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Noah is playing Colt for everything he wants. Colt has morals and a conscious that Noah has lost over the years of abuse. What happens when the pressure on Colt becomes too much and he cannot please Noah sexually?
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Enjoying the buildup of sexual tension between these two. If and when they hookup it is going to be incredibly hot.
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Whatever you do @Nuno R.F.C.R, ignore the negative comments from those who believe themselves to be literary experts on here.
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I am not sure how you keep topping yourself @Nuno R.F.C.R. The scene of Julian at the piano was absolutely beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing the beauty of your writing. So, so happy Mark is with Julian!
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Great story, some very creative features for the safe room. Looking forward to future series!
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Noah is out of control; his motive is justified but his plan is misconstrued. Colt has got to wake up and realize the plan will put him in prison after juvie.
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Really a fun story, loved it!
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I find Trevor an extremely interesting guy for some reason and we really don't have that much background.
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Cann't wait for tomorrow's chapter. Great story Lee!
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The self-dialogue and the dialogue that Johnny had with Sam was so revealing and captured Johnny's reality @Albert1434. I feel like I truly know Johnny now, not just the character. This feels like a perfect chapter. Thank you @Albert1434.
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I think you are on to something about James, I think he may be jealous of Taggert. James in a past chapter had no problem getting rid of Taggert. I agree Taggert feels responsible for hurting Ash, but it may be just his nature, or it could be from the hurt and injuries Taggert has had in his past that makes him want to comfort Ash.
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Brett is brighter than I ever gave him credit for, although not much. Colt is a good kid with morals that hopefully will keep him from cutting those brake lines.
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Matt is very carefully being a dad for Levi. Listening closely to what Levi says and does then responding appropriately in the moment. Very powerful and carefully crafted chapter @Mark Ponyboy Peters.
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I hope that the man at the house is Marc. I guess we will have to wait and see. Many unanswered questions remaining. This is one of the most beautifully written chapters yet @Nuno R.F.C.R. It flowed so effortlessly. Thank you!
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Great start, lots of action! I'll watch for parts 2 and 3 the next two days.
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I just binge read this story to this point, and I am definitely enjoying it. The strength Johnny demonstrates as he endures the constant rejections is amazing. His determination will eventually pay off.
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How teenie is George's weenie for this to be true, or is Colt just extremely well endowed?
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Noah is definitely manipulative; he bottoms for Colt for the first time just before he asks Colt to cut the brake lines of George's car. If Colt can hear me, DON"T KILL GEORGE. Find an alternative method to get him.
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Marc is correct in waiting for Frank's shell to crack. Frank is Marc's perfect hot, dominate, older, alpha male. Marc needs to heed Chris's advice about keeping heart and dick in separate boxes.
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Catherine is as intelligent as I gave her credit to be. I never expected Julian to find out in this way though. As Peter says, the author will decide how things go from here.
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Glad Theo finally quite listening to the voices of evil trying to misguide him. Hoping Vee and Jack get back to the village to see what is truly happening in the past.
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That closed room, that hole in his memory, it has a name of Luka. Unfortunately, the name Luka means nothing to Devin right now.
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I worry about that also Andy. I just hope they don't attempt George's murder next, even if George does need to die a slow and painful death.
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Let's hope that Vincent's conversation regarding the truck crash will make Colt think before doing anything else rash.
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Chapter 19 - An Uncertain Future
dboggs9700 commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 19 - An Uncertain Future
Such a touching portrait of true love. I went through a box of tissues reading the last few chapters. Thank you @ChromedOutCortex for the beautiful story.
