Benji

..................Hey Nephy, good to see another chapter, however it is still confusing as the 'kid' could still be a bad guy here. As he said 'nothing is as it seems', not a cliffhanger but you sure do know how to dangle something out there. Benji

...........Hey Q-man, Well, looks like I got another 2 fer chapter!! I think everything went well for Blake, and with Ethan at his side. Dinner looked like it was going to be comfortable, then Matt showed up!! LOL! Great 2 chapters, look forward to more. Benji

...............Got my vote!!! LOL!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY STEVE!!!! .................Beenn a long time since hearing from you, hope all is well and have a great birthday!!!

............... Well I stumbled into another 2-fer chapters, Stephen took the words right out of my mouth. The object of this traps and deceptions is for Gabe and Pasha to get together and perhaps accept that Uzzy is dead. But the real power is between Uzzy and Pasha, that seems to be the goal the bad people want to keep from happening. The annoying kid most likely was the same guy that originally took Uzzy when they arrived. Great chapter(s) Nephy!

............................The road to Yosemite from Lee Vining always has me nervous, going up you have a 3000 foot sheer cliff on the right side with periodic rock slides, on the left you have a 2500-300 drop into the canyon and although the road is two lane. It still grips my stomach to drive it.

.............. You caught me off guard goat, I didn't expect to see it early today, I thought maybe tonight. Anyhow great job of tying up all the loose ends, you don't say, but I gather Bridgett's estate was a lot more then first thought. If Wesson has a scholarship fund named after him, the estate must be worth in the tens of millions. I guess they did need to find the body of Bridgett, to solidify their case. Perhaps somebody will do her justice and cremate her and spread her ashes in a pig stye. LOL! Well, the end had to come, and a great ending it was too! Thanks for the voyage CJ! Benji

................Now, now December has many weeks left in it!!!

.......................Well Brat, another fine chapter, but I have to agree with the other poster, this is just the calm before the storm. The moment the hat touches ground in the ring, the mud-fest will out in force. I'm sure Andy will get outed soon in this campaign, and he will urge his father to keep going on. I wonder if we have seen the last of this Detective Flemming, I'm sure he will try to stir the pot, hope his fingers get burned. The investigation of the murders of JT's parents was too quick, not thorough enough and only finger pointing with little evidence. The actual murders had to have left some evidence. Anyways, looking forward to more!! Benji

HAPPY BIRTHDAY RENEE ...................Hope it was a good one!!!

............. Well, good to see another chapter, although I have to admit it took my a few minutes trying to remember if I was following the story (been kinda long ago...) Valentine seems to have gone down perfectly for Josh and Max. Now Tom and Mark the stories 'odd couple' have just moved beyond the awkward friend stage all the way to first base! Thanks for the update! Benji

....................On my windshield by a coward that hit my parked car and wrote he didn't have the insurance or money but wrote out this peice to prevent others from identifying him...........and ran away like crazy!

.................... I personally liked the "Other Side of Me', it was different and a mystery, shrouded with more questions then answers. The unraveling of this story at the end still left me a bit speechless!

......................What is that, the Geek squad goat herd?

.................Believe it or not, I have patience for the Epilogue, I know it is coming but I'm not dire to see it everyday. The final chapter was what I was on pins and needles for. Once that was done the wrap-up seemed trivial to me, As I'm pretty sure what is going to address, maybe a surprise here and there, but I'm pretty sure what awaits us.

..................Hey Nephy, Wow 3 chapters, I'm thankful for them. "Nothing is at it Seems". That sounds like something Pasha should remember as he goes along, he has got to fight their weapons of illusions. Was Uzzy's near death an illusion too? I still cannot imagine who these characters are, demons or something else, but they do seem to possess magic of some sort. Great chapter! Looking forward to more! Benji

HAPPY BIRTHDAY JOE!!!! ................Hope you have a good one!

Nice comsie!

.................But the spider goat hangs on cliffs?????

..............."But... cliffhangers? Me? I never, ever use cliffhangers. .............. Could that be famous last words?

..................Not sure of the elevation you are at, but I'm sure it is at least over 5,000 feet, so your heatwave was minimal compared to mine at 117 last week (2200 feet). LOL! Yep, that high is leaving and that brings on the monsoon season, I'm grateful for the break!

.............Actually once in awhile I crave the hostess cupcakes, both chocolate or orange (maybe twice a year)

,................ With a cor-ordination team like that I'm left with little wonder!! LOL!

.................Yea!!! Another chapter, nothing stands out here except for the fainting spell. Otherwise just a good chapter moving things along!! Benji

..................Well Krista the surprise here was that Corey's mother didn't seem to think that her son was gay and took him to Clinton's place, of course she didn't know that they were becoming an item. But still her reaction about him going to Jenny's place seem to dispel any reason in her mind that Corey might be gay. Clinton's response and actions were at least predictable in the encounter and Corey's response was likewise. Now to get to Corey's dad, I see him as a disgruntled old man trying to re-live his life through his son in his glory days at high school. That is why he pushes his son so hard because he didn't make it there. His frustration grows everyday as he sees his goal being destroyed, he doesn't see or realize that if you kick a young dog enough the dog will not respond to you. It will just make it fearful and resentful of you. I wonder what Corey's mom has in store for him? I suppose I should mark my calendar for December to see what it is, LOL! CJ will remain to be a problem, but for how long I wonder? Thanks for the chapter! Benji