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  1. akascrubber

    Access Granted

    A masterful chapter that ended the CIA system lockout and reboot. Josh did his job and went home to his new family. We do not know why he and his parents were targeted and they saw a need to kill themselves? Josh knew Garret and Lindsay were not his biological parents. Who were his real parents? Why was a CIA team requested to kill Josh? What operation did Walter Green shut down? Was it the assassination team? Was Josh the package that was secured? The system cam at his father's workstation called Josh a different name , Caleb, and the interface was removed right away, but Josh felt the system was following him Will the CIA follow Josh? Josh and Caleb--his inner voice--have made peace and are working things out. Does Caleb have a real function that will be called upon in the future? I hope your epilogue really answers the key questions.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Two very broken youths know the truths of their real pain and now can only express hate for each other . They are real messes and have lost hope for a better life. Why the talk of Garret fucking Finn? Will they become more hateful? Is anything going to change?
  3. akascrubber

    Prologue

    So, we have two different guys meeting and being tormented by each other--hmm Given your track record, this story should be very interesting as I find out the evolving path you are creating
  4. Yes, Granny did have a plan for her graphic designer, big city nephew Alvin and her cottages' resident, earth child gardener Tabby. She left her home to Alvin subject to meeting certain conditions over a year or it would be sold to support a nearby cat shelter .Will Alvin and Tabby get along. How will Alvin handle the scrutiny of the townsfolk and the tests of owning an older home and busy garden ? Read on and enjoy how the two grown together and handle their differences. You will find out Granny was a very wise and insightful woman
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    Chapter 13

    What a charming, heartwarming, uplifting story. Two very different men grew together. They learned to fully love each other and love their wonderful home.
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    Chapter 13

    I really do not like Ben. To realize how he sadistically , ritualistically killed that guy s so scary and terrifying. He made a statement hidden from the police while making KIieran the suspect. Plus, he will not stop killing and making Kieran the key suspect again or will Ben make a new guy( Riley or Tez_) the suspect? Kier is in danger of being really charged by the police. He was warned for the last time. What will Kier do, if another brutal death happens? For now, Kier is like his own less form of ashaken monster. Lee became is forceful release willingly." He was Kieran Varys. He was a murder suspect. He was a monster’s creation. He was a boy’s desperate god. He was a weapon, still warm from being used."
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    Jody found a hot older guy to help him really enjoy his summer job. They fucked often and he even topped one time. It was fascinating to learn he realized he had been fucked by 28 guys. He still is optimistic and sexually alive with his partners and not jaded
  8. I can see they are both headed for a mutual disaster unless some unforeseen event intervenes to change the calculus. Kleb cannot commit and breaks up with each boyfriend after a while. He has a date tonight with Dennis but intends to break it, Will he actually break his second date? He likes Dennis. Dennis is hiding his extreme wealth to not discourage Kleb and really likes Klebber. He is going to bring his brother along on his date to ground him to be a more caring, listening person for Kleb. What will Dennis do if Kleb cancels? I think he will track Kleb down since he knows he is starting his vacation.
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    This love story felt like a come to realize type romance novel. The text and descriptions of their feelings and sexual couplings were soft, gentle and not erotically and physically graphic and more in the style of romance novel. It is touching and a choice he made. We can also see our author has the ability to be passionately graphic portraying the emotions, feelings and physical couplings of two men in the Estate which he says is not a love story.
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    Encrypted

    Josh said it was numbers--so the file name could have a number identifier. I do not want us tripped by language because it is the result or the right numbers that will open the system that matters, I suggest.
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Wow--that Ben will surprise me sounds ominous! It is not a love story so or a comedy so it might be a tragedy? Well, I am even more intrigued and want to see how this tale turns out. At least Alvin and Tabby are brightening my day.
  12. akascrubber

    Encrypted

    Josh learned again he had the love and support of his new family who are doing their best to love and protect him. He told them as much as he i-understood about his two-part nature. He joked he was James Bond. I think he is more like Jason Bourne. He learned about the key intel system shutdown and his possible connection. He agreed to go through the car chase and attack simulation to see if he will be jarred to remember the encryption password that he thinks are a set of numbers. The same events were followed and he moved to the critical point and the chapter ended. Will he remember the password? Will he understand more about his split nature? Will Josh be able to have a normal life free of CIA involvement or will he be still tethered to it?
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    I considered Ben a sociopath , but you called him something else. I looked up a solipsist person and found this explanation...." describes someone extremely selfish, self-centered, or lacking empathy, focused only on themselves and ignoring others' feelings. " I am surprised that Ben does not see both have different uses and transactional values for Kier. Riley keeps his Cradle Grove ground game alive and foot soldiers in sync and provides him a supportive home. He is the sergeant major. Kier has not fucked him--yet. Lee wants to be the strategist and collector of intel. He is the lieutenant in your words. They both feel alive passionately fucking more than once in their private sessions and crave their intimate releases The battle with the wolf will consume most everyone's attention till it is over. I still wonder what Ben really wants. If it is to maintain his dominance, will he fuck Kier and maybe like a medieval lord assert his Droit du seigneur and fuck Lee?
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    The main question was answered---"I am here," Tabby murmured, his voice a vibration against Alvin’s chest. "I choose this. I choose you. I am not leaving this bed, or this house, or you. Ever again." Then they made love, real love over and over. This is now firmly a love story.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    "Kier considered that, he was fond of Riley, genuinely fond of him. But Lee… Kier swallowed at that thought, the passion that came from their encounters. Kier wanted it again, that wasn’t love, that wasn’t fondness, that was desire and it was powerful" But, still not yet understood at Harrison I assume Ben knows Kieran craves Lee sexually and will use this weakness when Ben wants to use it. Ben is having strategic influence from the sidelines. He gave the key vulnerable weakness insight to Lee who is oblivious to his real intention and power. Lee thinks Ben is powerless and not involved with him or Kieran.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    I do not think Alvin will first request will be to ask Tabby to clean his gutters? I bet he will want Tabby to join him in something more intimate and personally thrilling.....
  17. Yes, finally pure bliss--All three let go and are mutually pleased "Theodore believed himself to be a just alpha. And an alpha cared about those closest to him, who now happened to be these two humans. But it was more than a sense of duty guiding his actions now. There was also this luscious hunger growing inside him, releasing him from guilt and the self-imposed prison he’d been living in...."
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    Will Tabby stay home next winter now that he has Alvin as his true love?
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 30

    With this increased police surveillance, they have a better chance of finding Cochran-I hope Might Rick show Casey pics of the minister and Benevetti to see, if they were clients? Thise could really shake things up, if anyone of them was known to be a client.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    It warmed my heart to read finally---“I love you. I'm coming home. Your Tabby” Having lived in a northern Detroit suburb for 4 years --though in a climate controlled apartment--the Winter and early Spring scenes sounded familiar. Brrrr.
  21. akascrubber

    Prologue

    I loved the Falcon Banner series. It seemed to start as a very interesting story that grew onto a compelling, comprehensive saga. You have a fascinating, creative mind that has produced many interesting stories on a wide range of topics. You have the ability to keep on growing and a wonderful urge to compose more. I hope you can be able to write the Black Prince.
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    You mentioned Cabot Cove. I thought of Miss Marple's stories of St. Mary Mead that inspired her understanding of human nature. I am looking forward to more Merrickville based stories
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    Sounds like Carter's Campaign is ready to be two books by its length so far and your goal for a ambitious story
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    Clarity of purpose and direction for Kieran--Approval of new character forming by Ben "A King didn’t choose between parts of his own body. He used them. He commanded them. Lee was the knife. Riley was the hand that held it steady. Ben was the forge that made it. And the Wolf was the stone on which it would be sharpened." Kier will meet the blue Astra tomorrow. What will happen?
  25. akascrubber

    Jealousy

    Will and Carlo visited Jeremy and Kris in NY. Will found two guys to give him satisfying fucks and had so sex with Carlo. Meanwhile, Will served as a counselor and sex therapist for Jeremy and Kris. Jeremy made Kris Jealous by spending more time dancing with Carlo. Will purposively got close to Kris and made Jeremy jealous and turned their relationship around. Will is very inciteful and caring toward Jeremy
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