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Come clean Linda. Tell the others. Lev will be telling Brandon soon as he drives away, I bet. Troy is badly hurt by Maddox. I hope he does not kill Troy. Will the sound of the shot and horse running away attract others? I cannot wait for the next chapter when all will be revealed.

OMG What a Sh.. Show ! Hannah got fully disgusted with Connor and M and threw them out to find their way home. Connor and M tried to play sexually but M kept having seiizures, They did each have orgasms The man in b;ack showed up while Connor was at work. M killed him leaving lots of blood in the trailer and on his body.M arrives at Pizza Hut covered in blood. The staff freakes out. Connor takes M home and his boss calls the police. Connor gets M home and sees the body and blood. He finds a document that says the man in black is an agent--a government agent? Connor buries him in the swamp. They flee using his car an $200 from his work. Connor does not know where to go. They are likely going to be wanted by the police and maybe considered murder suspects. The bloody shirt and blood in the trailer will be daming evidence.This looks hopeless for them. They might be caught very soon. Willl Mother step in at least to save M?

What a scary escape and the end seem near just as they moved through tunnel that way the way out. They felt they were almost caught by the guards but the person behind Nathan was stopped. Now they have to find the gear and necklace hidden by Brohm and move onto Morgana. Luckily, Brohm had been stationed at the military base and knew the passageways and an escape hole in the walll plus had a friendly inn keeper who let them sleep safely. Will they be pursued?

Is Alihte going to be a problem? She asked to leave but she is wedded to Mama Goddess as speaking the truth. Where can Alihte be dropped off? Will she want to go back?

I thought the answer to the meaning of life was 42. "Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy"

It all comes down to Jamie killing the ritual's victim before the ghosts do it. Did Jamie succeed?

One more friend to help--patch up-- and then maybe, River will look to creating and enjoying his own happiness.This focus would be a first for him....a healthy first. Now the challenge is how to find his happiness. Will Kenji be his answer?? " I loved my friends, but it was starting to feel like I was patching up their tears and holes with pieces of myself. I’d been doing it all my life. It was one of the first things my mother taught me. How to give and give to make sure everyone around me was happy. My own happiness wasn’t important to her at the time, so it’d stopped being a priority of mine as well. That was something I should really address."

They figured out who captured/kidnapped Ethan. People are searching. Alex knows the backyard area and passageways. He will be on the hunt soon. Why did the magician want Ethan if he needed the black disc and did not search for it? At least, Ethan is safe for now. Is he going to be ransomed for the black disc?

Maybe a disgusted Connor will meet the two orcs that have also left Simon. They might exchange stories and decide to return and save Simon. They could surprise and kill Lord Crusnik as a parasitic evil person who is truly hurting Simon.

Strange, disorienting things are happening. The dog protects M. M keeps having seizures. Connor visited the scary house again and lost consciousness in an odd , dark room. He waked up outside hours later and M found him.They begin to run when a large white ball appears to seek them out. Connor once again passes out and M says he carried Connor to their trailer. He does not believe him but lets it pass. More odd matters--M denies seeing the large white ball. Connor sees M talking to someone but he says he was talking to himself. Connor remembers most of what has tormented him and he spends time over the toilet throwing up. Times passes and Connor finally goes to work. When he comes home he takes a shower and intends to show M there to much more to sex/romance than kissing. His sex dive has become unusually high and he is motivated to sexually play with M. I wonder if both will be pleasantly surprised?

Lev, Greg and Brandon met and got along wonderfully. It turns out Lev is well able to handle himself phyically plus he is armed and had a gun and crossbow. He is surprising and will not seem so capable to others. They all will need protection. Unknown to them, they have an enemy who wants to torture. fuck and kill them. Maddox, now out of prison, wants revenge on Jaycen and Troy and those they love. Maddox has a new face thanks to plastic surgery and is hired on as a ranch hand to be close to his targets. This is a scary situation. I hope he underestimates Lev and is handled well by him

Simon and Yidian are trapped inside Lord Crusnik's brothel and are powerless to disobey him. Lord Crusnik controls them and Simon is being dominated and fucked over and over without concern. Simon craves cock and Lord Crusnik uses him. Simon is at the center of the brothel and the key plaything. Connor finds him and is disgusted. He, too, does not realize Lord Crusnik is controlling Simon and is so upset at the dominated and out of sorts person he is that after fucking him that he leaves. Who can save Simon? Yidian is powerless to object. Will Simon die under the control of Lord Crusnick?

River's character is more fully revealed as he diagnoses himself. He is a giver and the one who takes care of his friends. He is there for them and tries to fill in the holes and help them deal better with themselves and others. He ends leaving work to find Alec and help his handle his newly tweaked medicine which is acting in new ways. He has been taking care of Alec since they were 17. River feels he does not give himself enough personal time . But he is considering something new: focusing on one guy and not playing around. He will not yet admit it to Kenji, but he sees him in a new way that makes him nervous. Let us see how their date goes.... Kenji does..."Make me nervous that is. Partly because of what we might get involved in and partly because I was dangerously close to the conclusion that if I gave this a chance, I might like the guy. A small corner of my brain whispered softly that I already liked him or I wouldn’t have kept up communication. I wouldn’t be meeting up with him. So yes. The answer was yes. Kenji made me nervous and it was a feeling completely alien to me."

Drugs---It seems the people are drugged and dazed when they take pills at the one meal of the day. Lyoth took the pills and is incapacitated. Starwren did not take the pills and heard Mama talk down and swear at everyone at the meal. She was acting drunk and sounding crazy, Starwren took Lyoth out of the meal and towards the trees. Lyoth was not coherent. Suddendly an older, frail lady touched Starwren and asked for help to escape. Is she for real or is she acting as part if a security effort to trip Starwren up? What is her story? This place is bizzare and not grounded in reality. I hope Starwren gets the granitewood and flees with Lyoth while the people are drugged. He will need to decide if the old lady is speaking the truth.

It looks likeOscar will no longer visit his mother and siblings due to his mother's bad opinions.attitude . She seems to not like Oscar and that is sad.His siblings are upset. Hmmm His grandparents have thought ahead and showed Oscar a new building complex made for him. It will be modular and is going to be built in phases and hidden in a hill with camouflague at the right area. I think they need to explain the project better to him. It is much large than needed for one person. He will need others to live and work in the complex. Why and to what end?

What a happy time showing they all are are so giving and decent and hands on pleasing and able to let go to be supportive and generous. Lev and Brandon are going to continue growing up surrounded by more love. Would you not like to be part of this group?

As for biting his tongue, I bet M was just trying to energetically act with Connor after he drove his tongue into M's mouth. He did now know what he was doing really. He did not realize he would hurt Connor or make him bleed. M is acting on new impuses and feelings. Remember, he told Connor he used to be fed by a tube not through his mouth. His mouth is a new device for him to use.

I really appreciate the word pictures you draw of the people/friends Dan and Vaughn meet. Our two main characters were able to get along with most of the ones they met, except for a bitchy activist who became more rigid and vocal. Some of the people you want to know and others not. Vaughn may find two of his friends who know about Dan's boss inviting them both to meet later. The art show of nude men in paintings and photos they attended was an eye opener for Dan. He saw a straight marred policeman he used to know in several graphic sexually alive paintings. Dan was told the artist was very convincing, Dan is having his world shaken. I would have also enjoyed the show--especially the photos.

His mother asking to meet Dan and Dan agreeing to meet her ups their relationship to a new level. I am happy to see them evolve.

They all settled into the ship easily after commiserating about the sad death of Golvinte. Suoki helped by the child Rian fried a pleasant snake meal all liked. It was finally a happy time on the way to Boullia Bay.

Connor told M about his childhood trauma with his dad and at school and why he would not kiss him. Connor got a pit bull and M loved the dog. He was named Jack . They were a great couple--boy and dog. M wormed his way into Connor bed at night. When Connor woke up he saw a luscious M sleeping next to him. He could not resist M any longer and began to kiss him. It was a glorious time and Connor French kissed him running his toungue inside M's mouth. But M bit his tongue. Connor was in pain and shocked. He ran outside and ran far away. M must be distraught. Unfortuately, Connor found the man dessed in black. Connor ran into the swamp trying to lose the man. He did lose him and Conno realized he was likely going after M. Connor ran back to his trailer very worried about . I bet M is safe. Jack, the pit bll, would protect M. But then man in black had to have scared M. The boy must be so upset by now. Connor and M need to reconcile as Connor comforts M.

Freedom---Nathan is taken and put in a stocks for public display and then in a cage in a large square. He is so tired and hurting. Surprisingly, Brohm shows up one night and frees him after killing a guard. Now they are fleeing. Will they keep their freedom or be caught? Nathan has questions but holds off to focus on their escape.

Let is hope the trial run for a week turns out well. Both have so much to give each other.

The entire group less their murdered friend are set to meet in the future. Fonith said she was messed up from the torture, though. Starwen and Lyoth landed in a supposedly uninhabited area on Jitha to collect granitewood. Instead they meet people and a leader called Mama and greeted by“Welcome to the Entry of Ecstasy." Something strange is unfolding. Is this a drug fueled cult and that might try to capture them or is the group harmless?

Wow--the last chapter ! There are so many loose ends and promising developments. I hope you return to this story in due course, please. This story advances or has advanced in reasonable amounts and at a focused pace. Kandric's last chaper was an epic of world class length--maybe a record for nifty--in many segments that told multiple stories about several characters and required great concentration to comprehen and tie together. I do want to know about how the end points in Kandric develop--now that the green dragon secret is out, Afterdusk is in the world, the positive role the drow played is known, gamba is is losing forces, Kandric's brothers are very active and fighting forecefully, Kandric needs to fight Flexna, etc. I worry it will take a long time to create and publish the next chapter of Kandric. Maybe, I worry too much..... Good luck Kyle in carrying out your vision--You always write interesting tales.