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Brad and Jake got their points across to the key production people. Kendo will be written out of the show. Travis' antagonistic show father will turn off his attitude outside the actual filming. It looks like the absence of Travis will be explained by saying he went into rehab. The painful withdrawal Travis experienced was described in painful, graphic detail. He suffered. Will stayed with him as he was abuse verbally by a sickened Travis. Only as Travis seemed to come back to a normal status free of dependency did Travis begin to appreciate Will. Travis still has a long way to go. Will is going to keep om supporting and his turnaround
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Chapter 15: The Asteroid Ship Episode
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: The Asteroid Ship Episode
How can the crew survive being fed the horrible food Mikkel creates? "I call it Emergency Ration Surprise! It utilizes the stolen Kareshi proteins and the glowing green mold Guy scraped off the walls of the derelict pornography room!" -
Sounds like the wrestling could become very erotic and orgasmic ! Wow....
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Chapter 15: The Asteroid Ship Episode
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: The Asteroid Ship Episode
Hollis and the away team saved the inhabitants on the asteroid and adapted to their weird archaic ways. Tweek and those on the spaceship protected the asteroid from terrible, destructive space weather. The mission was successful. Hollis and Tweek were drawn together more closely. What is next for them? -
Their life would have been infinitely harder and much more exposed to the insurgents without the help of the very kind old Arab man. Andrew's injury is braced and Will can now see.
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A kind older Arab man, Farid, saved them out of the kindness of his heart. Andrew's ribs are bandaged tight. Will is no longer blind. The were now going to the coast with makeshift clothes that may disguise he enough. There are more tests and more danger ahead.
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Who took the photo? Earnest? Esperanza...Why? Why did Ali deny masturbating/ it is a common practice for young men without a male companion Larence needs to talk with Ali after his list is prepared. Will Lawrence be injured when he wrestles wearing only a loin cloth? Who will be his opponent?
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When the dust settles, I hope to learn that Travis is getting better, off drugs and mentally prepared to face his future without Kendo.
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Chapter 14: The Alternate Timeline Episode
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: The Alternate Timeline Episode
I will not try to make sense of this episode and just go with it .I have more admiration for Tweek, He is committed to the crew and Hollis. He has dedicated his life to them when given other, better options. -
Chapter 5: The Kill Box
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 5: The Kill Box
Andrew was very effective and lethal, He killed most of the 14 attackers, Retreating to Will in the vault. The remaining attackers are going to be stalled by the vault walls,cColonel Yusuf al-Maghrabi may be killed outside. At least his forces have fled. Will and Andrew can escape through the tunnels. -
Messy, lines blurred and sticky and more chapters to go ! That combination sounds troubling and complicating I was ready to find they could have an adult conversation and accept they had likes and dislikes and could keep the love that matters and not be disruptive Miles and Troy communicated simply and matter of factly not showing or requesting or exchanging any emotional or sex laced texts or pics
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Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
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Much better explanation than I expected.Miles had serious burried issues with his dad and sister. He knew he and Troy had a too red hot love going. The bottom line--he felt he needed to leave to not stop Troy from pursuing his dreams. There are so many issues and you covered them You gave us another cliffhanger. Miles is going to see Troy in Virginia and hopes Owen can be present I do hope the three meet and work out a peaceful and comfortable modus vivendi. I especially hope Owen will no longer be worried that Troy wants to be with Miles, instead of him
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Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
Love the new picture of Hollis and others on the command center of the ultra-modern USS Zodiac. They look very alert and competent and have risen to the occasion. Now tested, Hollis and the ship have a Number one and Number Two. -
Chapter 4: The Dinner Bell
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 4: The Dinner Bell
Andrew reached the CIA and PM Hesston and asked for help while they were in the American Embassy compound. Andrew is going to get more ammo and small arms fire to aim at the local terrorists and keep them away until an American airstrike can stop them If things work out in the favor of the Carters, they will flee and look for two other diplomatic compounds. The know the British compound is surrounded. The insurgents from the palace will not give up looking for them. -
At my favorite local English place, the Fox and Goose, I enjoy my scone of the day with Devonshire or clotted cream and jam
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Julian feels at peace. Daniel notices it. He knows Julian is waiting for someone to arrive. The actions to prepare a festive celebration are carried out with Julian's imprint: shining stars from a tree, a festive wrapped fence , individual generous monetary gifts for the workers plus toys for the kids. Christmas will make a happy impact on the families
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Chapter 12: The Episode With A Real Budget
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 12: The Episode With A Real Budget
Flip helped Hollis realize they were in an alternative reality. " "We have a billion-credit starship, and we are still the exact same miserable, unqualified idiots flying it." Why are they in this new reality? Is some force or being in charge over them? Are they going to be attacked? -
Chapter 3: The Russian Tank
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 3: The Russian Tank
Colonel Yusuf al-Maghrabi looked at the wrecked BTR 50 and the area and just knew where the Canadians would wrongly end up . They would flee to the American Embassy seeking protection, but fail. The Americans had evacuated their embassy, unlike the British who stayed. Andrew is going to realize he and Will are now trapped and the insurgents surround them. Can he find a way out not known to the enemy? Does CSIS or MI6 have any contacts in the city that could help them? West has found a way to have the enemy machine gun dstroyed, but created a huge explosion inside the compound. Peter creatively told the kids in the vault that it was a dragon sneezing. He comforted the kids and kept his story up. The people inside the embassy continue to survive. -
Chapter 11: The Season Finale Episode
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: The Season Finale Episode
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Chapter 11- Nos's Gift
akascrubber commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 11- Nos's Gift
Cal and Nos are finally united in having glorious, passionate sex. The description of Cal's horns and tale glowing were fascination. Cal is so excited and his tale has been growing longer. They are a happy, fulfilled couple. Orion apologized to Nos for his past insensitive actions and hopefully cleared the air. -
Raith started out very angry at Azula and kept his anger hot as he spoke to him. Azula did not tell him of his plan to present the foreign offer and to break the sword of the Baselius. He could have been killed. It had to be a surprise for everyone to work and it did. Together with the evidence Raith provided, the Sura Clan was exhonorated They broke apart and harshly spoke as Azula left for his home. They needed time to decompress. Raith at home realized Azula's home was not ready for him and ordered the needed material and food Raith visited Azula to see if he was satisfied. The tensions dissolved at their next meeting. Azula said he was no longer a morning chief after 6 years. He could make a promise and he did. He told Raith he loved him and Raith told him he loved him. They placed a braid in each other's head to show their commitment The night became joyous and passionate. These two strong men are united
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Chapter 11: The Season Finale Episode
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: The Season Finale Episode
Yes and the little one, the mouse, always gets away Sorry, T'Virith -
Chapter 11: The Season Finale Episode
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: The Season Finale Episode
Collectively, the Zodiak crew survived their challenges and surprisingly joined forces with the enemy ship to become victorious. Everyone held a final celebration. T'Virith and Hollis knew the truce held for now in respect. Later, the Zodiak will be hunted. -
Chapter 2: The Blind Architect
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2: The Blind Architect
Will knows the people in the palace want him for a hostage and leverage. Al-Maghrabi wants Will to make his faction more powerful. Andrew is not needed and might be killed. Time is short. They are trying to escape. With the DSO killed West is in charge. He authorized lethal force. Good. But, the situation is grim. This is not 55 Days in Peking with a multinational rescue force on the way.
