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Darryl62

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  1. I am writing from Australia and I am very concious of USA bias in stories that I read, like TV shows that overwhelming appear more than local content. I aim to have universal language and if not then appropriate explanation as a part of the conversation.
  2. It was an amazing interesting story using language that at times I barely understood. An insight into a different culture and growing up perspective. It was not the wolf shifters that had me confused, but the Detroit speech patterns and the notes at each chapter were most welcome! The heros both had me happy, annoyed and I wanted to take the dad out to the forest and leave him there. I loved the different religions and acceptance of the families, seemed it was the Christians who struggled with love ( well played!).
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    Truth's Embrace

    Beautifully done, and they get to go to the dance, and hopefully if Soren is registered as a Mage, life might get better for him.
  4. I became a premium member became of you and I am very grateful for the nudge you gave
  5. I have started to write a story and hope to see it here on GA, and this forum has given me both hope and thought about my small flame that I am nurturing. @Mark Arbouris right about comments, I have messaged some authors about spelling or storyline disconects, but always praise in public. @kbois can stand some ribbing from her loyal crew which at times is like a family gathering!
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    Chapter 11

    The table and chairs are clearly both a gateway and a warning, but only those with the right amulets and magic/ head space get the full treatment. Rebklos I fear is not going to make it to the end of the rite, perhaps not even to the end of the story! Imagine after all that has happened and were told, they said "No" to Adga. Foolish kid..
  7. Sexy and romantic, difficult to get the balance and language right, but I think you nailed it perfectly. 👌
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    Hidden Lies

    For fucks sake boy, grow some balls!!!
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    Chapter 103

    Exactly the same thoughts from the number one Aussie/ Kiwi fan. Best NYE present 🎁 ✨ 🤪 💕
  10. I worry about Duncan, but then wounded people who are quiet need the most help but like a frightened animal, given help very very carefully and slowly. Asa is far more empathetic than you have stated, but clearly implied. I also thought Caleb was an idiotic fool about his son far too much.
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    Chapter 102

    I knew Brad was plotting!! My pick is Miranda and perhaps with Big as an accomplice... Good riddance to Coraline and don't let Cody hire anyone
  12. I chose Miranda as the humiliation and knowing that her daughter had been molested would push anyone over the edge
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    Chapter 24

    I feel like I have been on a grand bus tour with a big group of strangers who have ended up becoming ( in a nice way) like extended family. Thank you @kbois and your stalwart crew for the wonderful ❤ amazing 👏 brilliant work. So, with laughter and tears, you can rest up knowing that your fan club has become so big, we are a small town ! Merry Christmas from a sweltering Australia XOXO
  14. I think that might be the first time that Jubal has verbalised to himself internally that he has attraction for men 🤔. Like I have commented on before, the fears of discovery are never far from the surface.
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    Doctor's Advice

    Thank you Dr Marin for getting Connor to at least think about the reasons why..goodness me, youth and the ability to make a mess.
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    Chapter 23

    Despite what another person has written, I too feel the same way, and dont take it to heart - life even in a Petri dish has purpose. Our author has many decisions to make and this was one of them.
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    Chapter 23

    And Emu. Koala I am told ( protected) are not tasty as all ( just joking! About the Koala)
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    Chapter 23

    Vann is my first stop for someone dies, followed by Sebastian....
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    Chapter 23

    Delicious to eat, better for the environment here in Australia
  20. Definitely, Brad, he has form....
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    Chapter 22

    Flightrader24.com and someone is always watching 👀
  22. Some of us are old enough to remember the terror and real fear for our safety as gay men, you have written it so well, that I am not sure if I should be thanking you or smacking you. Good history for those who have never felt that particular fear
  23. The truth is out of the bag at last !!
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    Chapter 21

    I was taken aback by the throwaway of Reilly's old pack and home. Very detailed notes @kbois must be keeping. If I remember correctly, there are about a dozen of these new horror hybrids? Cannot the light shifters with protection do a grab and run during the coming showdown? Place them out of harms way and then with time restore to original form? They have been made and abused like the original hybids. Not their fault and I feel that these animals should have a chance to get out of thown nightmare, not just killed... Sunday afternoon thoughts
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    Chapter 8

    Ohh, I love this story! A very exciting chapter, whoever got the gear for our newest nobles did them no favours whatsoever...
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