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    Chapter 11

    Palantir commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Great to hear. This story was my first attempt at featuring humour. At my school there was no pool and swimming was for the few odd-bods prepared to ride their push-bikes a couple of kilometers to the beach.
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    Chapter 6

    Palantir commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Lol - a fine state of affairs.
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    Chapter 5

    Palantir commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Hmm! Curious. Thanks for pointing that out - now fixed.
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    Chapter 4

    Palantir commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Thank you. I hope your enjoyment continues.
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    All the best for the move.
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    tilting
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    crows
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    feeder
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    I'm almost finished a re-read of the Modesty Blaise series by Peter O'Donnell. - wonderfully addictive action thrillers by an author I class as a master storyteller.
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    Chapter 22

    Palantir commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 22

    Hi MrWill, I wanted to PM you but discovered I can't. The 'rural Ohio' is Columbus Guy's post, not mine. I've lived in Aus all my life (not as extensive as yours but getting there ). Australian writing conventions are closer to British than American but there are still differences. I'm enjoying your language and meaning insights. Keep'm going, please
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    Chapter 20

    Palantir commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 20

    Definitely a spelling error - thanks for pointing it out. Fixed now.
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    Chapter 18

    Palantir commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 18

    Thank you @Will Hawkins, That's great to hear. I decided at the start of my writing to use my own 'voice' and not regretted it since. Lol - I like to think of them as 'Australian-isms'.
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    magnetic
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    Chapter 1

    Palantir commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Yep! Time will tell!
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    blind
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    killer
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    blathers
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    by
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    mat
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    lick
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    roger
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    happy
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    chest
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    Unknowns like that are soul eaters and I wish you all the best in fighting them.
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    wagons
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