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Great story. The changing head was scary. I am wondering how many mummies are in the cubboard and how many are headless.
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The George Mackenzie Poltergeist
jfalkon commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in The George Mackenzie Poltergeist
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Congratulations!
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Bye For Now & Weekly Wrap Up (May 27 - Jun 2)
jfalkon commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Congratulations, Renee! I wish you and your family all the best. -
Thanks for reading and comenting. You must live at a vey high latitude! It must be hard to get any sleep in the Summer.
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Thank you! I am happy that you enjoyed it.
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This was fun to read. Having the guy from Spring break show up for an interview was briliant!
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I love all the little details you used like the broken glass and the shirt that changed color in the laundry. I could see their home clearly in my mind. I could even imaginine how it smelled. The scene also gave me a sense of how many years they had been together. The acumulation of things and the little habits they had were so typical of people who had lived together in one place for a long time. Great job!
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This was not the happy ending I was hoping for but it is a well written story. I hope you continue writing about these characters.
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I loved this story. Like everyone else, I hope you continue it. I especialy like the blue dragon. The idea of an animal using sunlight for energy is new and creative.
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I love the ending. The whole idea of restoring a person from a backup is fascinating.
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Thank you! I am happy you enjoyed it. Thank you! I always apreciate your comments.
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I found your story interesting It does seem like asexual people don't get much attention. I love the way described him feeling bad about not having a partner. There seems to be an unnescesary pressure on people to have a love life.
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I realy enjoyed this. I love the way we get to see Eric's side of the story and how Brian is able to learn from his mistakes.
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This story felt very real to me. The unhappy couple reminds me of many people I have met over the years. I like the way Ryan came up repeatedly but we never learned much about him. It showed how preocupied the adults were with their own problems. It was frustrating not knowing what happend to the man on the train but at the same time it made perfect sense. Trains are places where everything keeps changing and human interactions are brief. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Thank you. Thanks! I agree, disco balls should be standard camping equipment.😀 I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Thank you! I'm not into fishing either, so its disco camping for me too. Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!
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Disco Camping “I think I got another one!” Dan exclaimed as he reeled in another fish. Fred and Dan had been fishing in the same lake for decades but never had such good luck. Usually there were a few more friends with them, but today everyone except Fred and Dan had other plans. “Let me get a picture,” Fred said as Dan pulled the sizable fish out of the water. Dan posed with the fish, and Fred took the photo. “I’ll send this to Mike and ask how his mother-in-law’s birthday p
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While on a fishing trip, two old frinds have a strange encouter in the woods. The experience changes their relationship.
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I truly enjoyed this story. It was interesting to see the situation from the confused friend's point of view.
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interview Ask an Author 2.0 - #5
jfalkon commented on Carlos Hazday's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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Thanks! I agree with you about the ending. This is snomething I often have a hard time with. I told the story I was planning to tell but it seems like I could start another story as soon as I finished the first one.
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I loved this story! I do not envy the main character's frustration but it was funny observing it.
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What amazing friends/family! There were some sad parts to this story but the happy ending made up for it.
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Amazing story! I love your use of color.
