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dboggs9700

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  1. I am surprised Marcus did not attempt suicide. Thank God he had great understanding parents.
  2. He is definitely one I was thinking of.
  3. I know of a couple writers on here that could probably come up with inventive ways to get rid of the three of them.
  4. I know "family" is important, but it should end when it is cruel. J needs to stand up for himself and allow Evan to be with him when he is dealing with the "family".
  5. Just started reading this story today and this second chapter has hooked me. I have doubts about Evan's maturity level.
  6. Beautiful ending and story. I plan to read more @ChromedOutCortex.
  7. You have out done yourself @Boy Mercury X with this deep and thought-provoking story. @akascrubber and @Cane23 beautifully expressed their feelings about the story. I totally agree with what they wrote. The two stories you mentioned at the end of the story, will you be posting them here on GA? As always, looking forward to your next story.
  8. We need our threesome, Jack, Theo, and Vince, to come together. Hopefully united they can overcome the evil spirits.
  9. I absolutely love this story but unfortunately you said it is a short one. I hope your comment regarding sequels applies to this one too.
  10. dboggs9700

    Chapter 13

    Don't feel bad, I missed it too until a couple weeks ago.
  11. Niran now appears to be seriously after Kent. I understand Pete and Kent not wanting to get Marvin involved but not knowing could put Marvin and Devon in danger. Niran seems the type to go after someone like Devon just to get what he wants from Kent.
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    Chapter 14

    Beautiful chapter seeing Patrick welcomed back into his family. Anxious to see where the rest of the weekend goes.
  13. Great ending and left rather open. The characters are so well developed. Hope you come back at a later point with a sequel.
  14. Beautifully written chapter that is really emotional. Jake is such a strong and fearless guy and has really held himself together. Hopefully meeting with Griff Junior will be a positive experience for Jake.
  15. dboggs9700

    Chapter 1

    Great chapter and I will probably binge read the rest of the story. I have no idea why I have not read any of your stories before @ChromedOutCortex.
  16. dboggs9700

    The Staying

    Very happy that Kent is following the doctor's orders with the prescriptions. Too bad he second guesses all of his feelings right now. Only time will tell. Did not mean to copy you Joseph, we must have been typing in comments at same time.
  17. dboggs9700

    Chapter 12

    You take way too much pride in your stories here to shortchange them.
  18. dboggs9700

    Chapter 12

    Great chapter. Seems Jesse has as much trust as possible in Hank, considering the situation. Just hope Jesse can hold himself together. Hope Hank does not let his emotions for Jesse cloud his judgement in keeping Jesse safe.
  19. dboggs9700

    Chapter 12

    Before I even read this, I have to say I am extremely happy you had a breakthrough and Pigsty is back.
  20. Not the type of story I typically read BUT it was actually a fun story.
  21. Jake is definitely a survivor. He did what he had to do to get through school and then get to Alaska. Hopefully things will improve for him over time and the next two chapters.
  22. dboggs9700

    Passionfruit

    Great feel-good story. Certainly does not hurt to have a ginger muscle bear in it.😉
  23. Good story.
  24. Disappointing his old band mates did not believe him at first about the audition. Very cool using the guitar and the ghost complimenting Fabian.
  25. Good story. Please keep posting.
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