jfalkon
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Its been a while since I looked at the forum posts but I love the photos. I hope you post some more.
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That was me. Apparently I missed fixing one.
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I needed this reminder too. I recently confused flu with flue. Apparently the guy I was writing about had a chimney related ilness. For some reason I find the I/myself confusion particularly irritating. If you wouldn't say "Myself went shopping," why would you say, "Tom and myself went shopping,"? <-- Did I get the punctuation right there? That question mark somehow looks out of place.
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I guess I could have had him fired but then I wouldn't have much of a story to tell. Thanks for the review.
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
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Thank you for reading so carefully and taking the time to comment. I can see how my description of his hiring could be misleading. Sorry about that. Sometimes I forget that the reader is reading my story and not my mind. As far as the specuations go, I did mean for them to sound ridiculous. I was imagining people getting the story second or third hand and not knowing all the facts and then adding their own comments.
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Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Thank you. I will have to watch that movie. It sounds like something I would enjoy.
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Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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I have to admit I find gender confusion amusing.
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Great story! I love the riddle and the clever ending.
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You painted an image which I will have a hard time forgetting! I don't blame Brad for laughing but sharing the photo with coworkers was taking it much too far. I'm glad it ended well.
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Great story! It was fun to read and I love the way you turn the focus to the reader in the end.
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I was never a huge fan of Valentine's day either but I have to admit that it was rather fun in elementary school. Whao can say no to a one hour cupcake break at the end of the school day. By high school the fun is pretty much over. I loved this story and I can't say that there was anything missing from it but I still feel like it could be part of something larger. It reminded me of some of the stories that get posted one chapter at a time. I can't help wondering what happend to the straight man after that evening.
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I love your main charecter. He seemed very real and likable.
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I love the ending. After reading a few sad stories I half expected to see someone hanging from a cross at the end.
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This is not exactly what I expected for Vlaentine's Day but I think that is what I liked about it. There was something about the nameless young man that made me feel uneasy but I couldn't quite figure out if he was good, evil, or something in between.
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This story made me sad but on another level I was happy for the family. Not everyone can deal with a serious ilness with such grace. My relatives would continue arguing long after they forgot each other's names and what there was to agree about. I also like that you told this story from the point of view of the patient who was loosing his memory.
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I always wanted to see cupid take some of his own medicine. I love that it is told from the angel's point of view.
