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Thank you, Graeme. I think we all have moments that become turning points in our lives. Dorian's was at the convention. Now to see how he handles his new beginning (without his credit card. lol.) Ron
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I'm sure, Puppilull, that someone would disagree with it. We are talking politics.
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You're absolutely, right, droughtquake, but then the story wouldn't have been as interesting. I'll have to try the sesame salad dressing sometime.
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Thanks for the reply, spread_love. His spine may be a little wobbly still. haha.
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long1jo, since Dorian is over eighteen, he isn't entitled to a penny from his father.
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Hi Tylor. Taking a picture is not against the law unless he tries to blackmail someone with it.
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His coping skills may be immature, Timothy, but at least he's wanting to make a new start. That is a big step for Dorian, the doormat.
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“Would you stand still?” My mother admonished me as she attempted to straighten my tie. We were in a room backstage waiting for my father to conclude his speech before the convention. He had been speaking for twenty minutes before a packed arena. He was frequently interrupted with standing ovations. “My tie is fine,” I insisted as I walked over to a mirror and pulled it tighter to my neck. I wanted to dress more casual, but Leo had insisted that it would look more appropriate if I was dressed i
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We'll see next week, Puppilull, how it all turns out.
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Hi lon1jo. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I didn't time it this way, but it's ironic that Dorian may stand with his father next week at their convention the same time there is one going on in Cleveland.
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droughtquake, I think we can remove the 'kick me' doormat to one that will say 'don't tread on me.'
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Many of Dorian's fears, Graeme, in his discussion with Leo were alleviated somewhat.
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You know, skinnydragon, when I wrote this story, I was aware that Cheney had a lesbian daughter. When the dispute between Mary and her sister Liz erupted over same-sex marriage, it was obvious that the Cheney's are as dysfunctional as the Gale family.
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I nervously climbed into the backseat of the car. Leo got in and sat down beside me. I wasn’t afraid of Leo. Actually, he had been like an uncle to me since I was a little boy. He was Dad’s campaign manager when he first ran for the Senate. Leo was a regular visitor to our house, and he and his wife often ate dinner with us. When I was little, I ate at the dining table with them. As I grew older, I ate alone in the kitchen with the cook. As soon as the car pulled off, he asked me, “How is schoo
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You're absolutely right, Stephen. I'm surprised no one else caught it. I did leave out a complete scene at the end of chapter 14. Thanks!
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A lot of trouble brewing again in Daleville. A guy like Erik can be dangerous when he feels he's lost control. Fingers crossed it ends without more bruises. A very tense chapter. -
Thank you, Graeme. You got it. I'm trying to be realistic in Dorian's search for himself. Sometimes it is a slow and difficult journey.
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Ouch, droughtquake. Things will soon change. Dorian is going to start down a new road toward becoming a man and finding freedom from his past.
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“No!” I screamed as Raleigh lifted me off the ground. “Leave me alone!” “Shut up!” he yelled as he pulled me into the shower area. “You think you’re too good for us. We’ll show you.” He then turned to Travis. “Let’s pants him!” “NO!” I tried to wiggle out of his arms, but he was too strong. I kicked at Travis when he started to unfasten my jeans. “Stop it!” I screamed. “Help!” “Stop struggling!” Raleigh shouted as he put his arms around me so Travis could remove my jeans. With one yank, my lo
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Week Four Sunday September 28, 2014 Unfulfilled Dreams
Ronyx commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Week Four Sunday September 28, 2014 Unfulfilled Dreams
There are no words to explain the intense feelings this chapter produced. Ron -
Thanks for the review, long1jo. Humor is needed to break up the drama, and Dorian's life is certainly filled with drama.
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Great idea, droughtquake. Maybe I'll name a character Little Rock someday.
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Dorian is an innocent. He's never experienced life and its difficulties. So finding balance is going to be difficult for him.
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Seth is becoming a good friend. Perhaps, it was a bad move to provide beer to Dorian, but he did it to try and get him to open up, not get him drunk (and not like Jerry would have done- take advantage of him.)
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When I wrote this story, I checked about the Secret Service. They only provide protection for the nominee and his wife, not the children or other family members.
