personally I loved the chapter, the scene that I enjoy the most is where Joe finally makes his excuses to the band, and the boys are able to finally ask their question about his dad. Surprise Surprise, his dad is the opposite of gay, and he's not that good with charity. hehe
Then there was all the excitement of Jerry placing the bomb shells here and there and finally knowing what was in the letter,,, what was his goal coming from the bombs.
it's been said,, it's an on-the-edge-of-your-seat, very exciting chapter, and well done. And can't see any cliffy in that.
Now, after all the flowers,, comes the vase; the detonating. I think that spending i-dunno-how-many words in the description of how the device exploded is pushing it too much. Honestly, after maybe haft of that description I got fed up, enough that I made a jump to the end looking for the overall after-match. I actually came pretty close to simply stop the reading there.