jfalkon
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This was fun to read. I love the original characters!
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I loved that line too. Great story.
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It is shocking how many people still have the false impression that there is a way to change a person's sexual orientation. As for these parents, I like to imagine that they were well-meaning but completely clueless.
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I love how your characters are so believable. They all share the blame for the situation they find themselves in.
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This is so uplifting! I enjoyed reading it especialy after reading a few of the darker stories in the anthology.
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Living Next Door to Alex
jfalkon commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Living Next Door to Alex
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I'm happy that Cyril finaly left but now I am wondering what will happen next. It must be awful knowing that there is someone out there who has threatened to kill you.
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I never imagined that fairies could be so evil or so ugly! I enjoyed reading this but now I want to know what happens next.
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Thanks to everyone who commented. I think I may have watched a few too many depressing documenteries before writing this. It isn't common but ocasionaly some deranged person does get away with imprisoning and abusing innocent people.
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Under the Surface Justin sat on the couch in his parents' living room, idly playing with his phone. He could hear his parents getting ready for their date. "Can you believe Karen's son got suspended for writing on a wall?" asked Justin's mother. "I have never seen that kid do anything bad," answered his father. "It must be some kind of phase." Justin smiled. He knew what had really happened. He had been late for class and already angry when he
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Justin is a mischievous high school student living a comfortable life until he gets caught with another boy. He is sent away to a place run by an evil man, where every day is a struggle for survival sanity.
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Happy Thanksgiving! (In the USA we celebrate it today. I think it was last month in Canada.)
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I have to admit that I was stretching the truth a little here but considering the video footage of chicken farms that I have seen over the years I am sure there are some pretty creapy things going on when no one is looking. Now that you mention it I do remember that KFC story going around. I guess the legend of the headless chickens has been with us for a while.
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I forgot you could check that. Maybe he just hasn't been reading his messages.
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Thanks!
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This guy. I don't think he was ever very active in the forums. https://www.gayauthors.org/author/ricky/
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He hasnsn't posted a story in a while but I used to be able to contact him either through the messaging feature here or by email. I hope he's OK.
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Do we have definitions for the story audience ratings? For example is a teen rating similar to a pg13 movie rating in the US?
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Chickens Mark and George sat by their kitchen table each looking a screen and sipping coffee. It was the perfect setting for a relaxing Saturday morning but they were unable to enjoy it. Their landlord had decided to sell the house that they had been living in for the last five years. They had less than three months to find a new residence. Mark put down his tablet and walked to the cabinet over the sink complaining as he went. “I can’t find anything in our price range.”
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Do you know where your food comes from? These guys didn't until one scary Halloween night on a chicken farm.
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I realy enjoyed this story. I wish I had gone to parties like that when I was a high school kid. The prank was great and all the characters were believable.
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Interesting characters. This is the first time I have ever heard of brownies. This one reminded me of a leprechaun even though he was not green. I had fun reading this but I'm not sure what the brownie and the crow wanted with the pumpkin. Were they trying to get the Devil to come over? It seems like he was not about to arive on his own.
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I love the way you showed us what goes on on the other side of the spirit board.
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Great story. I love your description of the library and the banging and creaking of the old house. It was also interesting to learn about Jim incrementally. At the begining he seamed almost flawless and then became more human as the story progressed.
