!- 9 comments
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Damnit, James! I know she's your mother but stand up for yourself! And where oh where is the anointed golden son Sam? I really hope James lets them all have it! You just know his homophobic asshole dad is gonna say something cruel and demeaning! Great chapter @ChromedOutCortex because I was feeling all the emotions. Evan is a great guy.
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I certainly enjoyed the rehearsals of their upcoming scenes! I really wish this film was actually happening lol!
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I feel for James, still clinging on to hope, but it does explain why he is how he is. Even us readers can see Evan's growth. Glad James got his promotion! Great chapter!
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Uh oh, Brant's in trouuuuuuuuble lol! Great chapter and thanks for the eye candy!
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Chapter 27: After All These Years
Modified Cub commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 27: After All These Years
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Chapter 5 - Challenges
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Challenges
This is my favorite chapter so far. Yes, James was likely set up by his boss, but if he manages it as well as he has so far, a promotion seems likely. Evan seems to be putting in the effort to show James how much he's changed. I have high hopes for these guys. This is shaping up to be another wonderful romantic tale! Thanks @ChromedOutCortex! -
Love how comfortable Sky & Brant are becoming with each other! It's cool that Sky's dad will also appear in his first movie!
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Love Sky's parents! Their advice is invaluable to their son while also being lighthearted. I'm looking forward to the filming and the emotional and physical connection between Sky and Brant!
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Mark's love for Julian started long ago and it's nice to see that infatuation come to fruition for both of them. I too worry about the reaction from Julian's parents and how their image of Mark will change. Beautifully written, as always, Nuno!
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“The Malady of Hunger”
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in “The Malady of Hunger”
One of the most introspective stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading! The way Daniel's life unraveled was cruel somewhat yet necessary. I am not going to attempt to point out all of the things @redw18 did so brilliantly and with precision, I'm just going to offer my sincere thanks to you @CasualWanderer82 for writing and sharing such a powerful, deliciously erotic story that I devoured with pleasure. You truly have a gift for storytelling and erotica and I for one hope that you will continue to allow us fans to enjoy your offerings for many years to come. -
I agree with my friends' comments above. Their chemistry is going to be off-the-charts hot as they're already developing it in a totally safe space. It's intriguing that Brant insisted on meeting Sky's parents (although as well-known Hollywood actors with long careers, what up-and-coming superstar wouldn't) and with his insistence with the director, screenwriter, and casting director that Sky be the choice to be his co-star. I'm excited to see this story flesh itself out!
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You sure have a knack for writing steamy scenes! I'm totally invested now!
