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A Crisis of Confidence
akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in A Crisis of Confidence
Now that Cavendish and Elizabeth are on a honeymoon in the south of France, any child that results from their coupling can be attributed to their sexual play without any hint that the father might be Granger. Cavendish needs an heir, too. George is very lucky with his sexual partners. It appears the handsome Spanish captain who is his escort is going to be receptive to a mutual time of passion. He could have a private area for them away from Daventry. Plus, the captain might well open up about the Port's ships and Spanish navy plans. Sex can open loose lips. George is a very exciting lover.- 36 comments
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What a tough unexpected complication
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A Crisis of Confidence
akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in A Crisis of Confidence
What a wonderful, happy chapter Thank you George quickly handled his affairs in London before he left for Spain, Cavendish and Eizabeth were married. He enjoyed their foursomes as planned and learned he was very pleased to have sex with Elizabth and she learned much from their interludes It was a cautious joy to transit on the Belvidera. He found he had to bolster Weston who he found out was nervous he would make a mistake before his former captain. George assumed his usual teacher/ counselor role and helped Weston to regain his confidence and forcefully took command of his ship The Spanish port call was a bit out of kilter. They were not expected and the officer greeting them was put out by their appearance until he learned who they were. They were taken to the port's commander who was rude and uncooperative until George produced a letter from the Spanish King asking him to accommodate and help George. They will stay for a few days so George can study the port for his country's intel uses. Daventry will work on improving his Spanish with his tutor and a convenient reason for a few days stay. George will have a handsome Spanish captain to guide him. He thinks they might have things in common but for now Daventry is cockblocking him. I bet this problem will not last long.- 36 comments
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I want to commend you for your text presenting exceptionally powerful, convincing, evocative graphic imagery. I felt present on the Fortress Rock, felt its bitter cold and understood better the pain and troubles and aspirations of the key players. These people are very brave and resolute facing a superpower aggressor.
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And Lydia's lawyer, Ms Patel, can be effective and vicious against her opponents. Tarquin will be surprised and disoriented, not suspecting serious opponents.
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Now we know what happened and Finn began to plan along with Lydia who is all in helping Finn and Orel. She believed him. Finn told Lydia that Tarquin stole their innocence and broke them. He found them in the barn and forced Orel to fuck him against their wills. Finn became the town's problem child and he and his family were forced out by the establishment and Tarquin. Finn told Lydia--who would believe him over Tarquin, He had no evidence. Orel came to see him late in the rain. Finn comforted him and gave him a stone to keep and hold to be safe. He can come back anytime, but must stay at his home by Tarquin's demands. When he comes back, Lydia wants to be present. She likes Orel. Finn... "made a decision, there in the creeping light. He would proceed on two tracks. Track One: Fortify Orel. Create the sanctuary, brick by brick, promise by promise. Track Two: Test Oliver. Push him. Probe him. See if the Suit was just a polished shell over the same rotten core, or if he was something else—something that could be used as a tool, or maybe, impossibly, as an ally." It is a wise start. Lydia agrees with him. I think he is going to need more than Oliver to destroy Tarquin. We will see.
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Andrew is being bold and very aggressive. He is tired of holding on the defense. Like his kids, he saw the tremors and felt the anguish Will displayed. I hope he stays safe through his risky flight and where he operates on the mainland. I bet he will inspire and energize the resistance. If and when he is found out by the Americans, an intensive manhunt will begin. He needs to leave instructions on the Rock behind for his people so they keep the faith and be strong. Does he have a good number 2? I am impressed by the extensive, thoughtful Canadian psyop campaign. It makes sense and should become even more convincing over time as the hurt from the occupation increases. Might the ""I.Know." message give Will hope and a renewed dedication to carry out his plans with his inner circle. I expect Will could begin his own psyop campaign messages to reflect his messages. Yani and crew are essential and formidable and might adapt what they are doing to also reinforce what Will is saying now.
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Jody brought together hot guys to be his new roommates. early on more friends joined them for a rousing sex filed extravaganza. Even one guy who just wanted to watch finally let Jody suck his cock and decided he would have more fun going onward Jody decided to sign up for the Navy rather than be drafted into the Army. Jody would start his service when he graduated, He might not like this plan when he graduated. The VietNam War was winding down and not as many people were needed. But, it might be a short term problem for him. The Navy might cancel his contract since it also will fewer people. We will see!
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OK--Jack is the only one on the trail through the high mountains who sees things and becomes terrified. Theo and Vince do not see the mist and ghosts and dead wolves he sees Then one creature flowes though him and solidifies and claims he now has Jack for control and more. Jack feels so alone and scared Very supernatural and puzzling. Who is the creature who steps in to own Jack so he cannot help Theo find his pack?
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CHAPTER 9: THE SECOND DATE, SCENE 2 - CUPSHUP DATE
akascrubber commented on LJCC's story chapter in CHAPTER 9: THE SECOND DATE, SCENE 2 - CUPSHUP DATE
They survived so far and handle problems. Klebber agrees to spend his two week vacation with Dennis in Costa Rico. He thinks it is safe and not facing any serious Covid-19 problems. He his set up to remote teach since he may have to use it when he gets back Now, what is past is prologue. The real journey and building of a relationship with ups and downs will begin in Costa Rico. -
BTW--I would love a deus ex machina solution for Tarquin at the right moment.
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I hope soon we will meet and see Tarquin acting as he normally does. It would help to learn what he did in the past to Orel and Finn. We have only briefly leaned about him and how controls others. Oliver thinks he is a spendthrift. He tells Finn he does not see him as able to get him mental health care. Maybe, Tarquin will become so poisonous and cruel that he might be disappeared with the help of someone like West Harding
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Adam and Coop are helping Nick and Brad being out in public as gay males. They know much better that they need to be aawre and on the lookout for Corcoran. The boys, I think, learned some commonsense ways to live in public around others, especially older gay males who might like young boys too much Coop goes on duty after lunch. Adam will take care of he boys who really want to be part of the festivities Corcoran is expected to make some sort of a play for Coop. No one knows his plan. I wonder if he might try to kidnap one or both of the boys and try to force Coop to come to him, warning Coop to not tell anyone else.
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So, the town is a long running soap opera with an insane cruel leader, broken souls and lots of hidden secrets, Lydia and Finn are the keys that might open up and disinfect Merrickville, Finn concluded..."The war was coming. Tarquin’s shadow loomed. But for the first time in ten years, Finn wasn’t standing alone in the dark. He had an ally in velvet, a reluctant general in a suit, and a pure soul that had not forgotten him."
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OMG--The Delorean opens a can of worms and hard memories for Finn and Orel. Oliver does not know what he is doing and what he is unleashing We will find out, Neither Oliver or Tarquin are likeable or perhaps worse in Finn's estimation. Lydia is getting what she wants. Finn thought...."the silence of the shop, and the sinking realization that he had just sold his soul to sit at a table with the family that had tried to destroy it."
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The important matter is that Enrico secured the ammo and other material equip a mighty resistance force. He put his life on the line with international threat should he not perform, Enrico followed through and saw that the material was delivered to West Harding, Now Enrico has a complication, Ned Sanderson wants to move from a one-time interlude to a continued sexual relationship. Andrew and Will Carter will not like this, I am sure West's planned psyop campaign with sound worked and the material Enrico provided were picked up for distribution and use at the right time. So far, the US does not know that the resistance is much better armed, Targeted attacks on US forces will shock them, However, Graves has figured out the deception after the fact, He forgot US forces have psyop units with loudspeakers that are used to support US forces in the attack to deceive the enemy. When the resistance shows its teeth, Graves' failure to foresee this might see him sent to study the non-existence enemy in the dismal rainforest around Sitka, Alaska, Graves knows he was played and is focusing on West and Petter to solve his puzzle and stop the resistance.
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I have worked inside a SCIF. It is set apart and isolated to protect compartmented intel at highest level for decision making and planning. Google-SCIF means Sensitive Compartmented Information Facility, an accredited, highly secure room, building, or area where U.S. government agencies protect top-secret intelligence (Sensitive Compartmented Information, or SCI) from espionage and unauthorized access using strict physical, acoustic, and electronic security measures. SCIFs are vital for handling classified intelligence derived from sensitive sources, ensuring information is only accessible to authorized personnel under strict need-to-know protocols, like those used in the White House Situation Room If there any leaks, they will be the result of someone in the SCIF talking to the wrong person when they leave the room.
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Two very different college athletes room together as freshmen. BTW, the are both sexually inexperienced and in the closet. As they spend more time together, they become more attracted to each other and feel compelled to act and share learning how to enjoy each other's body. They fall in love. Read on to learn about this happy tale.
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Cory and Ray, new roommates at college, gradually find they are attracted to each other but hold back expressing their feeling. They are both deeply in the closet. Their path to expressing their love and making love is glorious and heartwarming, They decide to become open and honest and find acceptance. They do become much closer and very happy What a wonderful love story. Thank you
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Gabriel is in a no win situation. Is someone already tagged to kill him? We know from two highly prominent people being shot, it can happen. One had better protection than a senator and only survived by turning his head at the right moment. It's the intensive manhunt afterwards that could do Gabriel in. His handler must want him dead.
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[Memory, Senior Year, May] – Terrible Mistakes
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Senior Year, May] – Terrible Mistakes
What a mess. I can see why Lyn left hurt, shocked and not willing to forgive Brad or Alexander Brad called him a whore like his mother for being bought by Alexander's money and Lyn was destroyed because he trusted Alexander not to tell his secret. Alexander denied it but Lyn was not listening. He was crushed. Lyn did not know Alexander saved him after his mother died. Lyn was not bought. Alexander has not had any sexual relations with Lyn. Brad thought they were sexually active and only came on to him because Alexander must have kicked him to the curb So many misunderstanding that turned rancid and ruined their relationships. Lyn flew away and gave up on them.- 39 comments
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Freedom Comes With a Cost
akascrubber commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Freedom Comes With a Cost
Hunter is messed up. He did not end his way of relating to guys as he hoped. He has one bf who he likes, but does not love. Plus, he has one friend, Miguel, who intrigues him and excites him. He finds himself turned on by other guys. Is he going to disappoint them? Rory analyzed him perfectly. Rory: “You didn’t want something stable. You wanted chaos. Excitement. You still do. And you jumped into this thing in Colombia way too fast. Probably just because you were lonely and you’d already been through all the cute boys in D.C.” Rory told him to not lead a guy on and break up with him before he cheats and moves on, I fear Hunter is not going to follow Rory's advice and things will get messy. -
Leo learned his purpose and what Silas wanted him to do when he returned to the mortal realm. He would seduce and perform every secret desire with the people he knew. He would corrupt them for Silas. Silas fully captured him and he would do what he wanted. It should be shocking.
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Finn, Garret and Kyle, former high school classmates meet, battle with each other and seek ways to survive. Life is not easy for them and they carry their serious past problems to the present. Can broken , hurt souls find understanding and healing? Can they forgive themselves and the cage they place themselves in? Who will grow and who will self-destruct? This story is not for the faint of heart. Who, if any, might become more than friends? Expect lots of intense sex and pain along the way
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Thank you. This story has well earned a recommendation. I think this is one of your better stories. You constructively resolved the questions about the main characters and gave them hope for the future. Two are getting married sealing their commitment. Finn does not know it, but he is on the path to meet Oliver and his own improved life, I bet, with likely struggles along the way
