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  1. Jack and Danny teamed up and fumbled through until they found a way to destroy the witch. She wanted to kill then all. and was only stopped at the end. The wolves remained unable to fight and stop Cassandra and they were stunned and powerless, The Alpha Ryder was clawed and bled. But, only Danny and Jack were able to fight Caassandra. They were the only ones sentient and fighting the witch who until the end appeared unstoppable while she froze others and caused intense pain at will. She did not know what Danny and Jack could do. They beat her and she was on more. “Hey, Danny,” Jack’s voice pulled him back. “I think we did it!” “We did it? What? And how?” “I have no idea, but Cassandra went the way of the Wicked Witch of the East. She’s no more.” Hooray! Now they have to find Ryder and bring him and his pack back to life and full power.
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    Chapter 6

    "A young, aristocratic student at Cambridge in 1910, he believes in order, science, and the well-defined boundaries of his world." Oh My--Stoker is going to turn Hugo's world upside down. I hope he can rebound and learn how to adapt to relaxed boundaries with Stoker. So many more things are changing that they both need to grow and keep learning in my opinion.
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    Chapter 24

    I am still focusing on how Andrew will help solve his damaged sub puzzle and how Will might aid the resolution of the troubles on land. But as you think ahead, it seems Andrew's cover is broken and therefore both might be in line for honors for their exemplary public service before they return to Canada. You will know what is appropriate. Maybe they both can receive the OBE award or something similar.
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    Chapter 6

    Stoker knew what Hugo wanted before he could say, Stoker had to say his piece and set the table, He initiated contact and Hugo's desires were unleashed, They kissed and kissed, Barriers ended, Their shirts were opened for more exploration and touching> their hands moved lower. Stoker wanted more and said so. He had never had a gentleman before..."Besides,” he smiled again suggestively, his eyes twinkling, “lets get over talkin’…” What an unexpected and graphic, passionate growth in their relationship and real needs. Hugo is learning from an experienced partner. How far will they go? Will they now act differently towards each other and lower their cultural barriers? I am looking forward to seeing how they now relate.
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    Chapter 27

    OMG--The terrorists must have off loaded onto the UK sub as the first 10 sailors have been evacuated onto the rescue vehicle to be transferred to the Aegis corporate ship. It will take 8 more runs to remove all but the last 18 people, including the captain, who. will remain as a skeleton crew. Andrew is staying and will leave with the last element being evacuated. Is he going to be saved? Will the terrorists begin their destruction of the boat before all of the possible crew can be evacuated? Might Andrew in the last batch notice the terrorists in their sinister gear with equipment and take action to confront them and start a battle with serious consequences? Or are the terrorists intending to hide from the crew and then leave explosives behind in the form of timed bombs and then leave in a final rescue sub trip so that they can live as the UK sub is blown up. If so, Andrew should be suspicious of the final 4 individuals in strange military gear who will leave the rescue vessel.
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    Chapter 4

    I love all the good natured tickling. These guys are having fun. being tied up added a wonderful tension on the bare feet. Someone might think about blowing on the bare feet and maybe licking them. The photos should be amazing and worth framing and placing in albums.
  7. So Lyn needed to get over Brad having a girl over for sex. Alexander knows it bothers Lyn. Hmmm Alexander is very insightful.
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    Chapter 5

    They woke up intertangled in a new area, Now, missing what was not on their person which distressed them Working the watch, they now found themselves on a mountain top in a large tent with scientific materials and a newspaper showing they were in the future. Wojciech was upset he was too familiar with Stoker and spoke harsh to him. He send Stoker out after food. Wojciech seems to have found a computer which mystified him. Stoker returned with hot tea,.Wojciech apologized to him for being harsh. They are lost and further way from their own time and place. I guess they will continue to stumble along. I hope they stay safe.
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    Chapter 26

    Enrico is clearly misguided and reads the American political situation wrong. So, he is planning two disasters in the UK to paint a terrible international situation so that America will turn from Trump to Hillary seeking someone with wise international skills. But, the situation is confusing and not straight forward. Well, right now the evil actor is not Russia which Hillary suggests is trying to control Trump, but a rogue Canadian defense contractor. Her claim about Trump will ring hollow and off base misreading the true threat. A Russian sub is even helping the disabled UK sub. The effort by the terrorists in the rescue sub to sink the UK sub will further tie Sinclair and Canada, not Russia, to the crippled sub. The mine made from stolen plans is constructed by UK firms. So far, there is no mention of adding ways or connecting by leaks that tie Russia to the new mine.
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    Chapter 26

    .... a profound surprise to Enrico himself. People were selfish. People betrayed people. People were driven by survival. But Ezra was none of those things. He was, Enrico realized, something new." Sinclair wants Enrico to kill Ezra and he will not do it after what he has learned about Ezra. Enrico has other very destructive plans and no longer needs Sinclair to cause the problems that will influence America and its presidential race. I can see Enrico knowing Templeman is after Ezra might decide to kill Templeman who does not know he is the mysterious "Al."
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    Chapter 7

    "I hadn’t let any of my friends know me, all the years that I played baseball with them. I didn’t know what a real friend actually looked like, I didn’t allow myself to be one to them either." I think this situation will stop in due time. Davin is trying to be his friend and maybe more. I think they will need to get more comfortable. This sleeping arrangement may raise concerns tomorrow. It is totally innocent. Joel needs a reason to say why he was kicked out. He has so many things to work through. He has people around him to support him , if he lets them. I wonder what role Cody will take. He has likely a new school to attend and new people to meet his last year in high school.
  12. “He’s coming,” she whispered, her voice trembling. “He has what he wanted. He’s coming for Lucien. Soon.” Etienne is ready to shoot the evil, corrupt Brother Mathias to protect his unborn son
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    Big plans

    Let us hear the plan to extract the information from Big. Confront him as a group. Find out by pressuring to learn why Big is going along and who is really behind the drive going after Travis. If the Serbs stop helping Big, Big could look for other bad guys. With the right info, a solution can be found to help Travis.
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    Chapter 4

    More reasons to be disoriented...They are now in a sandy tropical environment. Wojciech searched and found a representation of a large cock with 5. 55 time emphasized. When he returned to Stroker, he found that he had shot a large lizard and was roasting it. They both ate parts of the lizard and talked. Wojciech found he liked the touches Stroker gave him apparently innocently. Wojciech promised to work to get them back to their homes. They ended up sleeping next to each other. Are we seeing the start of a physical relationship they both do not anticipate? Stroker says he is not the marrying type. The longer they stay on their trips, the more they will need each other.
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    Chapter 25

    OMG--The next horrible step is going to happen, and the sub crew is not aware of the danger. They are expecting help from a friendly vehicle and are not expecting an attack. The disguised mercenaries are going to travel in the rescue vessel and dock with the injured Royal Navy Sub. They will not be trying to rescue anyone. They intend to cause mayhem and kill people and further damage and sink the sub, if they are successful. Can the Royal Navy sailors react in time to prevent a disaster?
  16. Great turn of events ! Angus is facing a disaster!
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    Chapter 2

    Wojciech found himself in a hall of mirrors. He thought of magic and fantasy and knew he was in a new place, not Cambridge. His mind reeled. The watch was the new element in his displaced environment. He was surprised to see a dead German soldier who held another similar watch and then met a woman in a bride's dress also with a watch like his who told him to not lose the watch. She fled by moving back through a mirror. Wojciech could not follow her. So held his watch and moved through the mirror to a rural area and met a young gamekeeper who imagine he was a poacher and pointed his shotgun at him, They began to talk and the gamekeeper became less hostile Wojciech's world has been turned upside down. He is trying to cope and be rational as strange things are happening, He knows that death is an option. He seeks answers but really is adapting to his new script. I think he is in for a wild, disorienting ride for now.
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    Chapter 23

    Now we have the reason for this story's name. "Pressure equalized as much as we can, sir!" a voice yelled, strained. "Cutting complete! Standing by for breach!" Andrew Carter is pulled out through the breach in the flooded compartment and saved when his prognosis was previously considered poor Hooray! The skilled naval sailors worked out a near miracle.
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    Chapter 1

    Wow Wojciech is lost supposedly in Cambridge, disoriented and off his rocker. Things are not right. An unusual and provocative way to start an adventure. Already 23 chapters ! You are quite prolific. This can go so many ways. Our hero could have a new destiny and might not be dying in the trenches on the continent, it seems
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    Chapter 3

    Sam is idealizing a knight rescuing lost souls. It is all glory and happy times with little blood and savage death. He is in for a rude awakening. How will he handle real life and learning war is hell ?
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    Chapter 22

    So many moving parts. Seeing how the rescue progresses is going to be fascinating and a testament to the author's skill. The ending intrigue shows the Government cannot remain focused on just one problem. A nasty bomb is being built on land.
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    Chapter 20

    Wow--Will is mystically connected to his mate. "Will jolted awake, a cold, sudden, inescapable sense of dread seizing him." He deeply feels something is wrong with Andrew and it is. Will may not find out for a while what is wrong, and he is going to worry.
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    Chapter 19

    The small rescue sub is on a dangerous course. "This wasn't a rescue; it was a contingency, a brutal back-up plan should the initial gambit fail. " If Reza fails with his initial gambit, these men will cause havoc. They have firearms. Weapons fired inside this nuclear sub can be disastrous and breech the walls holding back the sea.
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    Chapter 20

    Rikard is a nasty piece of work. He killed VonGrippens wife and led g him to Peligia. But, he underestimated him. He wanted Peligia first now. Along the way people are dying by is orders Traveling through the FTL, Mayfair and his soldiers are searching for something , but they are not certain what exactly what they want to find. Under attack, men die. Mayfair is saved from a Polian by wearing the patch, Taine told them to wear--Now What!
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    Chapter 21

    The attitude Sinclair and Enrico reminded me of Proverbs 16:18 "Pride goes before destruction, and a haughty spirit before a fall," I can clearly see Sinclair fall when his role is discovered. Enrico might escape back into the darkness with Ezra unless Ezra holds out connects him to the mess. Can Enrico convince Ezra he is on the right side even after the killings and destruction are revealed? Will the Stockholm Syndrome happen and tie Ezra closely to Enrico?
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