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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 21

    Two weakness exposed--- Sinclair lost Jared when he said he owned him totally and Jared became incensed. He forcefully hit Sinclair and left the office fired. He might have things to tell Andrew, but his absence at the critical time leaves Sinclair exposed without senior financial input while his company faces huge financial pressure. The sub explosion will increase the scrutiny and the loss of Jared will heighten the worry of the markets Enrico has become very connected to Ezra. He is not a whim to him. He does not want him killed. His assistant Xue realizes it and says a legend or new background will be made for him Xue. warns Enrico this could blow up in his face, One puzzle to be solved--- Templeman cannot figure out why the plans were stolen. There is no traffic from intel sources saying someone has he plans. When will he realize someone in the UK wants to use the plans.? Is nuclear material available by terrorists in the UK? The Iranians are involved. The country is making nuclear material.
  2. Excellent cliffhanger--You are extending the pain and tension--The battle has not been fully joined Ryder's father rejected Danny and still believes the pack's clairvoyant. Pembroke and Vince went after Cassandra in a misguided effort Ryder and Danny and Jack race to Cassandra and find a real problem. Magic has been used by her to stop her opponents. Vince is trussed up on a rock with symbols overt. Pembroke is standing frozen, I hope Ryder and crew can stop Cassandra,
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    What a joyous , fun time--romance, tickling, kissing, sex, borrowing fragrant socks and other clothes. They were in heaven and really know their partners and what excites them.
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    OMG--Rikard is on the Excaliber. He can destroy is as he pleases. In a surprising strategy change. Riley does not want the sentinel to stay put. " We can't sit here and wait for Sephradon to come to us, she's gonna cream us. We need to be somewhere else. She's got everything she has formed up into this one big assed super fleet..." He smiled, "So what's protecting Earth?" Riley wants to take the Sentinel with its jump nexis and the Imperial fleeet and attacked supposedly an unprotected earth, Wow!
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    " They weren't sinking yet, suspended precariously at 300 meters, but the Acheron had lost her ability to pressurize her tanks for buoyancy control, her engines were mangled, her propeller a twisted ruin. This cutting-edge nuclear submarine, once a shadow in the depths, was now a crippled, silent coffin." What an ominous situation! With more information about the situation from the author, I am looking forward seeing how the professionalism of the Royal Navy makes a huge, positive impact.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    BTW, if the sub is able to be stabilized, is the small rescue sub with terrorists still a problem? Shooting within a sub leads to serious structural problems. They cannot get the detonator from Reza. Their real mission is no longer viable. Can the rescue sub even attach to larger sub's hull after the hull breech? Do they have a secondary mission of causing more killing and ensuring the sub does not recover?
  7. So, now we are ready to learn what is going to happen now that the groundwork is laid,
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    Wow--You have taken this story to the end for Andrew--All seems lost for him and the sub crew All Andrew's skills could not stop the explosion and his injuries. He is deep within the bowels of the sinking sub So, now will you let them die or find a deus ex machina type solution to bring Andrew and others back to life?
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 56

    I love the battle detail and the flow of combat. Marc had a wel thought out la, He was able to meet up with Adam and Hunter and Martin. The new areas were subdued. They saw they were lost. Adam is helping integrate new areas. Marc is going after the pirates More please...
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    I love the scenes of the two groups having sex and enjoying being tickled. The first one with three males including a half fairy who uses magic to add spice and the second on with two males earning big bucks online was stunning. Everyone was pleased and so comfortable within their groups.
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Things are getting set up. An expedition planned to destroy the Amsus ships as they refuel, Lauren thinks t is too easy and a trap, but she is overridden. Edward and others are trying to repair the Excaliber and adapt it to alien technology.
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    Just a thought.... Will someone at MI5 stand back from the weeds and ask why someone wanted the files on the nuclear mine? They might consider that some enemy wants to make one and use it on their enemy that includes the UK. This dangerous idea should inspire new investigations around this threat.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    I can see death all around. Things are going to happen no one in the government or intel services yet expects. The fighting on the sub should be brutal, intense and deadly. The invaders expect to die and will be merciless. They need the element of surprise and lots of luck. I hope the sailors respond fiercely. It will take time to get over the shots and killing to try to stop the attackers, It will be time soon to give Andrew a weapon, I do not see a path for Ezra to stay alive. Enrico or someone else will see him as excess baggage at some point while the mission is underway. Loose ends will be terminated. In fact, Enrico might be killed by the people he is working with, if the mission succeeds or not. The Chinese spy seeing Ezra and Enrico's apartment would tell her he has a weakness and poor judgment. The expected uproar and serious investigation from a real or attempted nuclear explosion and sub attack/destruction would lead the backers to eliminate any vulnerabilities or ties to them.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    Joel met the family and friends. The had taco's and burritos for a meal. Joel seemed to be awkward, but he was made to be part of the group. They were all comfortable and easy with each other. With some care he picked out a room and his boxes were placed inside. Joel became emotional as he helped open his boxes because this made things seem final. Ceclia hugged him and knew he was hurting. He did not tell her why he needed to move. Celia said...“He just told me that it was something we could handle and that you would tell me in time.” Joel is just beginning to understand the fabric of his new life. There are no sharp edges or anyone who opposes his move. It is up to him to adapt and grow and reveal his past problems. I hope he is supported as the truth is revealed.
  15. Travis has messed up siblings. He and others saw that they each got $50 million or the life insurance value Both still wanted to ruin him. Taylor thought her father was going to make her richer and Travis stole her bounty. She did not know her dad was going to screw her and make sure he won everything. Taylor talked it through with Travis and apparently saw the error in her thinking We do not know fully why Big hates Travis. I can expect his father spoke nastily about Travis, lied and poisoned the well about Travis. Big , I do not think, expressed any hatred of Travis when they talked after the father died.
  16. Lyn gave Alexander a surprisingly great blow job, It was only fair since Alexander gave Lyn one last night, Lyn thought..."Alexander looked like temptation incarnate." Lyn was taken by how hot Alexander looked and smelled. Alexander also has a wonderful large cock Lyn appreciated, . But Lyn was uncertain what Alexander really wanted. The volleyball game Alexander and Lyn won set some unexpected things in motion. Brad acted jealous of Lyn and Alexander' closeness. Luke in action was a desirable sexy guy. If he showed any receptivity to gay sex, Lyn might go after him should he get mad at Alexander. Is not Luke more like Lyn's target guy?
  17. So why is big or Trevor Buck going after Travis? He may not give up trying to hurt Travis? At least Travis is not facing his sister Taylor anymore, Jake and Brad need to talk.
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    Taine has gotten things organized and focused. Lauren is going to take her ship to find the Rock of Braal. Also, Taine is working to bring the Excaliber into tip top shape. The young emperor is on board as his lover and now chief engineer Edward had a plea for Taine. Taine agreed to his request...... "The Matriarch, you, the highlord Kardiac and Walker can stop what is going to happen; only you four can. If you don't, they are going to..." He swallowed, "Promise me you'll do this." "You have my word." Darien said with a nod.
  19. akascrubber

    Good Evening

    Luther and Richter are being very intimate. They easily act so it seems normal. Bu.t Luther mentions seeing Richter's collar which has his scent on it. Now Luther imagines he can dominate Richter and maybe see that he likes wearing he collar. Richter must have kept the collar from Kotetsu when in school.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    The stage is set for the hunt and reveal. The captain has been told the whole story, so Andrew's role is clear. The three new arrivals are targeted for interrogation. Andrew is going to have to study the three men to find one that does not fit and who really is not a seasoned sailor. Reza is going to blend in and try not to stand out and put the spotlight on someone else. I am looking forward to learning how Andrew goes about his craft. He survived the terror of the helicopter flight and can focus on his mission. Is someone else diagnosing the sub's computer problems with an eye for repairs?
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    The stuxnet virus has to be seen as the culprit before a solution can be applied. This is a huge hurdle to cross over. It might even suggest Iran was involved since the virus was first applied in Iran. There is a stuxnet removal kit. "Siemens has released a detection and removal tool for Stuxnet. Siemens recommends contacting customer support if an infection is detected and advises installing Microsoft updates for security vulnerabilities and prohibiting the use of third-party USB flash drives. Siemens also advises immediately upgrading password access codes."
  22. Wow--Jamie met his parents and showed no emotion. This was his game plan and then Jamie left But, Angus spun it into a hurtful matter after he left and added comments on LiveFeed. Jamie was called hurtful and uncaring. Boy, did Jamie get mad. He was going to return and felt the needed to hit someone-like Angus If Jamie does hit someone, he will find Angus and his crew ready with cameras to film his anger and further degrade Jamie's image and make him the total bad guy Can Jamie cool off in time?
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 16

    The mysterious supremely powerful Sephradon was outplayed. She laid a trap for her attackers which they did not take. Thinking Katz's raptor was guided by Taine she focused on killing his crew and then would kill him at the end. She was wrong. Taine is not on that raptor. Katz survived. Meanwhile, the Imperial fleet attacked the Asmus fleet from the rear and incurred severe damage. Several Imperial ships were able to engage their jump drives and flee to safety. Sephradon is left incensed.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    It seems most likely that the knight has been disfigured and knows his injured body and repel others when seen. Sam and his parents have not figured out why the night does not fully reveal himself. The knight is going to stay for a few days or more. There may be a few chances to see the knight's hidden body parts. Sam is enthralled by the knight and the possibility of becoming his squire. Sam wishes could come true. He might take any concerns about the knight as less important than the mission.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    What a horrible experience ! Attackers burned the house down trying to kill them. Taihan, now a healer and former lover of Zal , lost everything but their lives were saved by hiding in the cellar. Taihan cured the very sick Zal and when recovered he knew Renn turned them in. Zal took the others to find Renn and the group. Zal will seek justice.
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