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  1. Dolores Esteban
    A very good intro again. I see another dark and mysterious story unfolding. I would definitely read it. I'm sure it would me keep on the edge of my seat.
  2. Dolores Esteban
    I liked this peom very much.
  3. Dolores Esteban
    The story was a bit slow in the beginning. But you managed to finally draw me in with the fight scene. The argument between Eric and Paul was very well written. I didn't have a clue of the split personality either until the end. I'm just wondering...Would Jordan really have greeted Eric with a smile?
  4. Dolores Esteban
    Your story points out the attitude we all often have towards other people. Not interested. Not my business. And yet, a brief encounter can sometimes make us think about what we have never thought before, if only about our lack of interest, out selfishness etc. Then again, the weather forecast can distract us from these thoughts... Good story. :
  5. Dolores Esteban
    There's so much hidden in this story. Hopefully, Daniel will find a way to cope with it all. I think the story was just the beginning. There are so many problems that Daniel will have to cope with as they unfold. Good story.
  6. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you so much for reading leaving a feedback. I'm glad you liked the story. The narrator feels that things have changed for the worse. But once you accept it, it is alright.
  7. Dolores Esteban

    Alright

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Alright

    Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm happy you liked the story.
  8. Dolores Esteban
    Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I'm glad you liked the story.
  9. Dolores Esteban
    Never mind! Don't bother figuring it out. It reflects my thoughts on an incident. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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    Alright

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Alright

    Thanks for reading and commenting. Yes, it's morose. Hope you liked it anyway
  11. Dolores Esteban
    Two lovers break up.
  12. Dolores Esteban

    Goodbye

    Dolores Esteban posted new chapter in Goodbye

    Goodbye byDolores Esteban We’ve never said goodbyeI feel lonely, empty, and lostWhose fault was that?Break-upSo sad. I feel guilty for itI kept my promise, thoughWe meet again and briefly nodMy smile is vagueI knowHow true. This is the final cutI follow my own pathThe bond is dissolved and the sadFate reconciledGoodbyeMay you do well, and best of luck © 2011 Dolores Esteban
  13. Dolores Esteban
    Things had changed definitely. I was asking myself why and when things had changed.
  14. Dolores Esteban

    Alright

    Dolores Esteban posted new chapter in Alright

    Alright byDolores Esteban People are strange when you're a stranger, Faces look ugly when you're alone Women seem wicked when you're unwanted, Streets are uneven when you're down, When you're strange Faces come out of the rain when you're strange No one remembers your name when you're strange When you're strange When you're strange (People Are Strange - The Doors) I was looking out of the window, asking mysel
  15. Dolores Esteban
    Congrats!
  16. Dolores Esteban
    Congrats!
  17. Dolores Esteban
    He had left his old life behind. At least, that was what he thought. He didn’t realize that his memories were just locked up in some dark chamber of his brain.
  18. Dolores Esteban
    Prisoner of the Past by Dolores Esteban He had left his old life behind many years ago. Jeremy T. Baker felt like an entirely different man now. His memories had faded away. At least, that was what he thought. He didn’t realize that his memories were just locked up in some dark chamber of his brain. Jeremy T. Baker did not know of this closet. There was just that vague and faint feeling of unease that sometimes and quite out of a sudden disturbed his peace and mind. Th
  19. Dolores Esteban
    Thanks for reading and leaving your feedback, CJames. Glad you liked the story.
  20. Dolores Esteban
    There's a very good site, helping writers to improve the first draft of their story. December was International Plot Writing Month. I followed the daily instructions to improve and work on the plot of my NaNoWriMo novel. They helped me a lot. There are plenty of useful instructions and tips on the site, also links to videos with more detailed explanations. 　 Plot Whisperer for Writers and Readers
  21. Dolores Esteban
    Happy New Year!
  22. Dolores Esteban
    This is a fascinating and emotionally touching tale, very well written and with beautiful images. The story drew me in quickly. I relate to Taral and I'm curious to read more. A very good beginning.
  23. Dolores Esteban
    No problem. It was a cute, little fish.
  24. Dolores Esteban
    I once dreamed I was a fish.
  25. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you very much for your comments. I truly appreciate your feedback.
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