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    Chapter 28

    akascrubber commented on Lupus's story chapter in Chapter 28

    "People would curse the name of Marshal General Vondau for decades to come. History would remember him as the destroyer of Andiol. No one would remember Cors." He committed suicide and shot himself in his head. His wreckage was complete.
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    Elias got nis message to the coast guard and it was heard through out the prison. Vane is on the war path. "We are not just 'deviants' or 'perverts' or 'hardened criminals.' We are boys. We are young. We are terrified. We are in love. We are fighting. We are alive. And we absolutely refuse to be erased from the world in silence." Flias fingered himself so he will be hurt. If key people hear the plea of Elias, will they care to help homosexuals? Might Vane be punished and removed for not keeping the inmates under control? Will Vane's methods be too severe? Life will be hell right now. Too many issues to be resolved.
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    Three men sent by the London firm were going to assassinate Will Carter as he left his car for the church Tanaka and CSIS and the RCMP were going to stop them. Tanaka wanted to catch them in the act. The Canadian forces were ready by the church. They stopped the killers quickly with skilled men nearby as they began to get ready to shoot Will Carter. The bad guys are in custody "The Carter’s were safe, their wedding uninterrupted, and Andrew would be able to marry the man he loved." What a terrific wedding gift from Tanaka
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    Chapter 13

    akascrubber commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 13

    I am thinking of a metaphor of what might happen at a 25th high school reunion. Some couples you thought would get married later did get married, some did not and some had one or more divorces. You cannot predict human nature with 100% certainty.
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    A too short story of two young boys and two different fathers in a hard, poor area of swamp filled Louisiana. One father drinks coffee and the other drinks lots of alcohol. The boys are friends. Johnny loved by his dad, Walt, is going on a fishing trip with his dad and invited Emmett to go along Read on to find out about the different home life of the two boys and when challenged see if Johnny's father, Walt, takes Emmett along knowing the baggage he brings. Walt worries about the future for them but makes today satisfying.
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    Chapter 13

    akascrubber commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 13

    We need to keep reserving judgment on the boy's attitudes and feeling about themselves and each other. We may think what they are feeling, but too much is still hidden and not really understood.
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    Chapter 1

    akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Johnny and Emmett fast friends. They found each other and clicked. Johnny protected Emmett who had a mean. abusive dad Walt knew Emmett's dad and knew he was trouble. He agreed with Johnny to take him on the fishing trip. He was concerned about the future. "God help them both."
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    There is a lot to be aid for Andrew pining for a simple wedding ceremony with his true love. I do not think, though, that they destined to have simple, unchallenging lives. Great things will be asked of them and they will respond.
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    They are united to fight against Vane. He has not cowed them. They will not stop even after the upcoming punishment for the surrounding jazz music that drove Vane mad. I wonder what is Vane's terrible, hidden secret?
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    Chapter 13

    akascrubber commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 13

    Miles has been very lucky so far. Erik supports him. He has not run into any mean or evil guys on the road. He has money to support his travels so he does not have to take hard or uncomfortable jobs like dishwashing or to sell his body to live. It seems Robbie will be a lifesaver and confidant.
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    Chapter 13

    akascrubber commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 13

    OK--now we have to know what Miles did not tell Troy, but told Robbie "So I started to speak, and didn’t stop until she knew every one of my secrets, including the biggest one I hadn’t even told Troy— the reason I had turned tail and fled." How can we best know what matters to him and what he must do to find peace and acceptance ?
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    They will be formidable duo. Dufresne had better be prepared for extra scrutiny. Yani will find the foreign intrusion. Will can use the help opposing underhanded attacks
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    It is organized chaos. Will's run for the party leadership caused the RCMP to order the wedding to Toronto for better security. Peter is adapting and reorganizing the reception and wedding planning. He shows he is a force of nature. Will is facing increased dirty tricks from Dufrense. He fears he is ruining their wedding. Andrew closely holds him and says he knows what matters. "I am going to stand up in front of whatever is left of our family, and I am going to marry you. That is the only objective. We are going to survive this campaign, and we are going to build a life together. Do you understand me?"
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    Vane sensed something was off. The fractured group as reported to him did not match up with what he was seeing. He will be looking at them more carefully. The group might learn their truth cannot be hidden for long. Do they need to create acting roles for Vane?
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    Chapter 9

    akascrubber commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Julian is fortunate to have Mr. Clarke who appears to be an honest man who knows what happened and what is needed now. If he buys the place, Julian will have to invest more. "The plantation was left weakened. Repairs delayed. Debts where there should have been surplus.” The weather has been calming, but there can be rough storms that might require costly repairs so Julian will need financial reserves. The plantation will require his full commitment.
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    Perhaps in hindsight people are going to understand the wisdom and real sacrifice of Will's effort to stop a corrupt man who would tear his party a part. Will is a moral man.
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    Chapter 9

    akascrubber commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Julian appreciates what he sees. "I feel like a man learning the shape of his own future." He still needs to know if the plantation can be a viable going concern if and when he buys it from his father. The financial discussion he has next is critical. Is his $50,000 enough to correct the problems left by the past crooked manager?
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    Hey, the PM and his husband to him to run with different reasons. How could he say NO.
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    I think if Will become a credible force and begins to spoil Dufresne's rise to leadership, then he might face dirty tricks and vague, non-provable threats to his life or his family
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    Will did it. He resigned as interim leader and is contesting Dufresne for the leadership of the party. Andrew could not tell him what happened , but he knew Will had to run. His request to undertake a suicide mission was enough for him. He only asked the right to name their first child He had a plan."Will was going to force them into a corner, hoping they would overreach and hand Andrew the leverage he needed to finally break them."
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    Love to read about the sad , painful life that will befall Alistair Merrick. He has hurt too many to not suffer more once his physical recovery is discovered
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    Nos is learning his own securities are holding him back. Cal seems receptive to him, but Nos does not yet know how to read him and treat him right. Will he be ready by theGlass Moon Festival to get properly close to him and enable them to be real mates?
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    Sadness

    akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Sadness

    I just read today about the mess Chris Atkins created as a young star. He was a hottie who starred nearly naked in the Blue Lagoon. Speaking to a conference now he said he became addicted to alcohol and lost out to Kevin Bacon for the lead role in Footloose. His career spiraled down due to his alcoholism Travis needs to take action with help to turn his life around. Kendo has to leave him or be pushed away.
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    Sadness

    akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Sadness

    Dr Kendo controls Travis now. OxyContin is terribly addictive and will control his life. Kendo has him ensnared Travis can still function during the day. He stood up to Brad and Jake. They have yet to learned how much Travis depends on drugs. They put a private detective on Will. Maybe, they need one on Travis. Brad warned Travis that he was questioning Kendo who he just met and wondered if he had hurt Will. Brad said to me severely. “You might explain to Kendo that if he does that, he better start looking for a rock to hide under, because I will destroy him.” Kendo should be scared when Will finally talks to Brad and Jake. I can see the family will help Travis get into a drug rehabilitation program
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    Lots of things are in motion. Vane is not giving up. He wants Carter to to diagram the key relationships. He will break them up. Elias is growing smarter. He knows trouble lies ahead. He helps them to unite and communicate simply. Caloway helps and touches Elias to show he cares about him
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