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Really fun story. Loved the daughters' drama too. Was really nice to revisit those characters.
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I am starting to remember the characters after reading this chapter. Excited to see how you proceed.
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I really like the pace that I hope is leading to an unbelievably hot and passionate first time. Can't wait for next chapter now. Great wring as always Soren.
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Owen seems too calm right now and it scares me a little. Ryders apology was very touching and appropriate. Blowup coming......are they ready?
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At least Kent has Randy as a comrade for now.
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I just got caught up on the story, luckily in time for the poll. I am definitely for #TeamMarriedScot. Who doesn't love a green-eyed ginger? My guess is Lewis knocked her up, was forced to marry her, and has stayed for the money Catherine's daddy gives them. It doesn't sound like a great marriage anyway, so Harry possibly has a shot at a possible single Lewis. Great writing @Carl Accolla, love the characters.
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I was thinking Zane would emotionally harm Tag. But I would not put it past Zane having physical harm done to Tag. Rebecca seems to think Zane cannot touch the trust as it was written intentionally so he would have no control over it.
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I am finding this AI story more and more bland. The descriptions being given now remind me of a high schooler trying to sound prolific.
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Great chapter. Tag's trust could be used in so many ways. Maybe Tag will buy the Fleming Ranch himself as a home for he and Ash. Lots of possibilities. The real fear is what is Zane capable of doing to further hurt Tag?
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Chapter 29: The Truth That Buried Us
dboggs9700 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Truth That Buried Us
Don't celebrate yet. Do not assume Julian is in the clear until there is real evidence against Sofia. If Sebastien is rescued in time, he is the only person she has told the truth to. Twists and turns are what our author here is known for. Put nothing past Authur with the hatred he has always had for Julian, he may decide he can get the company if Julian is found guilty. -
I was hoping the vacation would calm them all down. Seems to have done the opposite. Will needs to calm down with Caroline. She could certainly upset Marie but also raise a lot of questions regarding Travis. Travis does not need allegations from Caroline on top of a probable Rehab stint in his near future.
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Looks like Johnny must really like Krakatoa since he suddenly called Violet to come over early. Charles Carrington was slightly mysterious when he presented the script to Johnny. Waiting to find out more about him. Loved the clothing Sam and Johnny chose for the restaurant, reminded me of the old Rat Pack. Great chapter, can't wait to see where you take things to next.
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I am really concerned for Owen. The parents are going to come down on him hard, and his tendency tends to be to accept anything his parents demand. This sounds like a situation where he needs to get advice, Beth, Jules, Margot, anyone to keep him calm and give him alternatives. Maybe Owen and Margot need to have a Sunday dinner with their parents to discuss things, not wait for the wedding reception.
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A Harlequin Romance approach.
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Sorry I am so late to the party @Laura S. Fox. Great, great story with a beautiful ending. Thank you so much for sharing this with us all.
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I had to laugh at this. Have you read any other @KKirk stories? He balances plot and very sex scenes well.
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Damn, I thought that was a tear free chapter, but you got us at the end @Mark Ponyboy Peters. Great chapter. I am hoping Casey will be the first 'good' Thompson.
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I feel so sorry for the sister having her reception possibly being turned into a battlefield. But the chances of one of them backing out is too great if they don't do it together with both families. I think Ryder will shock everyone, in a great way.
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It's hard seeing the twins getting ready to separate and knowing that things will never be the same between them. Their love for each other runs so deep.
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Actually, a concerning concept.
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First off, obviously AI has never read a single sex scene you have written. You would never write something so boring and bland. I grew up with all the western shows on TV. This story, leaving out the lame sex scene, reads like one of those old TV shows. The prompts it gave you sound like more old TV show scenes too. It does concern me about how much AI generated stories we might be reading and not even be aware of it.
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Your writing of the reunion was beautifully done @mastershakeme. So real and perfectly done as guys that age would be. I think Eric knows something serious is up with Owen but does not want to face it or confront Owen yet.
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I am enjoying the pace of the story. Slowly getting to know the three men and appreciating each of them individually. The friendship apparent now and building between them.
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Finally, Tag seems to trust Ash and Ash handles the situation with careful consideration and just lets things be. No explanations wanted or questions asked until Tag's ready. Impressed by Bert's tact in the discussion with Tag. Tag seems like he may have made a lasting impression on Bert too.
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Such an informative chapter @Vcs and great set up for going forward. I like the preparedness for the attackers and I am excited to see Mannly and Jake become closer.
