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  1. No? “No“ makes me want to clarify that I left my comment as a compliment.
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    Guilt

    Survivors of assault experience it differently, right? Every single one I know has found peace somehow aside from one that didn’t. I wish there was a magic formula to make Brandon feel clean. Molested in an alternate reality. Fuh…
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    Chapter 21

    Josh’s first poem is just wow. A lot went down in this chapter!
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    Chapter 6

    “If only he loved me.” Where is Tomas?Must have been time for a run.
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    Rajar

    Wow.
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    Secrets

    That was one sage kid. Here’s hoping Brandon took it to heart…
  7. How apt and a bit autobiographical whether it’s deliberate or not, dear Author: ”…people who created things out of thin air, using nothing but the power of their imagination to make them come alive…”
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    Chapter 3

    Daddy is some major donor. Hmm. Look forward to Adam answering Matthew’s questions. He surely has a lot of them by now. Seems too straight (no pun) forward for the body to be Artemis. If this is a corpse I’d sure vote for Derek.
  9. Even if Leia is dead there’s an alternate reality to manage!
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    Pain and Needle

    How would you communicate *extended exhale until I’m breathless”? Jordan has suffered a lot. Reading on because I’m hopeful, certain, that they’ll save each other… Right??
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    Chapter 20

    I’m a little bit in love with JJ. We haven’t much witnessed his bullying that hasn’t been met with wrath. Travis’s wrath. End up in court wrath! While I acknowledge that Travis is different, could they just go out and get ice cream or something? Fun read!
  12. Holy moly 0 to 60! Didn’t expect this to happen so quickly but I’m absolutely here for it. Hawaii seems like a terrible idea given my reservations about Jed but I’m likely off base. I can’t imagine Jessica taking this dynamic well, initially, either. Mostly I feel worried for Perry’s heart. The comments are their own story! Great fun. Thank you @Mrsgnomie
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    Nightmares

    Keith is such a creep. WTH Leia? Great read.
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    Reunions

    Are things going too well? Seems things are going too well…
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    Salvo

    Feeling like I have to binge a little more. This is really good. Really really.
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    The Chimney

    Wonder if those scratches end Brandon’s cutting?
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    Convalescing

    Anailde immediately had her own voice in my head. Love the world building. I hope they can coexist…
  18. You are not a failure! I’m so happy I wandered over here. Seriously hoping I’m real time and you’re around. Nothing simple here but you must keep breathing. It’s so good obvious you’ve got this
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    Chapter 6

    Tell me more?
  20. I’m adding another Yeehaw to the heap! Very exciting to head out west again!!
  21. 205 readers and only my comment? I’m disappointed but I’m into you @Lee Wilson
  22. The “indoor plumbing” was a laugh out loud moment!
  23. This Louisiana boy appreciates the correct treatment of both Creole and Cajun culture and cuisine. They are not interchangeable and any good Ragin’ Cajun knows this. We’ll done Author!
  24. Holy smokes! USA? Southwest? Yikes
  25. Aloha! Under 90 degrees here in the Appalachian foothills so I can’t ask for better this time of year. Appreciate you @Albert1434
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