Cris L
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Tues, Wed: Kayden and Trent
Cris L commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Tues, Wed: Kayden and Trent
If Mark is as big a prick with his colleagues, most of them are unlikely to have met Kayden, or other members of Mark's family. So why would you think that they would be able to recognise Kayden? How many of you would recognise a work colleague's child if you saw the child out of context. -
Beautiful.
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3rd complete reading after a long gap, and yes it is as good as I remembered. Honestly I'm surprised that nobody has optioned this for a movie.
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Damn. I have 3 requirements. Which are in order. 1. A hot ASS that I can fill frequently. Like CJ, Owen & Richie 98. Cute face. CJ, Owen, and Richie 99. Big mouth that I can fill frequently! Every American male under the age of 25, plus many above 25. For the record excluding all members of the Trump family.
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Okay, who do I have to blow, so I can get more Chapters?
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Yes, it was not 6k plus words.... Oops, I meant 60k words!
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Damn. This was so short. Way too short. Good. Damn good, but way to short. Still the best part of my Friday though!
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I'm not exactly sure why, but I've loved Jackson since C1, and I am so happy to read new chapters. Teen love is so hard, and I hope for a truly happy ending for both boys. Thanks @Kristafor a great story
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Damn. 2021 definitely is off to a great start. Thank you, Carlos. Happy New Year to you. Also, I'm sorry to hear about your loss.
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OMG. It's been so long, I forgot who's who!
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Chapter 20 - Do you love me, too?
Cris L commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Do you love me, too?
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Chapter 20 - Do you love me, too?
Cris L commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Do you love me, too?
You are so easy! Personally I'm demanding 100 more chapters, or else!! -
Andre, great start. I'm South African, from Durban, now living in Vietnam. I hope to read more great stories set in South Africa. Was the use of your initials for the main character deliberate?
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Can you do the same for me, as my birthday present? Publish a chapter on my birthday? It's my birthday on Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday, Saturday and Sunday. Every day of the year, in fact! I'd be a happy boy!!
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I thought I ordered a chapter a day? 🤔🤔 That means you are 20 chapters behind my schedule, so you may now get back to work, serf! 😜
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Incredible tale, @Carlos Hazday Loved it. Thanks! Now get your ass back to CJ et al!
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Carlos, this story is awful. So awful I'm putting you on a schedule. 1 chapter to be published every day. Minimum 5000 words. Comprehende, Senor? I will also let you know when I'm tired of the story, and you can stop writing. 🤔Don't hold your breath for that happening before 2220. OK? 😂
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Carlos, this story is awful. So awful I'm putting you on a schedule. 1 chapter to be published every day. Minimum 5000 words. Comprehende, Senor? I will also let you know when I'm tired of tge story, and you can stop writing. 🤔Don't hold your breath for that happening before 2220. OK? 😂
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I'm only fighting over the dildo because I have several boys who need it shoved in very hard. Incidentally I flew to another nearby city on Monday... My personal dildo packed in my carryon backpack ready to go in a boys ass.. Security had a good look at the Xray, and then smiled at me. Pretty cute soldier boy!
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Sounds like a great option to me!
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Unless you have passed on, and your ghost is doing the writing, you are not too old.
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Can y'all speak English? Especially you jkwsquirrel! 😂😂
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I'm always so uplifted when I read Sean's words. His writing somehow evokes feelings in me that I can't explain. He makes me FEEL!! Like Sean, I am South African, but haven't lived there for 30 years, but I'm always pleased to read his descriptions of SA!
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When can we expect a sequel? Or at the very least more works from TZ?
