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Lee Wilson

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  1. Too long. He said three words:
  2. Oh wait, that one was written already. Thought it was a gay porno. My mistake.
  3. Call me Ishmael?
  4. And so difficult to master.
  5. No worries. I’ll give you a deadline of 4 months!
  6. Already sent one entry for the creature feature. Plenty of time if I think of another.
  7. Good observations all around. You’ll see how well you’ve prognosticated in the next couple chapters.
  8. Very true. As I mentioned earlier, he’s mostly a misguided youth.
  9. Gotta wait for the hearing to see what happens. Yeah, Leon is great. Oh wait, his great hasn’t happened yet.
  10. Very fortunate, especially him being in charge of the Public Defender's office. Quite perceptive. Only a chapter in advance this time. You're slipping. Slipped even more. This is 2 chapters away 😁
  11. Sure. There may be one part where laughing at Gavin is appropriate.
  12. I'm bringing it. I'm really getting into this one, too. I hope that is making it better.
  13. Maybe surprising, but I think the Judge justified it well enough: Secondly, constructive possession is not as severe a charge as actual possession. So reasonable doubt on the arson and a fairly minor drug charge makes no bail, in my mind, overkill.
  14. Cool. I hate putting too many of the same kind of character in a story. A couple assholes is one thing. Diversity of personality everywhere else.
  15. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 7 S3

    I can hear it now: Clint: You know that photo where Devin saved your Ma? Mikey: Um, yes. Clint: There's a skinny bigfoot in the background. That's so cool that we have a picture of a bigfoot. Mikey: Yeah, that is pretty cool.
  16. Yeah, I did that mostly to show Jeff wasn't racist. We'll see enough of that from Gavin.
  17. Yes, he's that kind of guy.
  18. Hope everything turns out OK.
  19. I hope you find Gavin’s dessert sweet enough.
  20. "Columbus Public Defender's office, Rebecca Ross speaking. How may I direct your call?" "Hi Miss Ross. Jeff Inness here. Is my dad around?" "Yes, he should be free, let me transfer you." "Chief Defender Lester Inness speaking, how can I help you?" "I'm in really big trouble, dad." "Jeff! What happened?" "I was arrested again." Lester tried to hide his frustration. Since Jeff was upset, he was successful enough, "What was it this time?" "I'm so screwed. Alc
  21. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 16

    @Philippe makes a good point about jurisdiction. Jonah will definitely need to stay, but that’s only temporary. This story took a leap in a direction I know I wasn’t expecting. Can’t wait to read more!
  22. I liked my ending too.
  23. Lee Wilson

    Prologue SO

    What exit?
  24. Thanks. Adding a dog? Very possible after the scene that was going through my head before I fell asleep last night. Jeff, at times, has taken over the story. That's not about to change. Half-way? Maybe a little past that. Working on 16 now, but I don't think it's the end, but probably not too far from it. We'll see.
  25. So very true. Apparently he had been taking hints from Addison. Quack, Quack.
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