Dolores Esteban
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Thank you, comicfan
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The Gate My uncle had died two weeks ago and I was in charge of selling his house. I wished I could get away from the task. I had spent the Saturday morning investigating the empty house and I was on my way to the parking lot when I ran into a guy who was dressed all in white, with a rabbit design on his tee shirt that read Never late so always on time. I watched the guy dash down the street and vanish into a store called The Looking Glass. I followed him out of curiosity. I slipped as I cro
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Pay the Price Roll the dice, win a prize It will take you to heaven Don't reject paradise Take a piece of the pie So, take a slice Come on and enter Yes, roll the dice The woman entered the gambling hall, giving the man at the entrance a smile. The man looked after her, a wicked smile on his lips. When the night was over, she would have lost a fortune, provided she had a fortune to lose, which the croupiers, all professionals, would find out about in a little while. The man at the e
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Brian is a gambler, without a chance.
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I will take # 7 One Candle.
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Happy Birthday!
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Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
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I'm not a native speaker of English. I found the video Thorne provided sounded like American English, very authentic. Definitely not British English. All US American dialects sound pretty much the same to me, many consonants, barely vowels.
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Thanks for reading and leaving a review, comicfan. I'm happy you enjoyed the poem.
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Ron. I'm glad you liked the poem.
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Happy Birthday!
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Happy Birthday!
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Thanks, comicfan. Many prompts inspire my and I wish I had more time for answering them. I keep a word document and always copy and paste those I like.
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Rose Garden "I've found an object on PrimeLocation. It would perfectly fit out exclusive programme," Ethan said. He placed his notebook on Lucas' desk and opened it. When the notebook had finished booting, Ethan opened a bookmarked site. An image showed the mansion. "Thirty years old, built in Victorian style, completely renovated three years ago," Ethan said enthusiastically. Lucas looked at the image. The mansion looked indeed beautiful. Climbing red roses covered white walls. Lucas
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Thank you, joann.
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I like this story because it's a different take on the theme, both in style and subject. The story is serious and it reminds us of what is going on in many places in real life. It's a good story.
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Excellent story. It kept me on the edge of my seat. Very well done.
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A touching story, uplifting and sad at the same time. I thought the slow flow of the story was just right. I enjoyed your story and I'm glad you wrote a happy ending.
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Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, Ieshwar. I'm happy the poem worked for you and you enjoyed the piece.
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Thanks for reading and your encouraging review. I'm glad you liked the poem.
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Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm happy you liked the poem.
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A very good story. I really enjoyed it.
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Great story. I didn't see through it and was taken by surprise. I really enjoyed it.
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I absolutely loved your story. It totally drew me in. Very well written, beautiful imagery. Thank you.
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This was a fun read. I liked it.
