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I do not anticipate a completely sad ending. I bet it is possible a couple might be formed, and one person could get his comeuppance. But, this is something to be worked out and new options could arise. Our author is known for her HEA endings after struggles She could surprise us with her current story
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But this is just the end of day three with many more days in this wedding party There is lots of time for secrets and desires to be revealed and intense sex to happen and for some to come to realize. Right now, I expect they will split apart at the end of this vacation going their separate ways--unless the author throws us and the characters a curve.
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Good Kris told Jeremy he loved him and Jeremy told Kris he loved him. They both meant it. They are in a new, stronger period in their relationship. After a wonderful meal and family play time, Finn, Travis and Will went to his bedroom for hot sex, Brad had educated Will how to fist. Will took his time guided by Finn to bring Finn into his most satisfying orgasm so far. Finn gave Travis a BJ will he was being fisted, To cap this off, Travis fucked Wil. What a sexual extravaganza! You have outdone yourself Mark Arbour.
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Stunning-Hugo and Stoker worked their way through a series of doors and followed narrow paths. Stoker thought he heard someone, but Hugo did not. They solved another puzzle with hourglasses, when danger appeared. A man from another time dressed like a puritan placed a gun at Stoker's neck and told them to obey him. He called Hugo a warlock clearly using the terms of his olden times to explain mysteries. “It seems you have been quite the busy little Warlock, and your thrall here can’t save your miserable hide this time. Now I would suggest you accommodate my demands, and refrain from hexing me in the process.” The puritan seems to know them and maybe they have meet in another stream. They will need to be wary to stop the puritan from hurting them.
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He cannot face it yet, But, Joel will be asked at inconvenient times--maybe at the falls. Why did he move? He cannot really answer the query so new to the move, but he will need a convincing public reason at some point --eg conflict over his future career goals with his father, need to join a new baseball team to help him get into college, etc--and maybe a more open private reason within the new family. I can see him promising not to approach any teenage males with the family and the twins so as not to make them uncomfortable.
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Cane23 in response to your query, I consider Brad a charming user who knows how to use people for his benefit. He is marrying well as he wanted. He almost needed to add Lyn and Alexander to be part of his party with other high status people. They are his best friends from college and have turned out to be successful as a doctor and a lawyer, so they bring credit to him as people who have done well. Lyn kept him academically in shape. Brad seems not inclined to be gay and did not take up Lyn's hints and strong admiration for him. I am sure he could read he signals and knew how to set limits to keep Lyn away. I can also see a social status reason for Brad maintaining his separation. Alexander knew Lyn did not have a chance with Brad. As for Brad's possible drug use, the reasons could come out later in the story. He can afford drugs and they might be an acceptable part of his social grouping. He could feel anxiety about his place and want the comfort drugs bring him. Luke must know what Brad did staying so long in the restroom and he was not concerned. Brad returned and became physically close with him which he did not oppose. He easily accepted Brad being so touchy feely with him in front of Alex and Lyn.
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D saved one and did not kill him as Vinnie wanted. Now he might save one for himself "Still the outsider. The tool. The cleanup crew. The disposable one." D knew he did not fit and that Carmine did not trust him. One slip up and Carmine would have him ended.
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Only 5 chapters to go to a conclusion ! No false leads and no real interference by wrong-headed actors or fantasies of a wizard behind a curtain to get in the way and take valuable time. After 33 chapters till now, this implies quick, effective action by Templeman and Andrew who I hope all live. I want to see how you show what they do when pushed into seemingly no-win corners and save who they are protecting. Templeman might stake out the apartment and take on a weaken Enrico and a sad Ezra when they return for his forged papers and ask Will for help take charge of Enrico and Ezra and Andrew might kill and overwhelm the thugs in the sub and escape with the remaining crew. I can dream up scenarios, but what you will write has to be much better than my ideas.
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Brad spent a long time in the restroom??i Is he taking drugs? It is a dangerous, addictive habit. Luke must know what Brad is doing. This can blow up on him when his new wife finds out.
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Wow Will is going to face another huge crisis--It could be disastrous for him and Canada. He is being blindsided. With Yanni's help Templeman has escaped Canada house, contacted Dr Reed and arranged to meet her in London. He promised her he would find her son and save him. Can Templeman carry out his promises? He has no backup and is a wanted man, He is taking a great risk. I hope he succeeds
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^Trace and Celia are very perceptive. They know what Joel is thinking and tell him he is wanted by them and he is not a charity case. Joel is not convinced. Colt against his wishes is taking Joel to the falls. We do not know why he is opposed to Joel. I hope he does not meet any former schoolmates who know his secret,
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Joey is living a sad, soulless life with no one in his life able to help him. It looks like he is making a bad decision making deliveries for his older brother who could be involved in criminal activities.
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Richter is tested over and over. He is stunned and confused Master Field berates him for his lack of progress. Great things are expected of him. He was created for a higher purpose He must step up his game and power. Richter is surprised he must be able to control the Empire's Heart "It must be you," the dragon muttered, sounding almost unsure. "To wield the Heart, one must master Dominance to a near-divine level. In the foreseeable future, no one else will surpass you." To force Richter to focus on increasing his dominance. His Master broke the bones in Richter's arms. "Find Latent Heat to treat you, or Dawn will do." Through the haze, I heard the dragon's voice. "And don't use a medical pod, or I'll have to break them again." Richter was in extreme pain. He curled into a ball and sobbed. What will be done at some point to stop Richter from turning into a sadistic beast when he has supreme power?
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I had one friend who was a good lawyer representing individuals. He was aggressive and focused in court. Actually, he could be an asshole and that was what benefited his clients, it seems.
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Alexander thinks Lyn still is clueless. He offers to reveal it all at the end, but he shows in many ways he wants Lyn He does tell Lyn one shocking thing, but Lyn does not understand what he is saying.... about Brad. “What do you even know about me?” Lyn exploded. “I know enough. It will never be you, Lynton.” Alexander loomed over him menacingly. “Read my lips. Never.” Awesome--- Lyn remains clueless for now. If he figures out what is really going on before the end of this activity, he might be floored
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Well, they thought about their situation and then got very personal--- Stoker thought things were random...“It’s too structured for that,” Wojciech mused as he began to clear dishes, stacking them neatly. “Too orchestrated. Watches, static worlds, clues. I think we’re in some kind of great game and we have to try to work our way out. There’s a designer, a purpose, however obscure.” “T’ain’t that simple,” Stoker drank some tea as he let Wojciech clear his plate. “If t’were a game, why’re they just lettin’ us sit ‘ere? Why not throw us another challenge, or tell us the rules?" They ended up in bed naked, Stoker was exciting and pleasing Hugo. Stoker ended up giving Hugo a blow job and trying to help Hugo decide to go along with his ideas of staying.
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I think it is very interesting that the two critical actors at this point who are needed to solve the most serious problems under great pressure now are Will and Andrew Carter. I feel certain they will rise to the occasion and make the right choices. I also hope luck is on their side. "Napoleon supposedly famously stated, "I'd rather have lucky generals than good ones," highlighting his belief in the importance of luck in military success,"
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Now let us see how Will handles this mess and chaos when new evidence is now available to disprove the case against Templeman and proof of a critical bad actor(s) behind the chaos is found. Can he get through to the UK leadership during this crisis time and can he change minds? Is Sir Mason Dafuq going to be able to continue his push against MI5 when his smear begins to falter and MI 5 is needed to face new enemies on UK soil?
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We are going to see the fall--I hope things do fully turn around but there is so much that needs to be done and lives are at stake Enrico is shocked by the unexpected UK sub explosion and eventually paralyzed by Ezra revealing his participation and revealing his location. He did not try to kill Ezra, but was overwhelmed by what is going to happen and by what Ezra has told his mom by cell phone. Ezra wants to protect Enrico who is unable to move. He is taking Enrico away to possible safety by using his car. Enrico needs to wake up and help Ezra find a safe house. But, all Enrico's identity alternatives and new materials are back at his apartment! I expect Dr Reed's phone is tapped and if MI5 has a working staff this new information will flesh out what has been happening and security people will descend on Enrico's apartment. She is going to call Templeman who will try to tell others. Maybe Will can help using his contacts. The highest levels of the security agencies and the PM will need to react with Ezra's information and revise what is going to take place. I hope the PM put the MI5 head back in his job to carry out what must happen I hope the tension at Canada House will be ended. Templeman is needed on the job, However, the UK sub is still a huge problem. Bravo's current plan to release the sub's weapons is a no go. In the confusion can Andrew as Reza find a way to remove Bravo and his men and lead the remaining UK sailors to escape by the small rescue sub? If Andrew can escape, then he can report on the Canadian defense contractors tie to the attack on the sub. MI5 and others should move on the defense contractors headquarters.
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I am glad you are not an evil sociopath. You would not be the compelling, creative writer you are now in my opinion.
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Amazing--Hearst brought Jamie's brother, Nolan, in to handle the problem the contestants are having with LiveFeed, Nolan is a lawyer and he is going to sue tr company and owners over the cruel contracts. He expects to win a huge settlement which will help out the contestants ftrer they pay his share. Jamie reconnected with his brother and sister. Nolan told him Hearst brought him into the matter. He got along easily with his siblings.. Later Arthur called Jamie and they had a brutal conversation, Arthur told Jamie he will now never make it big. Jamie said he would go his own way and enjoy his life ' Jamie told Artur to never contact him and anyway he is changing his name. Hearst is returning to Sunny Hill to take tests. Might Jamie run into him? I bet Hearst would attend any performance that included Jamie and Melinda.
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I hope your muse is helping you out and you can return to this story in the near future I am interested in finding out how Josh and Claire's parents get along, He might charm them.
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Do not let the title scare you off! Read this story to the end. A part time author and barista wrote a popular small novel that seems to reference a quirky website The website gets mad and sues the author who feels out of his comfort zone and becomes very worried You will enjoy how he navigates his legal mess and finds out what the jury decides and how he moves forward afterwards.
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Hooray! Austin was found not guilty of hurting a website. His volunteer lawyer helped Mirabile dictu-- in short time his book sales rocked skyward. He is enjoying the riches noewfrom his hastily written book,
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I do not trust Sinjin who tried to discourage his visitors, Hugo decides they have to try and face the difficulties ahead. Stoker is willing to find a quiet spot and live in peace with Hugo as his missess. Hugo cannot accept this role but enjoys Stroker running his foot up his leg to his most intimate place, Hugo admits he has had sex with classmates at Eton. Stroker is encouraged. I think he knows he will need to take the initiative to turn Hugo on to break down his resistance. They are in a new place which should give them freedom, especially if they are not returning, Given teir present nasty smells, Stoker suggests they get a bath soon. I expect Stoker will be seducing Hugo in the baths if it is possible. He wants to get a gentleman for a 4th and maybe 5th time...mmmmm
