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Chapter 56 – An Unusual Hataalii We didn’t drive all the way back to the target range this time. Instead, we took a slight detour and wound up at a very interesting location. The first thing I noticed was a very sturdy chain link fence that was about ten feet (3 m) high and had a rolling gate. This means that instead of gates that swing outward or inward, this gate had wheels that allowed it to slide back and forth to permit vehicles to enter. And behind the gate stood a large metal bu
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Growing up is difficult enough, but it's even harder when you feel different than everyone else. And it's even worse if you're ostracized by your peers, so what do you do? Do you become a recluse and shut yourself away, or do you try to find a purpose in your life - something that makes you feel better about yourself? Possibly you'll build confidence through your job or with a hobby that you're good at, and once that happens, maybe it gives you hope that things are getting better and your opinion of yourself begins to rise. At least there will be hope that your situation will improve, if and when that happens. This short story deals with these issues for one young man. You may even be able to relate to some of his feelings, but does he react to those feeling the same way you would under similar circumstances? I encourage you to read this intriguing story and learn how this young man's situation turns out.
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At the beginning of the story, I at first wondered if part of the reason that Terry was ostracized by the other boys might be because he gave off the acrid odors of the farm - maybe he didn't bathe properly, not washing his hair correctly, or maybe his clothes were laundered effectively. Although it's good for people to read, I hated to see him shut himself off completely and bury himself in his books. I was relieved when Terry seemed to be doing so well as a baker and gradually worked his way through the ranks as a chef until he was promoted to purchasing. I was hoping it would be enough to build his self confidence and he would be more outgoing and try to meet other gays. Maybe having taken the chance and meeting Gillette will prompt him to get out there and try to find someone else like Gillette. Anyway, Cole, I enjoy this story and will be looking for updated chapters about Terry.
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Not only was this story dated, which wasn't really a problem, but your characters were highly unusual. I might understand Millie's obsession with calling her mother at 6:00 every day, but even back then women were rebelling at unrealistic demands that were being placed on them. Second, if Mitch was so in love with Millie that he had trouble being parted from her, Why would he leave when she went to make a phone call? I could understand if he was upset with her, but I believe he would have waited and told her how he felt after the call ended, not just up and take off. I also found it problematic that Millie wouldn't have realized that since she'd attended her mother's funeral that there was no longer a need to call her mother any longer. And when you talked how Millie's mother and Mrs. Morton sounded alike when they spoke, I was beginning to think that Millie's mom had a dual personality and that's why she was always busy before six. Anyway, it was a sad story, no matter these unrealistic problems.
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antagonistic - Word of the Day - Mon Feb 17, 2025
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The word antagonistic comes from the Greek word antagonistēs, which means "opponent" or "competitor". Antagonistēs is derived from the words anti- ("against") and agonizesthai ("to contend for a prize"). + Antagonistic was first recorded in 1625–35. It comes from the word antagonist plus the suffix -ic. The word antagonistic was first used in English in the mid-1600s, as recorded in the writings of Ben Jonson. The word comes from the Latin word antagonisticus. The word antagonism comes from the French word antagonisme. The English word antagonist comes from the Greek ἀνταγωνιστής – antagonistēs, "opponent, competitor, villain, enemy, rival," which is derived from anti- ("against") and agonizesthai ("to contend for a prize"). The word antagonist is related to the word protagonist, which comes from the Greek word protagonistes, meaning "main actor in a play". It then came into the Late Latin (antagonsita), French (antagoniste), and English (antagonize). Protagonistes is made up of the words protos, meaning “first,” and agonistes, meaning “actor” or “competitor”. Antagonist and protagonist used in a sentence: "In the play, the villainous king is the clear antagonist who opposes the protagonist's quest for justice." Explanation: This sentence demonstrates how "antagonist" is used to describe the character who actively works against the main character in a story, highlighting its meaning as the opposing force. "In the play, the villainous king is the clear antagonist who opposes the protagonist's quest for justice." Explanation: This sentence demonstrates how "antagonist" is used to describe the character who actively works against the main character in a story, highlighting its meaning as the opposing force. -
Be careful what you wish for seems to also apply to be careful of what you desire when summoning a demon. This is a cleverly crafted and humorous story about two witches that are rivals and one wishes to destroy the other. How do this short story turn out? You'll have to read it to find the answer to that question.
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Cynus, I enjoyed your story. It was carefully crafted with the humor built in, but Druella wasn't as skilled as she thought. As far as the imp calling Druella Ms. P, It could have been so he was fulfilling the jobs of both times it was summoned. He killed Druella, while also killing Priscilla, or as the imp later turned the name into Ms. P. Clever way it fulfilled both tasks at once.
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Val weaves a wonderful tale of love and betrayal into this powerful and intense short story. She also throws a few curveballs along the way, just to keep everyone on their toes. Do yourself a favor and read this enchanting story that is more romantic than it may seem at first glance.
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Val, you sure do come up with some wonderful ideas for your stories. Thinking back upon all those who were found guilty of witchcraft at the Salem witch trials, along with the one that was 'pressed' to death, most, if not all, were probably innocent of the crime. Yet your story shows one truly guilty of witchcraft, or magic, managed to get away. Nicely done and I really enjoyed this story.
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"I'm not into dressing up like some animal and I'm not into that whole furry thing," Jason said, "but putting that aside, your group sounds quite interesting." "It is," Adam replied, "and we do a whole bunch of different things. We also have a great time together." "Then how does someone join this group?" "Well, you have to be invited by a member, but if you're interested, I can take care of that." "Yeah, sure. I'd like that a lot."
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A humorous and well-written Valentine's story in the distance reaches of the galaxy. This short story was a fun and quick read.
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Loved it, Celian. Very humorous and nicely done. Who says space exploration and defending the galaxy can't be fun?
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Luis is an extraordinary fireman looking for that special someone, and to his surprise, he might have found him in both a place and in someone he least expected. A lovely short story romance.
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Nice story, Chris. I hope Luis and Charlie 'live long and prosper' as a couple.
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An intriguing short-story with an interesting look at the life of a young gay man who'd grown up in Dutch country in Pennsylvania, and then moved to San Francisco. The author tells how the young man settles into the area and meets people, and how he 'survives' as a gay man. The story is compelling and takes many twists and turns as it winds its way to a conclusion, although I feel the author needs to clear that up, since it's a bit confusing. However, it was still a good read.
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I have a question about the final section. I'm assuming the Ben that Cheffy is referring to is Rueben, especially after his comment about the kitchen. I'm not sure if Reuben is living in Remington's old place, since they'd brought all of Reuben's clothes to his apartment during Remington's troubles, but I remember that Cheffy had never liked the flow in Remington's kitchen. However, since Cheffy said he'd had such a good time with the other guy that night, and seeing the other guy is also named Ben, I can't help but wonder which Ben Cheffy has spent the rest of his life with.
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@drsawzall Or had Joe been caught up in the F.B.I. sting and Cheffy's now alone as well?
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I've got a feeling that Ben is setting himself up for something he's not ready for.
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evocative - Word of the Day - Sun Feb 16, 2025
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Evocative comes from the Latin word evocare, which means to "call out" or "summon" to evocativus. Think of a batch of cookies summoning a memory from your childhood. To summon something you need a voice, and indeed, the Latin word for voice is vocare. Other related words include the noun vocation, which means "a calling." Entered English is mid 17th century as evoke and evocative. According to the Oxford English Dictionary, the first known use of "evocative" in English was around the mid-17th century, with the earliest recorded instance appearing in 1657, in a translation by Richard Tomlinson. evocative is a borrowing from Latin. Examples of evocative: that smell is evocative of my childhood" "his words were highly evocative" "the building's cramped interiors are highly evocative of past centuries" -
Having a secret that you can't reveal can be very excruciating for the person keeping the secret. And when a battle to exposes that secret, how do you react and what do you do next? If you enjoy a good paranormal romance that has excitement, tenderness, and drama, then this short story will be right up your alley. Be sure to read it, because I strongly recommend it.
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Renee, I loved this story. Great fight scene between Dom and that other wolf, tender reveal of their feelings for each other, dramatic problem it creates for them knowing the Alpha's (grandfather's) view about two males being mates. If Landon challenges his grandfather, I, like Gary, would expect Dom to give Landon some of his strength to win the battle. Well done. Kudos.
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Captain William Elijah Thomas (WET) is a young test pilot who gets some very interesting assignments, due to his superior piloting skills. This story is fast moving, action packed, and well-written, with a touch of humor tossed in for good measure, so if you're a fan of science fiction, then be sure to check this story out. I highly recommend it.
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Going back to read the anthologies I didn't get to in the past has caused me to read your stories in reverse. I'm not sure if that's an advantage or disadvantage, but I'm enjoying your stories. Like Carlos, I nearly spit out my coffee when I read 'USS Rafael Cruz'. oh, and was your Terran Confederation Spaceforce responsible for Trump's designation of the new 'Space Force"? And is the combination of WET and Aegis your alter egos? This story was fast moving and action packed, interspersed with moments of levity from Bill and Aegis. Truly captivating. Thanks, Myr.
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Unfortunately, there are many places in the world where LGBTQ+ individuals are forced to live in fear and under harsh conditions. Those emigrating to other nations often seem to carry the beliefs of their homeland with them, thus keeping the citizens from those countries living in constant fear, even though it doesn't conform to the laws and beliefs of their new country. Don't let this scare you away from this story, though, because even if this sounds foreboding, it is a romantic tale under incredible circumstances. This amazing and well-written short story that deals with those issues. It's is a high intensity, action packed, and emotionally wrenching tale about two individuals from Nigeria, and I highly recommend it.
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Parker, thanks for this amazing story. You did a fantastic job evoking out the emotional responses from both your characters and your readers. Daniel and Ibi made a wise, if unwitting, choice of staying at the Seneca Casino, as well as having an aware and caring manager in Emmett Blueye. First of all, I think many ICE agents apply for those jobs because they want any excuse they can find to deport anyone that came here from another country. Luckily, Native Americans often use old tribal treaties from well over 100 years ago to establish their sovereign rights over their reservations/lands, and that includes buildings they own outside of the reservation. And having been screwed by the Federal Government in the past, they like to take any opportunity they get to even the score. I'm glad it work out well for Daniel and Ibi and thank you for the happy ending.
