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  1. Oy vey what a surprising ending. I have to agree, Talent is bound to be somebody's guardian angel. Great job!
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    Chapter 5

    Where's chapter 6 please?
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    A Beautiful Mess

    All too real for so many. Well done. How does one cope? One day, one hour, one minute at a time and when even that is too much time to take a deep breath and survive each second.
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    Hurricane Lamps

    This is a well told story with a unique ending. Definitely worth the time.
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    Chapter 2

    Great story with a phenomenal ending, well done!
  6. Honestly, it was phenomenal. HEA is nice but not every single story needs that. I, for one, say stay true to yourself.
  7. Interesting story particularly with the first offered ending. Art, at its best, elicits strong emotions, which can be clearly seen by the reactions. Good job
  8. Have to say, I prefer the initial ending of the story within a story. Tragic yes but life often is and this ending was written beautifully.
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    Quack, Quack

    Absolutely hilarious... laughed so hard I feel off the bed! Yes, that was while tangled in the blanket covering my lap. LOL
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  10. Phenomenal story both heart and gut-wrenching. The devastation brought by war and religious zealots all too real. Bravo!
  11. What a precious unique story! It really made my day. Highly recommend
  12. What a magnificent story! Everything is there from characters first smitten, suspense, action, humor.... and one cannot miss the adorable pooches and puppy kisses. Kbois is a fantastic author and this, IMHO, is one of her absolute best.
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    Chapter 1

    Gut wrenching is the descriptive that comes to mind. The pain and anguish that results from abuse leave behind scars within the soul. Being a survivor, I was doing well until the final line, "The phone rang." That's when nausea kicked in. Art in its truest form connects with emotions. Obviously, from all the comments this story certainly did. Well-done and thank you for sharing!
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    Chapter 8 - Kai

    OMF... That phone call or calls rather... absolutely hilarious!!!
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    Chapter 3 - Adam

    How great you included the diagram. Thanks!
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