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  1. Vcs
    Awesome seeing the imaging of Sean, Diego and Lance. Thanks!
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    Great story! I'm confused about one thing though, in this chapter it states, "The young baker’s place was quite small - it consisted of one bedroom, one bathroom, a living room, a small pantry and a dining room combined with the kitchen." However, before there were two bedrooms when Zara was staying with her son, right?
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    Chapter 15

    Vcs commented on Sam Wyer's story chapter in Chapter 15

    A great story and thank you for sharing the Christmasy Shop. I want to go there!
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    Jamie Is Found - II

    Vcs commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Jamie Is Found - II

    An incredible story and honestly, I prefer this, the original, ending. Well done! Have to add though that it hurts to think an author feels skewered having written not only so beautifully but realistically.
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    Dead Body Inside

    Vcs reviewed Arran's story in Fiction

    Different doesn't even begin to describe it! LOL What a delightful, unexpected twist. A definite must read.
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    Oy vey what a surprising ending. I have to agree, Talent is bound to be somebody's guardian angel. Great job!
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    Chapter 5

    Vcs commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Where's chapter 6 please?
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    A Beautiful Mess

    Vcs commented on LJH's story chapter in A Beautiful Mess

    All too real for so many. Well done. How does one cope? One day, one hour, one minute at a time and when even that is too much time to take a deep breath and survive each second.
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    Hurricane Lamps

    Vcs reviewed CassieQ's story in Fiction

    This is a well told story with a unique ending. Definitely worth the time.
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    Chapter 2

    Vcs commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Great story with a phenomenal ending, well done!
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    Honestly, it was phenomenal. HEA is nice but not every single story needs that. I, for one, say stay true to yourself.
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    Interesting story particularly with the first offered ending. Art, at its best, elicits strong emotions, which can be clearly seen by the reactions. Good job
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    Have to say, I prefer the initial ending of the story within a story. Tragic yes but life often is and this ending was written beautifully.
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    Quack, Quack

    Vcs reviewed Lee Wilson's story in Fiction

    Absolutely hilarious... laughed so hard I feel off the bed! Yes, that was while tangled in the blanket covering my lap. LOL
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    Phenomenal story both heart and gut-wrenching. The devastation brought by war and religious zealots all too real. Bravo!
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    What a precious unique story! It really made my day. Highly recommend
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    What a magnificent story! Everything is there from characters first smitten, suspense, action, humor.... and one cannot miss the adorable pooches and puppy kisses. Kbois is a fantastic author and this, IMHO, is one of her absolute best.
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    Chapter 1

    Vcs commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Gut wrenching is the descriptive that comes to mind. The pain and anguish that results from abuse leave behind scars within the soul. Being a survivor, I was doing well until the final line, "The phone rang." That's when nausea kicked in. Art in its truest form connects with emotions. Obviously, from all the comments this story certainly did. Well-done and thank you for sharing!
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    Chapter 8 - Kai

    Vcs commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Kai

    OMF... That phone call or calls rather... absolutely hilarious!!!
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    Chapter 3 - Adam

    Vcs commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Adam

    How great you included the diagram. Thanks!
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