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What a ness! I am not sure what Carter can do when he reaches the ship assuming the high wire transfer goes well. Even if he or someone on the crew realizes a virus has laid the sub low, how will the get rid of the virus? I can see most of the crew be evacuated since the sub is not useable and some experts brought on board to diagnose and correct any problems, The material hidden in the wrong guy's kit could alert the ship what was done and hide the identity of the true culprit, Andrew will need to be on top of the matter if he is to find the real bad guy. Can he figure out that the Faslane attack was done to enable a replacement sailor to be substituted? Reza is an Iranian. His actions will hurt and embarrass an enemy as a minimum, Maybe the sub will be turned into an unusable asset. Iran might also get the mine tech.
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What a crafty , hurtful person. Rikard met up with the young emperor in time loops meant to evaluate his power. He knew he was more powerful thgan him Rikard called the young man a third generation transcendet and a creation who is serving is purposes."Your existence, your resurrection, serve my purposes. You exist for a destiny, one that I have created you for. You could say, as your creator, and as the man that controls your destiny, I am God's God." His broad smile grew even more amused as he mulled on that thought." Across time and space he had a crewman shoot Taine twice. The young emperor immediately moved to save Taine and leave Rikard to his own devices. Rikard learned enough about the young emperor. He can be defeated, and he will tell Caldone how to do it,
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The hospital picture and story of Will's grief viewing his ill son has gone viral in Canada and won sympathy from the political parties. Will was upset that this would be exploited and became mad and very vocal. Lisa his smart aide helped him climb down. Will agreed to her recommendation on how he could quiet the hubbub and make a proper response. Andrew and Templeman went to Aegis Defense Systems to follow up what was found about the attack. Andrew was to play the good guy lawyer and Templeman was to play the bad guy. Ezra was identified and his mother was known to be a senior scientist at the company. When they met with the company corporate lawyers they were told the company had an internal security problem and it was being handled internally. MOD has not been notified. The lawyers Andrew and Templeman faced a non-cooperative wall. Andrew as good guy kept saying Canadian security cannot be compromised and not everything could be revealed. Templeman acted stressed. Andrew's role playing worked. The head corporate lawyer asked Andrew to follow her to discuss the matter further. Templeman was left behind in the conference room. It turns out Andrew was taken to meet Sinclair would was impressed by him and knew Will was his husband, He did not think Will played for his team or on his side. Let us hope Sinclair says more than he should and discloses the real security concerns he has. Maybe he has other assets looking for Ezra. Will he tell Andrew about the man Ezra was going to meet?
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Mec and Adam have long term plans. They have a huge force expansion is underway. The regional vote passed with over 90% of the vote. Marc was ready and had Adam's support for this current effort. . Fleets are already dispatched and control of key areas has been established. Overwhelming miliary force will push the expansion and deadly force if necessary. The 5 sectors will now be 13 sectors Marc thinks it will take a minimum of 5 and up to 10 years to transform the 13 sectors in appropriate ways.
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Darien returns mystically to Excalibur. He understands Rikard's deception. He is really seeking Peligia. How can the Excalibur in its present state and lack of knowledge beat Rikard to Peligia? Darien and crews have some clues to decipher. They will try their best. "And you think this has something to do with the puzzle?" Galadriel asked thoughtfully. "The Rock of Braal, the logs, this..." she held up the disk, "and now the music... It's a complicated one. Do you think we're going to figure it out?"
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JJ is outed giving a fellow high school classmate a blow job. He faces threat and ridicule when classes re-start. Two friends protect him and a high school teacher befriends him. Right now, life is going to be tough for JJ. I am looking forward to finding out how JJ and this story evolve.
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Jacob is going to recover--but "it hurts." He understands two committed dads to support and protect him nearby. This change in his health status is a welcomed relief after a long vigil. Andrew is away from his position at work not analyzing the present situation. Meanwhile, the Finch accounts are being studied and the raw data is available to be analyzed. Key connections remain to be found. But, new information has arisen upon the notice of the murder of two individuals connected to a defense industry project now being tested. The is one more item for this puzzle. Sinclair will also be notified. Will he tell MI5 about the phone report on Ezra he was given? The name Alejando could be seen as related to the mysterious "Al." Enrico and Ezra meet in Enrico's apartment. Ezra has found evidence on Erico's hidden life as a spy. He is unsure and worried. Enrico shows up bloodied and bruised. Ezra immediately gives him first aide. Enrico tells him the men seeking them had to be stopped. The rush of danger and Erico's obvious pain took over Ezra's concerns, The feel to the couch becoming more physical. This was cathartic and needed. Will Ezra and Enrico face new concerns as the situation evolves. Ezra needs to be kept in the dark about Enrico's real mission and that Enrico killed the two men and that the project connected to his mother has been sabotaged. We can expect Ezra will not be told about classified matters. Will Sinclair tell MI 5 about the tailing of Ezra by his men to find a leak? If Ezra is made a target for the Uk/CSIS , he will be pursued and sought as best can be? His mother will know he is missing. Enrico might at some point need to figure out how he can handle his involvement with Ezra as the situation becomes more uncertain and dangerous. Being seen with Ezra could be problematic. Is he even thinking of giving up his life as a spy and no longer seeking to destroy America? What will he have to do with Ezra?
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A restless young man, Sam, meets a at knight at the front door of the home of his parents. I can see an adventure beginning....
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Hope the right chapter sequence is posted ASAP
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The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
akascrubber commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in The Beach Episode (Because Apparently That’s Required)
So Skylar and Gabriel ended up passionately kissing and bare ass grabbing in public with Ryan seeing them. Skylar got into physically connecting seriously more than he expected, Now Gabriel was driving him home. Still more play mighty happen. Gabriel listened to Skylar's concerns about just being out and needing figuring out. His response to Skylar wound up was perfect--he said he was willing to do more when Skylar wanted to do more. Plus, during the beach party Ryan had essentially ignored him Now, let's see what happens and if Skylar's Greek gods trust him differently during the next week. Will Gabriel become more touchy and leave open a possibility of a future date? Will Ryan stop the tutor sessions or delay them? When they meet for tutoring will Ryan become more physically attentive during knowing he has competition? Or will Ryan reinforce he is going to be a straight male and stop hinting at Skylar?- 48 comments
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The spy, CPO Miller, in the sub is operating easily and is considered part of the team by his mate. No one considers him as not a regularly trained sailor Enrico waited for Ezra at the train station, But before they meet, Enrico sees two security operatives who know him . He understands they are following Ezra and know something has been compromised. If they see Ezra meeting Enrico, then the spy will be compromised and seen as an enemy and no longer supporting Sinclair. Acting fast on the move, Enrico uses body language to direct Ezra to a restroom for a non-public meeting. Enrico and Erza hide in a closed stall. Sinclair's two operatives search the restroom but cannot find them. Alejandro tells Ezra he is a spy named Enrico and these two men want him. Ezra is stunned. Enrico gets them to change clothes. He asks Ezra to take a cab and go to his place., Erza is given his key. Enrico promises to tell Ezra what is happening when they meet next, Enrico lures the two operatives away and kills them in an alley with his bares hands. He is a deadly opponent. We earn Enrico hates America. He considers the CIA set up and ruined his father. Moreover, he hates the conservative American leaders, especially Trump. He wants to hurt and embarrass America. So, now we know his motivation and deep hatred of America that is guiding him. But what is Enrico going to say and do with Ezza? There is a potential for lots of loose ends. He needs a convincing back story. If he cannot convince and win over Ezra, he may have to kill him. Ezra knows where he lives if other people convince Ezra that he has been told a fable ,he could spills the beans on Enrico. When Sinclair's men do not report in, I expect someone will follow up and from the reports filed check out Ezra.
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Chapter 1 - The incident
akascrubber commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The incident
Good Luck with your revision. You are a good and compelling writer. I have appreciated your later works as I have read. I can now see you have grown. I will want to read this fully revised story. You might try to republish in some form with an updated title so it will show up in this time period and not be seen as an older work and get little attention. If this type approach is allowed by this site? -
Pinemoor, Here We Come?
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
The original main problem has been solved. Ryder convinced Pembroke or Theo to go to his Pinemoor pack to take care of the clairvoyant who ruined his pack before she might go after him. The story ends with a cliffhanger. As Theo's plane approaches Pinemoor with them, they can sense her power and it must be very strong, Can she be defeated? Along the way, we learn Danny is more than human by Theo's judgment and Jack is a skilled clairvoyant. Jack did not reveal all he predicted about Pinemoor and is this a real problem?We learn Theo might be able to rebuild his pack. The next chapter should be explosive and consequential!- 58 comments
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Lex Tailionis remained as the top ship on its destructive course. The weaken Polian gunship without a proper crew fumbled along trusting in hope. It was no threat to the Lex Tailionis .Lauren was almost stressed to the max By luck and a fluke, Firlotte found the jump drives and Polian gunship was transported very far away. " "On the Orion border so it's actually declared neutral space..." Things are turning up. Lauren and her crew are safe.
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The evil, cruel bastards got the unexpected shock and pain that they deserved from magical beings. Things did turn out well. The hot victors ending up hugging and tickling each other. Hooray !!
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The inn and airplane service are operating with talented staff and growing. Love making is verry robust and fulfilling. Randy and Maverick have gotten married and begun their honeymoon. “CAVU,” I whispered. Randy smiled over at me, with eyebrows raised in question. “Ceiling And Visibility Unlimited. A good way to start the first day of our new lives.” I am looking forward to part II. Thank you for a fascinating story.
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Jacob has sepsis. Will is told by sprogs doctor ..." the next 24 to 48 hours are critical. We need to see how he responds to the antibiotics and supportive measures." Will feels useless and is very worried. His good friend Jared McMillian is by his side. Hopefully, a silent communication interruption is effective and Jared will not be identified at the hopsital. Andrew has used his identity at the Swiss bank to gain access to Finch's data. The Swiss bank operation and copying of Finch's files seemed to be carried out without raising any knowledge by the bank. Andrew operated efficiently with MI^s help. The Canadian "cousin" succeeded. Enrico arrived before Andrew and completed his takeover of Finch's money. This could be fortunate, Now, Andrew and MI6/MI5 will have the ciurrent and best financial details . Enrico is unaware of what Andrew has done and must feel safe, His actions controlling Finch's former assets can be tracked. Let us hope Andrew's identity as Jared is not found out or his picture is not taken by the photographers with Will and Andrew at the hospital in London. Andrew is now viewed and a worried spouse and parent, not a spy. Andrew and Will have 24-48 of crisis ahead hoping Jacob pulls through without complications. Enrico could have problems if his now overseen control of Finch's money begins to impair his use and shows who is involved, including himself.
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Lyn was moved by how Brad touched him and was worried he revealed too much about his feelings for Brad. "Was this closeness what he truly wanted? Obviously, Brad was aloof, blind, as Alexander said, and Lyn worried that he had already given himself away too much." Whereas Alexander's home was old money upper class and his grandfather was openly hostile to Lyn as a "charity case." Lyn was incapable in seeing beyond his preconceptions about Alexander who was touched by Lyn's expression of friendship. But, Lyn did not realize that Alexander was impressed ....“I’m not going to tell you. You’re too entertaining by being so dense to ruin it by telling it to you straight.”
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The attack on the huge Asmus fleet with the hunter killers fighting in pairs has begun with the first wave of combat. Sephradon on the Asmus flag bridge is upset at the losses with their losses. The rechristened upgraded Raptor EW ships have effectively blinded the fleet. The losses so far are not heavy and the fleet size remains enormous . Katz and his DEW officer, Alessandro have effectively destroyed the key fleet EW ships. The are being attacked but still remain effective. The hunter killers have fallen back but will return to attack the fleet. This is the fog of war. Much remains unknown. It is likely that the raptor and hunter killers will not survive but , they are hoping and praying they will have a negative on this fleet and may raise concerns from other Asmus forces that thought they had a free hand to attack the Sentinel. I want to see what happens next!
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Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
akascrubber commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
Sky, Ryan and Gabriel can get into such much mischief on the beach wearing swimsuits and t-shirts. Will Sky have to make a painful choice on which one to choose? Gab as the most likely gay man who wants him could have the best shot at removing Sky's barriers and acting more intimate with him. Ryan should come with Madison. Ryan and Sky have agreed to be bro's on the down low. But Seeing Gab make passes and touch Sky could possibly make Ryan jealous and he might get more touchy and physical at their next tutor session. -
The battle has been joined after the governor's nephew was saved. The Governor will back the Noirs. The priest will back them from his pulpit. “I will stand with you, Esteban. Not just as your friend, but as the senior priest of this parish. It is time the Church in this city was represented by faith, not by fear. And I will not cede the definition of faith to him.” The Governor showed support for the Noirs. Brother Mathias's chapel was delayed, His supporters lost government contracts. The changes and support by the senior priest were noted by the people, Brother Mathias listened. He is not giving up. He is going to study the ways of the witch to destroy her. I bet he will fail.
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This is an encouraging story of a loner gay guy who goes on an African safari that begins his willingness to explore his sex life and adopt attitudes and eventually find a good partner in the US. He finds good males along the way and is willing to try new things and grow,
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Things turned out well for a transformed gay man. A loner Vic went on an African safari and lucked into a gay guide who taught the joys of gay sex over two weeks. Vic returned to the US and wanted a new look, a new hairstyle along with a more confident outlook. He next lucked into a hot, compatible guy, Jason who spent the night with him . They continued dating but Vic did not want to commit exclusively to him. After a break, Vic called Jason up for a date and Jason turned him down. He wanted to be with a guy who will commit to him Vic was in turmoil and did not want to lose Jason. He drove to his place and asked him to be the one for him. Jason accepted. He wanted Vic to decide and thought shock therapy was a real test for them. Now, they are together and very happy. It is always uplifting to read a happily ever after story. Guys can learn and grow and find a good partner.
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Calm Before The Storm
akascrubber commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in Calm Before The Storm
I love alll the happy tickling, Each guy knows just where to touch their friend/partner to set them off and make them feel amazing. They are living more encouraging, fulfilling relationships, Trouble, though, is on the horizon. -
Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
akascrubber commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
What delightful torment ! The emotional handwringing moments are priceless Sky meets another handsome, hot stud by running into him, Gabriel is a dream come true and as it turns out is in many of his classes. and wants to be seen with him, He likes Sky. Gab agrees to go to the gay club meeting and wants to attend the senior beach party and says he hopes Sky will attend. Gabriels meets Ryan after the club and is told Sky is tutoring him. Gab and Sky exchange phone numbers, Ryan takes Sky home and meets his sister before they go to his bedroom for tutoring. He needs more help from Sky. and he gets it. Ryan tells Sky in confidence he is intending to breakup with Madison after the junior prom since she wants to win it. Next another gay theme--Ryan asks Sky if he is seeing anyone. Sky says he has eyes on someone and does not know if he is available. Ryan says is also crushing on someone, but they do not know it. Ryan thinks he should go for it. Sky thinks he is straight and does not even think he is being hit on, Ryan told Sky he should go to the beach party. He is going-with Madison ? He does tell Sky if he breaks up with Madison, he still wants to be tutored by him. They say goodbye at the door, Sloame thinks he is into him and wants to see him in shorts. Sky blows her opinion off. Now, Sky will have two rocking hot guys at beach party. One , Gab, is likely gay and one may be in the closet after him--or maybe he is misreading Ryan, He is messed up. Confusion and more pain to follow......- 64 comments
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