Lee Wilson
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Decided to start this one since the ending is in sight. Unfortunately, as when I read the description when it first started, the hook isn’t in too deep. Reserving judgement until I read more.
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Thanks. Jerry was obviously pretty smart.
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Yeah, I guess that would be easier for the goons to guess. I’ll suggest Jerry change it.
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Yeah, me too. I probably would have gotten one of my guns and blew them away as they came in the door. Okay, maybe not.
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You’re welcome and thank you. The anthology stories are due October 1, so, like I said, it’ll be a while. I have like 4 or 5 thousand words so far.
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You’re welcome. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Yeah, I do think I remember mentioning that. And I guess not the same definition of obscene, but this one kind of was too.
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I thought so too.
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Definitely the other one. I’m still thinking about the secret author one.
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I hope I didn’t inadvertently steal it from anywhere.
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Thanks much. It'll be a few months, Trevor's next story is going to be part of the anthology.
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Inside the panic room, one of the robbers saw the blank video screens, “Those work?” “Of course.” “Turn ‘em on.” Eight screens lit up. Three were inside, each pointing at an exterior door. Four more looked out from each corner of the roof of the house. The last one was a view of the basement outside the panic room’s door. Jerry surreptitiously enabled the view screen in the basement that showed the interior of the panic room. He hoped at some point the police would search the base
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Thanks. And how the thieves knew will indeed be explained.
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Just? Hmmm. Including? Hmmm also.
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True across the board.
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Thanks. You will have to wait a bit for chapter 3. About 21 hours.
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Just the rooftop guy so far. Perhaps something different for the others.
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Maybe. But I think you may be surprised.
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Yep, this is a quick one, almost no waiting.
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Well, in that case, perhaps you will get it upon his return, and a little in the epilogue.
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Thanks much. I'm afraid everybody will be disappointed because tomorrow's chapter is the end. Maybe I need to find a way to continue this one.
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Glad you're enjoying it.
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Jerry put his ear buds in, making sure they connected, “Can you hear me Julius?” “Yes, but be quiet.” Jerry made his way to the master bathroom, locking the bedroom and bathroom doors behind him. “I’m in the master bath. I don’t think they’re...” Jerry heard the window breaking, “They broke a window.” “Then maybe you want to shut up?” “Okay, okay. I’m nervous.” He didn’t stay quiet for long, “Was that a gunshot?” “Probably. And unless you want the next bullet i
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All good ideas. None right. The answer why appears shortly.
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Thanks. I guess my brain just needed a break.
