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Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
akascrubber commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Saints, Sinners, and the Sucker in the Middle
What delightful torment ! The emotional handwringing moments are priceless Sky meets another handsome, hot stud by running into him, Gabriel is a dream come true and as it turns out is in many of his classes. and wants to be seen with him, He likes Sky. Gab agrees to go to the gay club meeting and wants to attend the senior beach party and says he hopes Sky will attend. Gabriels meets Ryan after the club and is told Sky is tutoring him. Gab and Sky exchange phone numbers, Ryan takes Sky home and meets his sister before they go to his bedroom for tutoring. He needs more help from Sky. and he gets it. Ryan tells Sky in confidence he is intending to breakup with Madison after the junior prom since she wants to win it. Next another gay theme--Ryan asks Sky if he is seeing anyone. Sky says he has eyes on someone and does not know if he is available. Ryan says is also crushing on someone, but they do not know it. Ryan thinks he should go for it. Sky thinks he is straight and does not even think he is being hit on, Ryan told Sky he should go to the beach party. He is going-with Madison ? He does tell Sky if he breaks up with Madison, he still wants to be tutored by him. They say goodbye at the door, Sloame thinks he is into him and wants to see him in shorts. Sky blows her opinion off. Now, Sky will have two rocking hot guys at beach party. One , Gab, is likely gay and one may be in the closet after him--or maybe he is misreading Ryan, He is messed up. Confusion and more pain to follow......- 64 comments
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Chapter 10: Only When He Said I Could
akascrubber commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 10: Only When He Said I Could
Mason sent Eli contrary signals and then later deflected his opinion away “Besides,” he added, grinning down at me, “you’re cuter than half the girls in there.” Eli was shocked and dismayed after visiting a club to see Casper and a beautiful girl so into each other--kissing and moving their hands over their bodies. " I couldn’t shake the feeling that I’d let something happen to me that meant nothing to him. Like I’d volunteered for a role he hadn’t even cast.. After several days off, Eli was requested to attend another session with Casper, Eventually, Eli got on his knees stripped and sucked Casper off . He was not allowed to jack off until he brought Casper to an orgasm. Eli's following orgasm was his most powerful ever. Eli was in the sub role and fully controlled by Casper. Eli is lost and does not know what he is to Casper. He asks the same question and has no answer. " Me? I didn’t even know if I was a warm-up. A tool. A fucking receptacle." When will Casper tell Eli what his role is? If Eli is given a sexual role he might well agree. But, he is so confused and worked up if Mason gave him any encouragement and the possibility of affection, he might follow through with Mason. I am not sure if they are cooperating or competing to be a dom for Eli as a sub. -
Poor Jacob is sick. His tummy hurts badly at school. His RCMP bodyguard is taking him to the school nurse. How seriou is his condition? Will he need to go to the hospital? Andrew has identified that Finch's resources are still being used, He gained the permission of his superiors to work with the difficult MI6. An effort needs to penetrate a Swiss bank to track the key server in Geneva, A chance meeting at Heathrow connected Enrico Alvarez--the spy handling Finch's money transfer--and Andrew who is working with MI6 to try to find the new person handling Finch's money. Andrew does not know Enrico is the one he wants. He is the mysterious "Al". Enrico thinks Andrew is a diplomat's husband and does not know he is a spy who eventually wants him. It will be interesting to see how soon the disguises are removed and the real actors are revealed.
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There was so much going on during this meal and afterwards and it turned out much differently than I expected. The initial main negative dynamic revolved around Amber. She had sexually moved through the straight males and was seated next to John and across from Claire. Other males flirted with her like Zach which annoyed Tayor. Will was really bothered, At the end, Amber decided to leave early and Jack agreed to help her pack and take her to the airport. John , his son, was so incensed by John's flirting with this nurse in front of his mother, Claire, that he had to be held back from hitting him. Jack said his father was dead to him. Marie gave John no support and he was almost isolated by his actions with Amber. I wonder if Travis is going to fire Amber as his nurse when he returns? So the original expected blowup was not with Grandmaman who did not become vocal, but she did not apologize. I turns out Claire apologized to Will for improper statements and he accepted it. It seemed to be a true Thanksgiving moment.
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BTW--- Bran should have kept Kyle's socks after he took them off. They would have captured his wonderful male feet fragrance. He can always give then back later when the fragrance has disappeared.
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Act III - Master Of The House
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Master Of The House
Danger--Ray, Renato--Danger! They found that the Queen and Gabriel are in the vampire lord's castle, Gabiel is chained to his bed and kept drugged. The queen has a weak agreement with the vampire lord and wasn't to control Ray who will be trained for their purposes to channel his power. Ray is the real prize, Gabriel knows they all are being held to bring Ray come to the vampire lord. Ray and Renato feel the ground shaking. The vampire lord may have found them and is now acting to capture them! I cannot wait to the next chapter to find out what Ray and Renato will do. -
Love Bran's public skilled feet and toe tickling of Kyle. They are so compatible and want to please each other. Kile remarked...."Totally! I can't believe you bared my feet, and tickled me like that in public." "You once told me about how exciting and even a bit humiliating it would be for you to get tickled in front of others, so when the moment presented itself, I just couldn't resist."
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So Taine and Edward had rough conversations. Edward called an asshole, Taine said Edward lied to him. Edward said he did it for his own good. "Stop," Darien said, shaking his head, "You brought me here for a reason, so give up the pretences. You had me unleash Lex Talionis, why? You brought me here, why? The Polian almost killed me but didn't, why?" "Darien," Edward said, reaching out to tough the scars on his cheek, "We're all being manipulated in one way or another, you just need to open your eyes to see that. The point is, how do you stop it?" Will they stay where they are protected on a floating island or will they face danger and leave on an agreed upon mission?
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I hope the coffee helps. I am drinking my second cup this morning, and it helps. I do want to be enlightened and hopefully have my outlook improved.
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Richter looks like he is going into the deep end, He is agreeing to a BDSM contract with a herbivore who wants to control him."Kotetsu senpai leaned forward, his hands clasped, signaling that he was listening. "Clear, informed consent and mutual respect are the core principles here." They even came up with a safe word. Does Richter know he is going to be a sub ? The 3rd most powerful psychic will be controled by someone in another faction. His potential dom should get amply rewarded by his faction for his coup, I do want to see how this plays out in reality in the next chapter. How will Richter react wants he figures out how he could be bound by the contract?
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Will so stressed by his muti-national mediation efforts that he was thinking of moving back to Canada to run for Parliament. Andrew gulped, metaphorically, and said he would support Will's decision. Andrew knew his career a key spy would be ended by his husband's visibility. Then there is the intervention new spy element. Some unknown crew has taped Ezra's phone and computer and knows of his future date with Alejando AKA Enrico. Enrico will be followed to find his mystery date. These new spies knew that data had been stolen. This theft might be not be known to the UK or Canada but to the CIA and Moussad or Sinclair who wants to check on his operation. Andrew has found out that someone besides the dead Milos is activating hidden funds. Trouble is ahead, He needs to renew his investigation. Finally, the enemy operative is now placed inside the submarine in the nuclear reactor area, What is he going to do? These are fascinating turn of events. I am looking forward to seeing how they evolve. I hope Andrew's investigation leads to uncovering what is going on and who the players are.
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What a sad interruption and dispossession from his home and family." The only thing I was sure about, was that I needed to plan for my future, nail it down, so when I needed to run again I’d get farther than a bridge on a crooked backroad." I hope he realizes he will have a new welcoming family and eventually feels comfortable with them and who he is. Trace is a strong male role model and one Joel needs.
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What a prime operational security mistake.."taking the computer home with you" This ability begs for exploitation by a smart spy
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He is caught and cannot stop-- "This is the Hot Mess Express. And I’m the dumbass shoveling coal." What fun and he is living through a full blown panic attack I cannot wait for the next chapters--real kissing and more!! I want to see more of my comments, too
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Good for Hearst not signing the NDA. He can walk away when they want him to talk about his "deviant sex practices" with Jamie. I wonder if he blew smoke to Angus and lied about what he did with Jamie. Angus could be open to a libel suit. Jamie told Wen he would do just the minimum, He will not be ready for how badly he will be portrayed and could get very upset. Wen opined... " After turning eighteen, he could’ve reached out to them. But he didn’t. He’s a coward, he’s a leaver, all that jazz. You know, interior demons are the best.” Wen's argument can be attacked by Jamie making his case why he did not contact them. Will Hearst tell him about this version so Jamie can be prepared to strike first in the show?
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War is hell. Things are moving with no clear solution or salvation in sight. Taine is injured and maybe on the road to recovery. The construct that is Elias now Prince Edward has taken him to a desolate place. At least they are hidden. The Excaliber is wounded without jump drives. A makeshift solution is underway that may or may not work that could return them to Karin. Fighting rages on Karin. The bad guys could win General Iver's ships found the disabled raptor with Riley Kyr et al. Is this a good option. As I first said, nothing is clearly hopeful yet. I hope things become more positive in the next chapters.
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Could not Sinclair cause more international discord by having one of his operatives leak in deep cover the story of the US-Mossad disaster on UK soil to the UK press?
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Love the interplay of the arrogant, superior acting Sinclair supposed mastermind and seething, dominated Erico, Sinclair wanted to know the plan was on track and Enrico confirmed that the submarine induced mess and fake rescue ship would create the necessary chaos Sinclair wanted. It would vault the conservatives in Canada into power as Sinclair sought. Will the secret plan succeed? Will things fall apart and unexpected actors expose the plot and prevent the sought after disaster? It is going to be a wild ride. Could Will broker a peace and help keep the three sides working? I can see if thing fall apart, Enrico could find a way to lay the blame on Sinclair who he despises.
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Dareis with his wife Elyssa traveled to take the General's message to the Republican leader, The General asked them to tell the Republican leader he will cooperate with them to overthrow the Emperor. The leader accepted the offer and designated one youth as the one to work with them. They hated the male since he seduced Zdain. But they are stuck with the gay boy they hated, Then they moved to a nearby hotel. Things are messy and dangerous. The General is using them as pawns to smoke out the Republicans and send forces to kill them. Dareis and Elyssa do not know about the evil plot of the General. They are not very sharp and do not see the problems with the general's offer.They could lose their lives. Adenolei would turn on them if he finds out about the General's plot.
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Some years ago the Israeli's introduced outside spyware that was taken inside Iranian nuclear sites to destroy equipment and kill key people.
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What a mess. Now what? What will Edward and Darien do now? We will find out in the met chapter?
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I thought Sky was going to combust with Ry sitting on the floor is his restroom being tutored, Actually, they both held it together. They are unexpectedly compatible. They will meet again tomorrow for another study session. Ry is bright but lacking in good study habits which are going to be improved by Sky. Will they become more physically. closer? I hope so. Ry is not happy with Madison.
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In the Name of the Moon… We Sing!
akascrubber commented on Rafy's story chapter in In the Name of the Moon… We Sing!
What a great, unexpected experience---and they are coming back! "Aiko asked, “Do you think we... transformed?” Yuki nodded slowly. “Magically. Accidentally. Unapologetically.” What a delightful, happy and charming musical performance. They easily beat any karaoke effort I have made, -
Lachlan Sinclair--Pride goeth before the fall. How will he respond to the impending disaster?
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Shy will he agree to the Ambassador? I assume we will find out in the next chapter
