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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    But, we have been told there are over 20 chapters with more to go. It seems there be lots of storm and furry and painful situations before Tarquin fails , hopefully, gloriously and cathartically for us. He is so easy to hate.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    Oh No--You are forecasting--I hope just one option--that Aunt Jenny-Lynn will kill Tarquin if she learned the true about him. "He couldn't have her in a federal prison. He couldn't have the wedding end in a SWAT takedown." So, you are suggesting one other person will sacrifice himself for jail time and instead kill Tarquin himself. I hope there is a way for Tarquin to be killed without the killer being found. These wounded souls do not need to undergo anymore more tragedy
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    What a great cast of characters to bring Tarquin down. I am really looking forward to finding out how they act and succeed. I expect to be surprised and very pleased.
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    West needs to plan ahead. He has to be ready for Graves to come after Peter. He has to hide the map and plan ways to get around the listening system or destroy parts of it. When Graves realizes the map is missing, he will assume Peter took it and go after him in an angry mood. He might act alone since he will not fear a hamster and an assumed absent West. West has to kill Graves or get one of his trained soldiers do it quietly--a silenced weapon ? Then at night Graves' body could be dumped in the canal or buried in the woods and disappeared? I suggest Graves who is now on to them cannot be allowed to live and threaten Peter
  5. Leo was transformed into a powerful instrument of Sila. He killed his father after confronting him. His father was a bigoted monster who tortured him, too. Now Leo was going to find the deacon who counseled him as Leo's father requested, but who also repeatedly raped him. Leo is getting retribution for the pain he received and being used up by Silas. How long can he last as he is now?
  6. I was thinking about George and his Spanish captain escort and their impending sexual pleasure. In modern spy terms, he could be called a "honeypot" where sex is used to loosen lips and discover secrets. This is one of the classic, successful spy methods. George is a great lover and must be able to ask questions to find out what he wants without being obvious. His sexual skills, his impressive naval record, his nobility and his association with the King of Spain should impress the captain and make him want to answer George's inquiries.
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    A common Old Testament statement is not usually fully shown. But it will apply to Tarquin if Finn can help it. " Pride goeth before destruction, and an haughty spirit before a fall." Two people visited him tonight. Oliver seeking help and more than touch. Finn did not respond and was professional. Oliver left but saw Orel's sanctuary. It was a wise move because Tarquin could have come upon them if they became intimate and hell would break lose. Oliver had been followed by Tarquin Tarquin seemed to know all about the visits of his brothers. Tarquin appeared and felt his cheek to show his dominance. He made sure Finn knew he should leave. He reminded him of his time in the barn , He saw Finn as an invasion of his rein and then Tarquin left thinking he won. Tarquin ignited a fire under Finn. He did not cower. He outlined an idea for a group that will form and called Lydia. Tomorrow at 10 AM she will bring Oliver with him to meet with them to organize and carry out their War. The alliance will be formalized. He needs ideas and steps to fight. Tarquin, the bastard, will be totally surprised, if they are careful. He will fall. The target is Founder's Day Gala.
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    Two people are not truly understood Tommy and Peter Will brought Harper Blaine to the ice rink to see Tommy skate. He was magical and wonderfully talented. She saw Olympic material. Will told her to throw away her old narrative and present a warm close family with a world class figure skater and hockey player. It will appear to the heartland. Blaine saw all the media possibilities. Wil saw a way to promote him and his sons to win public support and maybe his election chances. Poor Peter. West asked him to visit Graves and steal a map showing listening pots and other critical data, Peter was terrified as he entered Graves' home, Graves was touchy feely and pinched his butt, Peter created a distraction and quickly stole the map. Graves acted like he wanted to seduce him and Peter struck Graves' jaw. Graves laughed and said he hit like a hamster. Peter left rapidly. Peter returned to West and told him what happened and reported why he was upset. They proceeded to have the kind of sex that Petter wanted The resistance has the key map. But, Graves will connect the map loss with Peter, I expect he will not be laughing the next time he sees Peter. He could be very upset. Graves did not see Peter as the threat he was,
  9. akascrubber

    Best Friends

    I cannot imagine having that discussion in my biology class. We had fetal pigs to examine.
  10. Lyn was totally miserable after he returned. He would not take Brad's calls But, finally he listened to Brad's voicemail and Brad spoke honestly. He apologized for hurting Lyn. "Gosh, I have no idea how to say it… but the three of us, we’ve always been so misaligned." Brad asked Lyn to meet him and he promised to speak truthfully I hope Lyn meets with Brad
  11. Interesting--You introduced a term that is quite provocative Hamartia is a literary term, originating from Greek tragedy, meaning a tragic flaw, error in judgment, or mistake that leads to a protagonist's downfall, often stemming from an inherent imperfection like excessive pride (hubris) or a poor decision, but sometimes from a seemingly positive trait. Derived from a Greek word meaning "to miss the mark" or "to err," it encompasses failings, sins, or a fatal misstep that sets disastrous events in motion. Does it not apply to all three?
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    But, for now Ned's location is stated and CIA agent can be targeted to go after him and pick him up
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Yes, but Satan or the devil is the one to really fear.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    I wonder if Ned's encrypted diplomatic mail got through to Will and encouraged him. Did the USA NSA read the message and inform other agencies--like the CIA--who will go after Ned and try to capture him in order to increase the US control of Will? Enrico is ready to protect Ned.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter3

    Tarquin the Proud (Lucius Tarquinius Superbus) was overthrown in 509 BC due to the outrage sparked by his son Sextus's rape of the noblewoman Lucretia, which, combined with Tarquin's tyrannical rule, led to a revolt led by Lucius Junius Brutus, resulting in the abolition of the Roman monarchy and the establishment of the Roman Republic.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Well, you are indicating there are two competing love interests, so it sounds like 4 people--maybe Finn and Oliver and Orel and Lydia? I am just guessing so we will find out the truth as your story progresses
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Orel thinks Finn will be good for Oliver. “Ollie,” Orel looked up again. “I like Finn, he’d make you smile if you let him. I’m okay, if you want to… I can loan him to you, if you want to.” The awkward way of Orel’s, trying to give him permission."
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 37

    The boys are excited and happy be here. The tension is drawing Adam and Right closer. But, for now Rick has to leave them to work with the police,' Rick knows g he is the bait. He thick Corcoran will show himself on a side street and lure him to give chase so Cocoran can kill him That is only one dangerous option. I bet Rick will be surprised.
  19. akascrubber

    "Pure Love"

    I hope Liam can devise a brilliant retort for the media and blame their trip as an action by an agent who wanted more money from him and more control over him
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Are you saying Orel is gay? Does he like someone other than Finn who he was forced to fuck years ago?
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Orel is surprising. He turns out to be very perceptive. He knows Tarquin is controlling Oliver by using him or threatening him. Orel also knows Oliver likes boys and has since he was nine years old. He tells Oliver to go to Finn and he will help him. Finn helped Orel. He said he would loan Finn to him so he will not worry. Maybe, Finn can help him be safe, too. Orel knows Finn is gay. Orel is not. Finn leaves for the garage to see Finn. Will they be able to connect on a personal level. Will Oliver open up to Finn? Will Finn bring up Lydia liking Orel? I think Oliver needs to find out some way that Lydia is a financial mastermind. Maybe if they talk, she might be able to help him with his financial issues.
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    Just Perfect and Powerful William Carter stood up for his kids. He will not have them threatened and bullied. Then he stood up for his family and Canada speaking unfiltered to his citizens on TV. Hooray! "Je m'appelle William Carter. Je suis fier de qui nous sommes. Vive le Canada." (Translation: "My name is William Carter. I am proud of who we are. Long live Canada.") Let us see what happens next in Canada and Washington, DC.
  23. Things are still unsettled. Grandma found out she was sideline The Senator is on the run Tristan and Little B are here for now. The elders have questions for them Noah and Shiloh are together and safe. Danger seems to be around the corner.
  24. akascrubber

    "Pure Love"

    OMG--What beautiful, sensuous love making. They finally expressed their love for each other. Meteo saw Liam and choked but promised Hudson he would not tell anyone But, things got tense. Paparazzi flooded the outside street. TMZ showed up with cams. Liam knew what happened. His agent told the press to punish him and ruin Hudson's life What will Liam do?
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter3

    I think Tarquin has to be done in. He could fester and get more poisonous, if exposed. I expect a person will come forth to take him out and the murder will be unsolved.
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