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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    chris191070 said Enrico is not limited by laws--to paraphrase I expect Enrico and his team will face Dr Hale and Agent Smith who are in the LA compound torturing the drugged-up Andrew and preparing a brutal video showing Andrew under extreme distress to force Will to act as Agent Smith wants. Enrico could skillfully take over the compound and not hold back. When Enrico sees how badly Andrew has been hurt, he will feel free to forcefully interrogate Hale and Smith and not worry if they die.
  2. akascrubber

    Bollocks

    Very interesting premise about a tortured, lonely , magical soul who is seeking the proper key to solve his main problem. You tell us he thinks he just has seen on TV what he wants. Now his long hunt begins afresh. Living in America , I was not aware of the prevalence of CCTV surveillance. This condition is scary and so limiting. I am very happy to learn you are keeping up your other writing projects.
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Excellent--The plan worked. Silas and his gang finally gave up and were utterly defeated with no loses by the good guys. Jack was sharp and fearless and scary. But there is more to go and the big boss needs to be brought to justice. It should be a great ride !
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    There are five intel sources to be forcefully interrogated. CSIS will handle three in Canada. Enrico may find Dr Hale and Agent Smith and will seek to get all he can from them. Enrico has no restriction to prevent him from killing them. With these 5 sources the full effort and clear US involvement could be revealed
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    Enrico masterfully handled Hayes and his wife, He found the likely place Andrew is being held by the location of pills for a doctor in Louisiana. Enrico will have his staff research the doctor and possible location. I bet Enrico will go to retrieve Andrew soon.
  6. Noah is being sued. His mother is claiming he cannot inherit from his grandmother because his mother gave up her rights to Noah. It is a preposterous claim. However, his mother hired a high powered lawyer who maybe accepting a percentage of the winning for her fee, The amount at stake is very substantial. Now, his mother's lawyer called his lawyer, Noah and others. She began by saying she hired a private eye who found out something surprising. We will find out her news in the next chapter. I bet Noah's lawyer will need to get his own investigator.
  7. I hope Brad goes back to Alexander and tells him what he has learned from. Brad Well, one thing he learned was that he made Brad mad when he told him he saw him getting a blow job. Brad said he liked getting bj's from guys. He did not say his behavior will change when he gets married Brad worries if he should tell Bella. He does not know her. I bet he will make her mad at Brad and himself. She may not want to see Lyn again. My opinion: Do not tell Bella. He has his own secret life he does want exposed. Plan on being polite and then leave Brad and Bella and do not contact them again. Work on your relationship with Alexander. Brad and Bella are set to blow up in a few years or come to an understanding
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    I wonder if a Commonwealth country might send military support ? I do not know about political connections or the history of military support among the Commonwealth. For example, Australia must have a robust military.
  9. Brad and Lyn had a heated discussion. Their words hurt each other. They cleared the air on some maters and were not fully open on others. Lyn's image of Brad as shattered. Brad admitted he liked getting head from guys and not him.. He would not accept a bisexual label. He just knew what he liked. He will not tell Bella. We are left with two questions. Will Lyn tell Bella? What happened between Lyn and Brad at the end of college? Brad tried many times to reach Lyn to apologize, and Lyn did not pickup his phone
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    Rick's painful nightmare about Martin's death keeps coming back. He has a better idea about who the killer is-an older, sinster looking man with gray hair. He has seen him twice during his new job. He just cannot make the connection to know who he is. I think Rick is going to be better motivated to look through Marin's records and look for this sinister man. He still does not know why this man is following him now and killing again.
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    They have a plan to defeat Cobb and it is a good one. They know Cobb and his weaknesses "We don't need a siege," Theo said, looking up from the map, his eyes reflecting the guttering candle flame, making them look ancient and knowing. "We need a haunting." They will carry out a good haunting and then lure the enemy into a perfect location to be killed seeking to capture Jack who Cobb desires Sawyer and the men are dedicated and motivated to win no matter their physical problems.
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    Totally surprising and thrilling--honor, and thankfulness matter--This is a joyous statement that is made for the people of Canada and the media to record "Get the Dutch Ambassador on a secure line," Will said, his voice thick but utterly steady, the voice of a king who was no longer alone. "And prepare my motorcade. Full protocol. I am going to meet them on the tarmac myself. I want every camera in the world to see the King of the North shaking hands with the Red Berets in the snow."
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    The Dutch remembered their debt to Canada in World War II and sent forces to aid Canada when the UN and NATO could not act The Dutch PM said..."And right now, the nation that shed the most of it to liberate this continent is being strangled in the dark. They are not asking for our armies. They are asking for our memory. And what are we if we forget?" Will was provided combat fatigues recommended by the Army. He saw this as his new uniform to wear from now on--just like Churchill started doing in WWII. Will likely is going to meet with the Canadian military command and then with the head of the Dutch forces.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    So, if you know how to handle dynamite, it can be moved and placed to hurt attackers and can then be exploded if it by a bullet
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    I hope you chose to go forward with Coyote Kathy Bates should stay away from you.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    The information from Enrico and Xue will change the mood and increase the concerns. I expect Will and CSIS will get very angry and more disturbed once they find out how destructive the drug Andrew was given. He was neutralized and taken out of the game once he stated taking the drug. Plus, Dr McLeod was wrongly made Andrew's doctor. She needs to be intensively questioned along with Gagnon. Can they provide more info on other moles and Silas and give any insight on where Andrew is?
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    The odds have improved greatly. The enemy turned on each other thanks to Theo raising doubts in their minds about Coob and his men being left behind without the gold. Cobb is nowin charge outside, He and his men killed the two lawyers. They have the money, Sawyer is reunited with his men in the mine. He knows they need to get outside this canyon. How will they regain control of their lives? Is there another way out of the mine? Can they move the dynamite farther outside the mine or a few sticks at least and hide it. They could shoot it when attacked to blow up the attackers . Hopefully, more ammo was found for them. Make killing them too dangerous and Cobb might just take the gold and flee. BTW, all this gun fire and some explosions might attract any soldiers looking for their gold.
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    Will was given a document in Chapter 4 -- Authorization for EnhancedI Interrogation: Detainee 004 (Gagnon). Did Will sign it? Was he also asked to agree to a similar procedure for Dr. McLeod? The information Enrico has learned about the drug given Andrew might help him agree to enhanced interrogations.
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    Enrico is aggressively investigating Andrew's missing event. He knows right away the US has taken him and is hiding him. He finds the name of an unknown to him drug prescribed by a Dr SE McLeod. Enrico send Xue to investigate this doctor and take his son, Alex with her. She is to see the PM and probably be cleared by the DG who knows Enrico is on the case for MI-5. Enrico can clue her into what the drug does and how badly Andrew has been impaired. Will the DG let her have information on McLeod? I do not know how Xue will do it, but Enrico wants his son to be placed with Jacob and his two friends. Enrico is on his way to the secret manufacturing site for the drug given to Andrew. He and his men will be brutal. He wants to know who bought the drug.. Unless it was the CIA , I expect Enrico might find out Silas Abernathy bought the drug. He will get his details to find Silas. Now we will see a nuclear weapon dropped on him by Enrico. Silas will be seriously pressured to tell him where Andrew is. I do not think he will refuse to answer Enrico.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    If Dr Hale carries out his new mission to utterly break Andrew and make him a pitiful creature captured on videotape to torment his husband, is Andrew going to be seriously mentally wrecked ? If a broken Andrew is eventually freed by Enrico, is Andrew only fit for living in a long-term care health institution?
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    Any chance the Calvary will eventually come to their rescue? Is not how the lawyers and Cobb have acted illegal -especially in terms of Wild West mores?
  22. Wow--Vince blew Theo who tried to act not impressed but he was very pleased and rewarded. Vince was clearly experienced and an expert Vince had more of a challenge with Jack who felt so inferior to Theo's probably larger, thicker dick. He worried Vince would be disappointed with his member. Vince carefully turned Jack on and gave him a terrific blow job. Jack has nothing physically to be worried about. All three had fun and two enjoyed powerful sexual releases. Vince swallowed two cum loads and he was happy. A line was cross-sex. They can do more of the same again without hesitancy, I assume.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Coop has decided that Adam is the guy for him. He told his "parents" He is beginning to rethink the last day. Two guys seem odd. I bet other possibilities will stand out as he reviews the files in their room.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    It is over for now--The lawyers want a trial and public shamming in court. Cobb wants them all to die painfully. Only a new force from outside can change the path already set towards multiple deaths beginning with Sawyer
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    This extreme , , intense torture is wrong and old school. THE CIA learned at Gitmo after 9/11 that repeated waterboarding over many days -simulating drowning-broke the most committed terrorist.
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