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A New Branch On The Family Tree
Paladin commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in A New Branch On The Family Tree
Wonderful bonding and forgiveness between these amazing families. Let's hope that Troy heals quickly and without concussion issues. Now how is Levie going in surgery? -
I agree with @chris191070 about this being an intense chapter. Greg is acting more and more like a noble and importantly one who invites and considers advice from his council and staff. I enjoyed Trevor bringing them into the present by suggesting videoing formal meetings. Greg's family is growing and Greg is learning about being a vampire parent. Great writing.
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Just a Trial Period, or More?
Paladin commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Just a Trial Period, or More?
OK I'm hooked on this story. I sense a change in Manny already (happy at work and sober in the morning) but I also sense there is a lot that Manny, and we, are yet to be told. A live in male nanny (and housekeeper?) is interesting. I wonder about the range services Bass provided to Rocky's dad. Manny is about to have a week with Rocky. I suspect it will be a rocky road for Manny to travel. Or, will they rock it?- 37 comments
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I tidy conclusion to an interesting mystery. I'm glad the college boys gained some extra benefits from their involvement. I'm loving this series and and I'm so looking forward to the next mystery.
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A Brotherly Bonding Drive
Paladin commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in A Brotherly Bonding Drive
This chapter has provided more information about what, or who (Gamma) initiated the idea for the trip but not about the apparent urgency. I still find it hard to believe that it will just be a lovely social get together. Although that, in itself, would be a nice change. -
It's important to remember that Ollie has to an extent rejected his mother as well. He hasn't shown any desire to go and live with her. One of the things that this chapter revealed was that Andre and Chris are buying the apartment where Ollie lived until his father was killed. He was so happy. “Uncle Chris, when we move here can this still be my room?” Here Ollie is starting to see being with Andre and Chris as getting his old life back.
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I know how to tickle the truth out of you.
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They were all having a very relaxed camping trip and then they are suddenly confronted with a very serious crime. Call the cops or skinwalkers to the rescue? I remember camping with the sleeping bags zippered together. Such fun
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Another loving and tickle fun filled chapter. There has to be drama coming.
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I agree. The three boys are developing a great friendship.
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Thanks @Cane23. I agree.
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Yes @chris191070 with all the historic charges piling up and another current case (the 15 year old boy) he wasn't going to win in court. I agree things are looking good for Ollie. Again my comment to @drsawzall regarding Ollie's mother.
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Yes @Ivor Slipper everything seems to be falling into place now. Thanks for commenting.
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Thanks @drsawzall. Nobody seems to like Ollie's mother. I'm not sure she's the wicked witch but she's certainly not loving mother material. Was Tyron wrong to tease Bradley?
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Thanks for your comments @Summerabbacat but I'm afraid that the running gag about Tim Tams will continue. However, I admit I very rarely eat them. In this chapter I wanted to show that Lachlan is adjusting and recognizing diversity and a changing world. As you highlighted, the chapter was also to demonstrate that the construction industry employs gays. Now we just have to wait for the trial, and of course Andre and Chris still have to be approved as foster parents.
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Thursday had been nominated as the day Ollie, Bradley and Tyron would get together to plan their next video. They had been in regular contact with each other, including Jackson, and had researched the new and upgraded features of the editing software that they wanted to demonstrate and discuss. What they wanted to do now was play with those features and plan the video. I had to admit that they were dedicated to preparing the video. I was more than impressed. I was prepared and had all the d
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I think you just set a record for how much tickling you can fit into one chapter. Again loving interaction between the characters. But what is going on? Why the need for the trip? I'm looking forward to their adventure.
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I love "no tell motel". It's so much neater than "what happens in the motel stays in the motel". I thought sexual exploits in college were aka 'study interuptus'
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Wow these girls are safe, and the net is tightening on Ahmed. Ken now knows where Ahmed is heading in New York. I have so many questions but have learnt that I have to wait for the next chapter. I just hope the boys will be safe in the motel. I wouldn't want the henchman to bust in causing coitus interuptus.
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Another great chapter moving the action further. Unfortunately still no clues as to where the girls are or how many thugs Ahmed has working for him. I assume Joe will have his consultants follow Ahmed to find out where he lives. Also how much does his mother know?
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"The quality of mercy is not strained" I agree with @chris191070 that this is an awesome chapter. It was fascinating watching Greg and Chris spar to arrive at a just punishment. I loved the humour and the inclusion of of small details such as cleaning the boys feet and butts. Now for what happens to Chipper and Craig. All good I expect.
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I love this story and this amazing chapter. The boys are pulling Phil into the present by taking him out of the centre and in the process making him feel younger. I liked him paying for his haircut. It allowed Phil show a level of independence that he was largely denied in his daily life in the centre. The chapter also raised the reality of gay teenage suicide and hinted that even in retirement you can be in a toxic relationship. I hope more comes of Phil's meeting with Gary. I don't live in USA but I remember where I was when I heard about Kennedy's assassination. His death was a shock and he was mourned here in Australia as well as USA.
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Thank you @Cane23 for your thoughtful comments about Andre telling in his parents and Andre (and Skye) being told about Chris and Beau. Let's see what happens.
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@Summerabbacat, are you expecting me to give some spoilers? Well, spoiler alert: no spoilers!
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So we are facing a dangerous situation. They have to let Joy meet up with Ahmed and follow them to where the other girls are (were?) and then apprehend Ahmed before he can hurt Joy. Even with reinforcements this will be difficult and dangerous. It will be even more dangerous if Ahmed has found out that someone is asking about him.
