It was a good chapter CJ,, finally we got some Joe showing up in the story.. I particularly loved all the details, historical and not, that was given for the station...
If I understand the story right,, it means the the entire band survive the tour without too much problems,,, it's good news,,, hopefully they won't be close to SF nor NYC when the bombs will explodes,,,,
personally i'm mixed on the subject,,, I don't mind body hair but it depends. Legs : don't mind; down there : anything goes as long it's not shaven; Facial hair,, I don't mind that you don't shave everyday but a guy has got to do it; for the rest of the body,,, as long as it's not too much.
Thanks Tiger! and yes,, always have one on you,,,
Thanks Tiff, actually, there's one, maybe two, little 'hints' that you haven't yet mention,
Thank Rakuten,,, glad that you enjoyed the sex scene,,, 'cause it's the biggest of the story
Thanks Drewbie!
you all will see what happen next on friday!! This time around, you'll be read about Nathan,, and maybe you'll realize that things are not what they seemed like on the first read.
"Get On Your Feet" - Gloria Estefan
"Conga" - Gloria Estefan
"25 (feels like '93)" - Annakin Slayd
well I like taking chances,, but I totally agree with you...
Here you go you can all read my new series.. it has 5 parts and will be uploaded one part every friday...
you can catch chapter 1: Jake
lets open the discussion...
For me, saying "I love you" has different meaning,, I will say to my close friends, but by close, I mean those that i got some feeling for,,,
as for jason,, well, I don't have any difficulties to say it, for me it just comes out naturally.
but of course, everytimes I say it,, I mean it
That would certainly be my opinion,,To announce the demonstration of their power with a first blast, then stating his demands, and finally, the bluff will start, with the false bombs,,
I almost never drink, plain that simple,,, I've never really been drunk either, tho there was twice where I was getting hot, but I never went pass the "too much" limit
I can vouch for that last part,
Okay, I simply loved that chapter, specially the second amendment reference, that was simply fun. And that's not to forget that little part
Overall for the chapter, it was good. The story didn't advance exactly in this chapter, (there wasn't any bomb finished or primed,,,) but we can just see that it set up things for upcoming chapters.
And what about poor Eric, being cruised by a guy.. Cody did find the best way to have it his way,,, daring him to kiss him, that was just genius... maybe if Helen hadn't arrived at that point, Cody could have dared him to do some more,,,
Me it's simple, when I'm in a place where people smoke, after a while my eyes will get itchy. Without saying that I get more headache when I'm in smoking places, I'll say that they come more easily. Finally, the most annoying is that after all my clothes smells like smoke
On the contrary, they are more expensive,,, (tho I guess that was a lapsus) there's a good tax on it here in quebec. They're always raising taxes for cigarettes and alcohol
I agree, it's nice when you start reading a story to know if it's still being updated or not. Also, I'm glad that the main writers that I'm reading do make the mention completed or not.
Like corvus said,, in the eFiction,, the author can say if it's finished or not.
could Jerry have in mind there, probably, he could,, but I'd say it would be stupid of him... For him too convince gov. or anyone to give money, or whatever he's looking for, I don't think that hitting twice the west cost would be that wise... The mention of Candlestick Park, personally I like that little detail, it was interesting,, but I think that it's just to make use nervous.
I kinda also think that it's not for any reason that the neighbor disappeared, I think that some Scar managed it so that he wouldn't been seen around later on,,, But, I don't think he made sure to make it so Joe would hate gay...
Honestly, personally I'm glad that it's back to the original name. Not that I'm against finding an original one for this sub forum. It's just that, I can't see where "petting zoo" comes from. I mean, the only link that I can find is "Goat" and there must be goats in a zoo...but then I realize that people here don't want to be petting him, they want to roast him.
But heck, it's only a forum name...