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Enrico is clearly misguided and reads the American political situation wrong. So, he is planning two disasters in the UK to paint a terrible international situation so that America will turn from Trump to Hillary seeking someone with wise international skills. But, the situation is confusing and not straight forward. Well, right now the evil actor is not Russia which Hillary suggests is trying to control Trump, but a rogue Canadian defense contractor. Her claim about Trump will ring hollow and off base misreading the true threat. A Russian sub is even helping the disabled UK sub. The effort by the terrorists in the rescue sub to sink the UK sub will further tie Sinclair and Canada, not Russia, to the crippled sub. The mine made from stolen plans is constructed by UK firms. So far, there is no mention of adding ways or connecting by leaks that tie Russia to the new mine.
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.... a profound surprise to Enrico himself. People were selfish. People betrayed people. People were driven by survival. But Ezra was none of those things. He was, Enrico realized, something new." Sinclair wants Enrico to kill Ezra and he will not do it after what he has learned about Ezra. Enrico has other very destructive plans and no longer needs Sinclair to cause the problems that will influence America and its presidential race. I can see Enrico knowing Templeman is after Ezra might decide to kill Templeman who does not know he is the mysterious "Al."
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"I hadn’t let any of my friends know me, all the years that I played baseball with them. I didn’t know what a real friend actually looked like, I didn’t allow myself to be one to them either." I think this situation will stop in due time. Davin is trying to be his friend and maybe more. I think they will need to get more comfortable. This sleeping arrangement may raise concerns tomorrow. It is totally innocent. Joel needs a reason to say why he was kicked out. He has so many things to work through. He has people around him to support him , if he lets them. I wonder what role Cody will take. He has likely a new school to attend and new people to meet his last year in high school.
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A Chalice For The Parasite
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in A Chalice For The Parasite
“He’s coming,” she whispered, her voice trembling. “He has what he wanted. He’s coming for Lucien. Soon.” Etienne is ready to shoot the evil, corrupt Brother Mathias to protect his unborn son -
Let us hear the plan to extract the information from Big. Confront him as a group. Find out by pressuring to learn why Big is going along and who is really behind the drive going after Travis. If the Serbs stop helping Big, Big could look for other bad guys. With the right info, a solution can be found to help Travis.
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More reasons to be disoriented...They are now in a sandy tropical environment. Wojciech searched and found a representation of a large cock with 5. 55 time emphasized. When he returned to Stroker, he found that he had shot a large lizard and was roasting it. They both ate parts of the lizard and talked. Wojciech found he liked the touches Stroker gave him apparently innocently. Wojciech promised to work to get them back to their homes. They ended up sleeping next to each other. Are we seeing the start of a physical relationship they both do not anticipate? Stroker says he is not the marrying type. The longer they stay on their trips, the more they will need each other.
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OMG--The next horrible step is going to happen, and the sub crew is not aware of the danger. They are expecting help from a friendly vehicle and are not expecting an attack. The disguised mercenaries are going to travel in the rescue vessel and dock with the injured Royal Navy Sub. They will not be trying to rescue anyone. They intend to cause mayhem and kill people and further damage and sink the sub, if they are successful. Can the Royal Navy sailors react in time to prevent a disaster?
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Great turn of events ! Angus is facing a disaster!
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Wojciech found himself in a hall of mirrors. He thought of magic and fantasy and knew he was in a new place, not Cambridge. His mind reeled. The watch was the new element in his displaced environment. He was surprised to see a dead German soldier who held another similar watch and then met a woman in a bride's dress also with a watch like his who told him to not lose the watch. She fled by moving back through a mirror. Wojciech could not follow her. So held his watch and moved through the mirror to a rural area and met a young gamekeeper who imagine he was a poacher and pointed his shotgun at him, They began to talk and the gamekeeper became less hostile Wojciech's world has been turned upside down. He is trying to cope and be rational as strange things are happening, He knows that death is an option. He seeks answers but really is adapting to his new script. I think he is in for a wild, disorienting ride for now.
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Now we have the reason for this story's name. "Pressure equalized as much as we can, sir!" a voice yelled, strained. "Cutting complete! Standing by for breach!" Andrew Carter is pulled out through the breach in the flooded compartment and saved when his prognosis was previously considered poor Hooray! The skilled naval sailors worked out a near miracle.
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Wow Wojciech is lost supposedly in Cambridge, disoriented and off his rocker. Things are not right. An unusual and provocative way to start an adventure. Already 23 chapters ! You are quite prolific. This can go so many ways. Our hero could have a new destiny and might not be dying in the trenches on the continent, it seems
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Sam is idealizing a knight rescuing lost souls. It is all glory and happy times with little blood and savage death. He is in for a rude awakening. How will he handle real life and learning war is hell ?
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So many moving parts. Seeing how the rescue progresses is going to be fascinating and a testament to the author's skill. The ending intrigue shows the Government cannot remain focused on just one problem. A nasty bomb is being built on land.
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Wow--Will is mystically connected to his mate. "Will jolted awake, a cold, sudden, inescapable sense of dread seizing him." He deeply feels something is wrong with Andrew and it is. Will may not find out for a while what is wrong, and he is going to worry.
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The small rescue sub is on a dangerous course. "This wasn't a rescue; it was a contingency, a brutal back-up plan should the initial gambit fail. " If Reza fails with his initial gambit, these men will cause havoc. They have firearms. Weapons fired inside this nuclear sub can be disastrous and breech the walls holding back the sea.
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Rikard is a nasty piece of work. He killed VonGrippens wife and led g him to Peligia. But, he underestimated him. He wanted Peligia first now. Along the way people are dying by is orders Traveling through the FTL, Mayfair and his soldiers are searching for something , but they are not certain what exactly what they want to find. Under attack, men die. Mayfair is saved from a Polian by wearing the patch, Taine told them to wear--Now What!
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The attitude Sinclair and Enrico reminded me of Proverbs 16:18 "Pride goes before destruction, and a haughty spirit before a fall," I can clearly see Sinclair fall when his role is discovered. Enrico might escape back into the darkness with Ezra unless Ezra holds out connects him to the mess. Can Enrico convince Ezra he is on the right side even after the killings and destruction are revealed? Will the Stockholm Syndrome happen and tie Ezra closely to Enrico?
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A young girl has been kidnapped by 4 bandits. Sam heard about it and connected her parents with his knight. Only Sam knows the transfer site. After much protest from his mother, Sam will lead the knight to the location. The knight promised to protect Sam. They expect to be back by nightfall Oh, so many things can go wrong. How will this turn out?
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Two weakness exposed--- Sinclair lost Jared when he said he owned him totally and Jared became incensed. He forcefully hit Sinclair and left the office fired. He might have things to tell Andrew, but his absence at the critical time leaves Sinclair exposed without senior financial input while his company faces huge financial pressure. The sub explosion will increase the scrutiny and the loss of Jared will heighten the worry of the markets Enrico has become very connected to Ezra. He is not a whim to him. He does not want him killed. His assistant Xue realizes it and says a legend or new background will be made for him Xue. warns Enrico this could blow up in his face, One puzzle to be solved--- Templeman cannot figure out why the plans were stolen. There is no traffic from intel sources saying someone has he plans. When will he realize someone in the UK wants to use the plans.? Is nuclear material available by terrorists in the UK? The Iranians are involved. The country is making nuclear material.
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The Moon through the Pines
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Moon through the Pines
Excellent cliffhanger--You are extending the pain and tension--The battle has not been fully joined Ryder's father rejected Danny and still believes the pack's clairvoyant. Pembroke and Vince went after Cassandra in a misguided effort Ryder and Danny and Jack race to Cassandra and find a real problem. Magic has been used by her to stop her opponents. Vince is trussed up on a rock with symbols overt. Pembroke is standing frozen, I hope Ryder and crew can stop Cassandra,- 32 comments
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What a joyous , fun time--romance, tickling, kissing, sex, borrowing fragrant socks and other clothes. They were in heaven and really know their partners and what excites them.
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OMG--Rikard is on the Excaliber. He can destroy is as he pleases. In a surprising strategy change. Riley does not want the sentinel to stay put. " We can't sit here and wait for Sephradon to come to us, she's gonna cream us. We need to be somewhere else. She's got everything she has formed up into this one big assed super fleet..." He smiled, "So what's protecting Earth?" Riley wants to take the Sentinel with its jump nexis and the Imperial fleeet and attacked supposedly an unprotected earth, Wow!
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" They weren't sinking yet, suspended precariously at 300 meters, but the Acheron had lost her ability to pressurize her tanks for buoyancy control, her engines were mangled, her propeller a twisted ruin. This cutting-edge nuclear submarine, once a shadow in the depths, was now a crippled, silent coffin." What an ominous situation! With more information about the situation from the author, I am looking forward seeing how the professionalism of the Royal Navy makes a huge, positive impact.
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BTW, if the sub is able to be stabilized, is the small rescue sub with terrorists still a problem? Shooting within a sub leads to serious structural problems. They cannot get the detonator from Reza. Their real mission is no longer viable. Can the rescue sub even attach to larger sub's hull after the hull breech? Do they have a secondary mission of causing more killing and ensuring the sub does not recover?
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Various observations on Might
akascrubber commented on Lupus's story chapter in Various observations on Might
So, now we are ready to learn what is going to happen now that the groundwork is laid,
