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Progress. It is great to see. Nice chapter
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Interesting exchanges between the friends and Jer. I am intrigued
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At this point I’d just start walking home. Unless it’s bad weather that is. Getting more context and background story on what happened to his father help. 10 yrs is a long time. Perhaps some therapy would help.
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Good start. However I feel the opposite to a few on Jeremy. For starters, we don’t know the context of the loss of his father. We can assume it’s been a bit of time say a little over a yr or more because the loss doesn’t seem raw and fresh Jer and his mother have healed some. So the kid is old for his license. Great. His senior in high school. Great. So what. Sure his a little petulant and whiny with late teenage immaturity. Holding him to expectations someone out of high school and working or to expect to know how the world works is a bit much in my opinion. That isn’t to say he can’t learn if properly motivated.
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Owen still seems scared of any conversation between him and Neil regarding what happened in the barn. To me he’d rather act as if it’s soooo taboo he can’t truly apologize and give Neil the chance to speak and deal with the elephant in the room. Owen has moments of being a really good friend in previous chapters but not here. He needs to pick a side of the fence. By not letting Neil speak on what is on his mind, owen and Neil will continue to nervous around each other. My fear is Lucas is going to get to Neil before they mend. Lucas is a powder keg waiting to blow. I worry Neil will get seriously hurt this time.
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True. There’s no such thing as 💯 secure online with encryption either. That said….Nothing beats a burner phone 😆
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An anonymous account allows for 💯 plausible deniability for Jonah too. IYKYK 😈
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Ok the plan to get him get him get him is weak at best but it might be enough. They don’t need to show June. They need to take that video and post it on their OWN new instagram account. She’ll see it just fine. I would think teenage sexual behavior especially let petting insinuating something more and with audio would be MUCH more a damaging look to both the 3 vampires and a look to the prestigious school while the rest of the school will laugh their asses off. What high school anywhere in the world doesn’t have underage teenage drinking and a little nookie nookie?!🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Ok! Let’s go! I’m already craving more.
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He’s a little stud
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Not gonna lie, I want more
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Chapter 67 Epilogue
SilentandBroken commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 67 Epilogue
I shall research thx -
Chapter 67 Epilogue
SilentandBroken commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 67 Epilogue
I guess what I was asking was did YOU have more works written like this . I’ve found many authors and many works that fit this style, but I also like your writing style very much. Have you ever considered spin off stores from A to Z? -Silent -
Matt and Emma were pretty careless about what they were talking about in public while on their scavenger hunt by themselves. Lots of situational awareness fails. No doubt they were overheard. Part of me wants to think they were the bait to draw them out. There’s still a lot about these exchange students that hasn’t been disclosed. To me, there’s still more to them that they’ve not sharing
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* Help Wanted * Apply Within * ::grin::
SilentandBroken replied to JeffsFort's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
Thx -
* Help Wanted * Apply Within * ::grin::
SilentandBroken replied to JeffsFort's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
man I didn’t think I’d miss him this much still. Granted, loss is a HUGE part of my traumatic past, I’ll admit, he left so much unfinished and I wasn’t finished learning from him either. Now, admittedly, I keep going back to his one reply to me encouraging me to write. But it’s that first big step ya know? It scares the shit out of me and the self criticism and self doubt have me stuck at the starting like making excuses like a nervous 14yo wanting to kiss his first boy crush or run…sigh -
IMAGINE Magazine Question for 2/15
SilentandBroken replied to JeffsFort's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
I happened to catch The Goonies recently and it dawned on me how much Sean Astin was a cutie in that film. Here’s a pic of him a little older than then
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Yes all that
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GFD: Executive Order
SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in GFD: Executive Order
After finishing the last written chapter of GFD earlier this afternoon, a second reading in total, this fits perfectly as a sequential chapter of the greater work of GFD. Dammit Com why did you get sick and die! 😭 -
Sigh… finally finished my second read through….and now you’re gone.😔
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Wait, Alec and Justin not the same age..unless you’re talking about vampire birthdays.
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Chapter 172 Welcome to the Real World
SilentandBroken commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 172 Welcome to the Real World
Yep Nathan is a leech -
Chapter 172 Welcome to the Real World
SilentandBroken commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 172 Welcome to the Real World
Bloody brilliant chapter. Way to tie in all the points of contention to have them start to show the possible potential to the final outcome. But, I am still expecting a couple curveballs, minor ones that will be a means to an end. The different brand condom will come back to Robbie’s mind. I think somehow it’s going to be proof Nathan was cheating. The conversations between Rory and Robbie were great. I love how comfortable they’ve become with each other’s emotions. Something special is building there.
