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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    And Stoker will use powerful, addicting sex play that Hugo really wants to force the renamed Hugi to accept his new endearing name. It will further break down their class barriers
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    Hugi--it will shock and torment Hugo if Stoker calls him Hugi!
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    The witchhunter forced them to move on using his flintlock as a reason. They followed a new path and reached an out of sequence metronome. Hugo figured out what was wrong and adjusted the metronome until a new catwalk appeared, He and the witchhunter began to walk along the catwalk. Hugo realized it was flexible and warned his nemesis to throw way the pistol or he would shake the catwalk and let the witchhunter fall into the abyss. The witchhunter fired wrongly at Hugo and fell over the side, Stoker asked if he was dead. Hugo said he will survive since he still has his watch, but they do longer have one. They will move on with the protection of a watch. The witchunter might find them again. More danger...
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 34

    I want to find out how Andrew and the crew are saved. So far, I hear speculation. I expect Andrew is going to return with his family to Canada. Only 4 chapters to go--The tension is building
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter Three

    Joey is living a poor sad life, but it is all he knows. His luck ran out and he saw something he should not have seen. Vinnie wants him dead D takes joey out and tells him he is going to die soon if he goes home. He saw something he should not haves seen. Joey is bewildered and does not understand why he cannot go home. He has responsibilities, D offers him cash and a bus ticket away. But, Joey still wants to go home. For some unknown reassort D knocks him out. Life is going to change for both of them They will be on the run with D in charge. I cannot wait to see how they act and stay safe.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 34

    Andrew did it. He took the right advantage and killed one thug and then used his weapon to kill two more thugs. Then he approached the control room and convince Bravo, the last mercenary to give up or be killed. Bravo surrendered and was zip tied, It is over. Andrew was a hero and made the difference. Now they have to notify the Russian sun and looming UK warship that they are in control and will need to leave. The rescue sub is available.
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    The title of this story is "Learned to Lie" Does this mean Joel is going to learn to lie about his past and sexual orientation? I do not think he can keep why he moved hidden for an extended period of time. Gossip and rumors travel fast. I think Joel will need his own convincing story or maybe his version of the truth.
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 58

    The plans for the expansion of the house are coming together. Ten fleets are established giving the house overwhelming force to intimate others and maintain order. Marc and Adam are very pleased. They are bringing together their children and grandchildren to see what they are doing This assembly is encouraging Marc and Adam to have more children. They like being parents. They are also happy to see their children take over the leadership of ships.
  9. I do not anticipate a completely sad ending. I bet it is possible a couple might be formed, and one person could get his comeuppance. But, this is something to be worked out and new options could arise. Our author is known for her HEA endings after struggles She could surprise us with her current story
  10. But this is just the end of day three with many more days in this wedding party There is lots of time for secrets and desires to be revealed and intense sex to happen and for some to come to realize. Right now, I expect they will split apart at the end of this vacation going their separate ways--unless the author throws us and the characters a curve.
  11. akascrubber

    Fisting Finn

    Good Kris told Jeremy he loved him and Jeremy told Kris he loved him. They both meant it. They are in a new, stronger period in their relationship. After a wonderful meal and family play time, Finn, Travis and Will went to his bedroom for hot sex, Brad had educated Will how to fist. Will took his time guided by Finn to bring Finn into his most satisfying orgasm so far. Finn gave Travis a BJ will he was being fisted, To cap this off, Travis fucked Wil. What a sexual extravaganza! You have outdone yourself Mark Arbour.
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Stunning-Hugo and Stoker worked their way through a series of doors and followed narrow paths. Stoker thought he heard someone, but Hugo did not. They solved another puzzle with hourglasses, when danger appeared. A man from another time dressed like a puritan placed a gun at Stoker's neck and told them to obey him. He called Hugo a warlock clearly using the terms of his olden times to explain mysteries. “It seems you have been quite the busy little Warlock, and your thrall here can’t save your miserable hide this time. Now I would suggest you accommodate my demands, and refrain from hexing me in the process.” The puritan seems to know them and maybe they have meet in another stream. They will need to be wary to stop the puritan from hurting them.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    He cannot face it yet, But, Joel will be asked at inconvenient times--maybe at the falls. Why did he move? He cannot really answer the query so new to the move, but he will need a convincing public reason at some point --eg conflict over his future career goals with his father, need to join a new baseball team to help him get into college, etc--and maybe a more open private reason within the new family. I can see him promising not to approach any teenage males with the family and the twins so as not to make them uncomfortable.
  14. Cane23 in response to your query, I consider Brad a charming user who knows how to use people for his benefit. He is marrying well as he wanted. He almost needed to add Lyn and Alexander to be part of his party with other high status people. They are his best friends from college and have turned out to be successful as a doctor and a lawyer, so they bring credit to him as people who have done well. Lyn kept him academically in shape. Brad seems not inclined to be gay and did not take up Lyn's hints and strong admiration for him. I am sure he could read he signals and knew how to set limits to keep Lyn away. I can also see a social status reason for Brad maintaining his separation. Alexander knew Lyn did not have a chance with Brad. As for Brad's possible drug use, the reasons could come out later in the story. He can afford drugs and they might be an acceptable part of his social grouping. He could feel anxiety about his place and want the comfort drugs bring him. Luke must know what Brad did staying so long in the restroom and he was not concerned. Brad returned and became physically close with him which he did not oppose. He easily accepted Brad being so touchy feely with him in front of Alex and Lyn.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter Two

    D saved one and did not kill him as Vinnie wanted. Now he might save one for himself "Still the outsider. The tool. The cleanup crew. The disposable one." D knew he did not fit and that Carmine did not trust him. One slip up and Carmine would have him ended.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 33

    Only 5 chapters to go to a conclusion ! No false leads and no real interference by wrong-headed actors or fantasies of a wizard behind a curtain to get in the way and take valuable time. After 33 chapters till now, this implies quick, effective action by Templeman and Andrew who I hope all live. I want to see how you show what they do when pushed into seemingly no-win corners and save who they are protecting. Templeman might stake out the apartment and take on a weaken Enrico and a sad Ezra when they return for his forged papers and ask Will for help take charge of Enrico and Ezra and Andrew might kill and overwhelm the thugs in the sub and escape with the remaining crew. I can dream up scenarios, but what you will write has to be much better than my ideas.
  17. Brad spent a long time in the restroom??i Is he taking drugs? It is a dangerous, addictive habit. Luke must know what Brad is doing. This can blow up on him when his new wife finds out.
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 33

    Wow Will is going to face another huge crisis--It could be disastrous for him and Canada. He is being blindsided. With Yanni's help Templeman has escaped Canada house, contacted Dr Reed and arranged to meet her in London. He promised her he would find her son and save him. Can Templeman carry out his promises? He has no backup and is a wanted man, He is taking a great risk. I hope he succeeds
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    ^Trace and Celia are very perceptive. They know what Joel is thinking and tell him he is wanted by them and he is not a charity case. Joel is not convinced. Colt against his wishes is taking Joel to the falls. We do not know why he is opposed to Joel. I hope he does not meet any former schoolmates who know his secret,
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter One

    Joey is living a sad, soulless life with no one in his life able to help him. It looks like he is making a bad decision making deliveries for his older brother who could be involved in criminal activities.
  21. Richter is tested over and over. He is stunned and confused Master Field berates him for his lack of progress. Great things are expected of him. He was created for a higher purpose He must step up his game and power. Richter is surprised he must be able to control the Empire's Heart "It must be you," the dragon muttered, sounding almost unsure. "To wield the Heart, one must master Dominance to a near-divine level. In the foreseeable future, no one else will surpass you." To force Richter to focus on increasing his dominance. His Master broke the bones in Richter's arms. "Find Latent Heat to treat you, or Dawn will do." Through the haze, I heard the dragon's voice. "And don't use a medical pod, or I'll have to break them again." Richter was in extreme pain. He curled into a ball and sobbed. What will be done at some point to stop Richter from turning into a sadistic beast when he has supreme power?
  22. I had one friend who was a good lawyer representing individuals. He was aggressive and focused in court. Actually, he could be an asshole and that was what benefited his clients, it seems.
  23. Alexander thinks Lyn still is clueless. He offers to reveal it all at the end, but he shows in many ways he wants Lyn He does tell Lyn one shocking thing, but Lyn does not understand what he is saying.... about Brad. “What do you even know about me?” Lyn exploded. “I know enough. It will never be you, Lynton.” Alexander loomed over him menacingly. “Read my lips. Never.” Awesome--- Lyn remains clueless for now. If he figures out what is really going on before the end of this activity, he might be floored
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    Well, they thought about their situation and then got very personal--- Stoker thought things were random...“It’s too structured for that,” Wojciech mused as he began to clear dishes, stacking them neatly. “Too orchestrated. Watches, static worlds, clues. I think we’re in some kind of great game and we have to try to work our way out. There’s a designer, a purpose, however obscure.” “T’ain’t that simple,” Stoker drank some tea as he let Wojciech clear his plate. “If t’were a game, why’re they just lettin’ us sit ‘ere? Why not throw us another challenge, or tell us the rules?" They ended up in bed naked, Stoker was exciting and pleasing Hugo. Stoker ended up giving Hugo a blow job and trying to help Hugo decide to go along with his ideas of staying.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 32

    I think it is very interesting that the two critical actors at this point who are needed to solve the most serious problems under great pressure now are Will and Andrew Carter. I feel certain they will rise to the occasion and make the right choices. I also hope luck is on their side. "Napoleon supposedly famously stated, "I'd rather have lucky generals than good ones," highlighting his belief in the importance of luck in military success,"
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