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  1. People are afraid. Eitenne and Amelie had prepared a strong defense in their partially built home. Brother Matias is going to attack them and the official cannot stop him. We are left awaiting the attack. I hope Brother Mathias can be defeated
  2. Troy severed Jace well. He gave a great blowjob and acted like a excited bottom. Troy has not told anyone in high school he was a well experienced cock sucker and loved having sex with straight jocks. Jace really liked Troy's sexual talents. One task down and won and more to go to earn his spot at the frat.
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter Five

    Let's hope Joey is saved and he can begin taking care of D. Joey is a nurturer as well as very good looking and tempting to D.
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    Sorry, I added a comment on the wrong story--
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    Let's hope Joey is saved and he can begin taking care of D. Joey is a nurturer as well as very good looking and tempting to D.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    Hugo found the fiddler and he was his devil."I have told you, you perceive me as the devil, and so I am, in a fashion." His devil gave him roadmap and a warning along with an encouragement to enjoy his passions with Stoker, He was warned others in the time stream do not approve of gay sex so be discrete. "You have claimed the first Aggregate, you have four more to go before you get an understanding of what’s happening here. But be warned, each one will be more difficult to claim than the last, and each will force you to face a part of yourself you would rather keep buried." So ,Hugo will have a painful journey of self-discovery before...?
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 36

    What I am hoping to see in your final chapters is how you knit together the final parts and show Andrew and Will recovered and hopefully praised as things turned out along with Templeman, Sir Edward and MI5 valued, and Mason Defarge disgraced for his conspiracy efforts and overstepping what is proper. But, maybe, I am asking too much. We will see !
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 36

    Templeman rose to the challenge and dispatched by disabling three of the 4 professional hit men from following Sinclair's orders. Dr Reed acted decisively and threw a heavy statue at the final man and knocked him unconscious. Enrico was observing--using the internal cams ??-giving Templeman strategic advice on where to place himself to fight them really was useful. The special rifle Enrico offered Templeman was very effective and much better than his borrowed handgun. Is Ezra now joining them? “Go mum!” Ezra’s voice broke through the silence of the wrecked apartment." His mother will be so happy. I expect Enrico will blend away letting Ezra stay with his mum. Sinclair is no longer needed and is set to be killed by Xue, I expect. Templeman has the information from his passports. Will he use Andrew's phone to call Canada House to ask for help if he cannot reach MI5 or his MI5 boss?
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter Five

    OMG--Joey keeps making bad decisions. He is back in Warren and is leaving on a job for Ronnie in Cleveland, Dam reached him by phone and told him to stay in Warren, He was coming to get him. He had already killed a guy coming after Joey. D is going to miss Joey who has left his home for Cleveland. Can D find Joey in time to save him from being killed in Cleveland?
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    I think the late evening when the teenagers return or begin to eat breakfast the next morning could be the scene of a firestorm. Celia and Trace seeing how messed up Joel is will demand answers from Joel and Colt. Joel will try to play his situation down. Colt might dig his own grave by saying he was not near Joel and was not a part of the fight. Whatever happens more questions will be asked by the parents and Colt and feelings will be hurt. Joel might even withdraw even more. He is likely going to be part of a wider rumor campaign after the fight. It will be soon known at his old school that Joel has left his former school.
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    Hmmm---"The devil fiddles." Well, then he needs to meet the witchhunter soon, I suggest
  12. “This is for your athletic performance,” he said, voice level. “You want to be loose on the rings.” “Yes, Coach.” Ha! This is for Casper's pleasure as he really train Eli to submit to him. "My only job was him. My mouth. His pleasure." "Maybe it was serving him. And maybe that should’ve scared me. But it didn’t." Eli is totally hooked and Mason is on him and wants to know what is happening to Eli
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    They are becoming more comfortable and attuned to each other--- “There are things I’m seein’… tis more’n I dreamed of an’ I want t’ thank you fer it. For bringin’ me here, for showin’ me all this.” Wojciech turned his head slightly, feeling Stoker’s strong arms and broader frame surrounding him. He sighed, a deep, contented sound, sinking into the comfort and safety they offered to him. In this moment, with Stoker’s arms around him, the world outside, with its looming wars and mad Witchhunters, felt distant, almost unreal. Sin be damned, there were evils in the world, and in the streams. But one thing he knew, he just knew it, was that right then, right there, with Stoker, there was nothing evil about them. Their connection was pure, unburdened.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    What a great tragedy. The fourth bandit followed them and killed Sam's sleeping parents and was ready to kill him. A fight ensued. Sam was righteously energized and fiercely attacked the bandit and killed him suffering a knife stab wound. While recovering, Mr Kent, the blacksmith, came to the cabin and learned of the sad deaths. He left to get others. Sam found a wonderful site to bury his parents. He knew he had to prepare their grave by himself. Now what happens with Sam and the knight and the townspeople? I think Sam needs to get away and clear his mind and focus on new things, not the sad past.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    The peaceful garden was just another way station. They returned to the transit station to be unnerved hearing a violin playing. What now?
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 35

    I can see ways those who think they are in charge lose their way and are destroyed Sir Mason Defarge was to control all intel and thinks he is going to get it--But other agencies, Like MI6, will oppose him. New intel from other sources who will be looking to oppose Defarge will counter his narrative--intercepts of Sinclair's phone call to Enrico and Yanni's analysis and be useful Sinclair is blissfully unaware of Enrico's and Xue's opposition to his plans. I can see Xue killing Sinclair. Enrico has to decide if he is going to kill Jared or leave him to talk to implicate potentially Sinclair in the sub mess and give them a scapegoat to take the blame as they flee Right now, other things have to happen to show us what Templeman and Will can do. Are they at dead ends? How can Templeman find Ezea? Will can conduct an inhouse investigation and might turn up Yanni. Could Templeman call her on Andrew's phone if he needs help? Argh.....
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 34

    Andrew and his crew mates are heroes, and their outstanding results will safeguard them from Lord Mason who cannot touch them. The Royal Navy will protect them and interview them. Andrew will report the involvement of the Northen Aegis Defense company which will require a heavy security move on the London company HQ. Will the PM see he has made a mistake and return MI5 to its full posture? I can see a leak to the press. The PM's reputation is on the line
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    Joel made a huge mistake going to the falls. Colt was hostile and was upset that Joel was with him and his family. He was not told why Joel was with them. Plus, Colt was picking up his girlfriend and they intended to be close as they drank at the falls. Joel met two people from his school who were surprised to see him. Luckily the baseball team was at practice. One loud mouth bully from his high school shouted at him and made people notice, They got into a fight and multiple punched were thrown, Joel's knuckles was bloodied and messed up. Joel moved away. Davin sought to comfort him and help him with an ice pack. He went through reasons why Joel might have moved away. He ticked off some reasons not mentioning that he was gay. Joel hesitated and realized he had to be careful. Right now he feared the answer. I also think if Colt finds out Joel is gay, he will get upset. The fallout from the fight at home could be epic. Joel better have an explanation. Colt is already mad at Joel and he is messing with his time with his girlfriend,
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter Four

    OMG----D finally put Joey on a bus and told him to go west. Joey got on and got off. He asked for a bus ticket to Warfen, Ohio.He had to go home where he was needed. He did not understand that he was going to be killed and maybe others in his family also. Joey felt he did not fit anywhere else. D was taken by Joey who he thought was beautiful and a virgin. Joey at the end felt D was very appealing and he was confused. The stage is set for a potential disaster with lots of death with at least Joey and D targeted, D dropped the ball and would pay with his life unless he is lucky. Will D spirit Joey away now that he may no longer have a home?
  20. I am so sorry for the harassment you went through for what you have written. I hope you can put this painful experience away and can look ahead with a positive attitude knowing you are appreciated. I am glad you have largely resolved the matter. Please do take the time you need to recover. You should enjoy and feel good about what you write, and it will show through in your chapters.
  21. akascrubber

    Fisting Finn

    Interesting----Tomato Martini Combine 2–3 large basil leaves, ½ cup Sun Gold or cherry tomatoes (about 5), halved, a pinch of kosher salt, and a pinch of sugar in a cocktail shaker or large glass. Smash with a muddler until tomatoes are broken up and pulpy, about 30 seconds. Add 2 oz. gin, 1 oz. dry vermouth, and 1 cup ice and stir until outside of shaker is frosty, about 30 seconds. Strain cocktail through a fine-mesh sieve into a chilled martini glass (this will remove any tomato bits and seeds). Thread remaining 1 whole cherry tomato onto a cocktail pick and garnish cocktail
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 34

    Much better learning how to take on guys with hocky training versus Quidditch--no brooms in a sub. Andrew was masterful, powerful and lethal when needed. If he really had been in the Royal Navy , he would deserve a medal for saving the lives of UK sailors and saving the sub.
  23. akascrubber

    The Healer

    Danny healed Ryder, his mate, with one kiss then another. Now, he is placing his hand over a wound on Ryder's father injured chest to fully heal him. He realized he had a great calling, "Danny understood his purpose. It was to love and care for his mate’s pack, and it felt so natural that he could no longer see how he’d never been aware of it before."
  24. "And Lyn didn't have to wear a dress made from the draperies." Yet...Who knows what Alexander has planned
  25. Are you abandoning this story? Please don't
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