I'm kinda late also, I just decided to put on hold my writing for a few minutes to read the chapter,,, First of, it was a nice chapter, I wonder how will the "new" Shadow image will look like after Eric will have finished his make over.
Eric really have got to control and stop drinking tequila, one woulda thought that he'd realized that Jerry's doing that on purpose to try to get some info out of him on what exactly they know, and what they're up to.... He takes a lots of risk, and if there's any problems coming from that, it will be on his mind.
Finally, for those who said, or agreed, that it was full of evil cliffhangers, I say c'mon, don't kid yourself, there's a difference in a story that have suspense in it,, like LTMP and cliffhanger. A cliffhanger needs to be at the end, and at the end of the chapter there was none, at least none that makes you stay on the edge of your seat screaming, yelling at the computer "NOOOOOOOOOO".